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Naomi opened her eyes, but then they closed again as she drifted off again. She felt safe though.

"Having in her brain you must have felt the way she thought. Use that as an advantage."Sam said.

Naomi smelt Dean and smiled softly. Her body was weak and her mind was too.

"You just have to work on it this weekend." Sam said.

Naomi moved her limo body into Dean some still feeling stiff and hadn't open her eyesm

Sam paused some. "Listen everything will be okay." Sam said."You have to believe that."

Naomi felt a rush of air return to her body. She forced herself in there, but she laid there not moving. She was still really cold.

"Wyatt I know you're scared, but she is fine." Sam whispered.

Naomi didn't know how to go back to her body. She wanted to go back.

"Dean do CPR that will make things easier." He managed to get her cold body to Dean.

Naomi felt a spark when her body touched Dean. She prayed this will work.

Naomi looked around at everything that was happening then it stopped she felt herself fade away. Were they too late? Why didn't it work?


Sam sighed as her body stopped breathing he wasn't sure how Dean was going to handle it.


She saw herself looking at them, but no one was there to collect her which meant there was still time.

"Please let me in." Naomi said afraid. "I love you. I don't want to die. I want us to be sisters instead of at our throats all the time."

Sam eyed them. "Dean you might want to pull over."

"Then how come you push me away? I know you're afraid, but I don't want to lose you." Naomi whispered softly she felt herself fading. "Wyatt what's happening ?!." She asked panicked.

Naomi backed away some more. She didn't know what to say. She was a dead girl and she didn't really care. "You don't want to try to work things out. When you do shout for me it's not like I can go anywhere." Naomi said being quite.

Her body paled and grew cold.

"I do act like it. I been doing really well this past month. I been trying hard to make it up to you and you just push it off. I wouldn't hurt you. I love you. Today was a simple thought of anger gone wrong." She whispered.

"I'm trying I really am and you and Dean. Probably everyone else don't see it. And that hurts me a lot." Naomi whispered.

"I know you're sorry, but how come you don't act like it?"Naomi asked.

"Wyatt I'm not stupid." Naomi said. "You just want me gone. I can't believe. I'm the one accused for not trying you're doing that right now."

"You guys have to work out your problems first" Sam said. "Until then you are stuck with each other."

Naomi sighed."Wyatt I said I do. Why are you acting like I'm not trying?" She asked.

"Do you think I want this? I didn't mean for any of this to happen. How are we supposed to get me back?" She asked. "I can't even feel my body." She whispered.

"If you guys don't make things up and quick Naomi will die." Sam said.

Naomi was about to answer when she felt her eyes glazed over she could feel what Dean was thinking and it was like she projected a movie clip in Wyatt's brain. "I don't want to cause harm. I want my sister to try." She shouted at Dean, but he couldn't hear her. "Please don't tell Dean I am trying I been trying so hard. It just seems like you aren't trying."


Sam didn't want to get into it.

Naomi nodded weakly backing away some not leaving, but enough to go unnoticed. Tears ran down her face. "I don't know how or I would." She whispered softly. "Maybe I will die one less thing for you have to be afraid of."

Sam called Bobby and explained what happened. "So basically what Bobby said was the longer she is away the less likely Naomi will be okay. He also said you are the only who can help her get back. You too have to work together."

Naomi jumped back some in her head. "I don't know how. All I wanted was for you to feel all the pain and hurt you caused me when you push me away. You don't try hard enough." Naomi said.

Sam looked back at Naomi's body. "Dean she doesn't look to good."

Sam nodded his head quickly. "They are both on my nerves." He said.

Naomi looked around wherever she was. It seemed like her mind was somewhere else and her body was in the car. She freaked out a bit. "Daddy?" She shouted hoping maybe he would hear her she knew no one else would. Not realizing she linked her and Wyatt together meaning Wyatt was the only one who could hear her and ultimately be the only one who can help her.

Naomi was a monster she couldn't be trusted. She was truly afraid of what she would do. She wanted to hurt her again. "Wyatt you can't understand what I feel unless if you feel it yourself." She used the last of her energy to push everything she felt in the past 6 months on to her sister before she passed out. All she could see was black maybe she was dead.