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Sam looked at wondering if he did something wrong. "Okay."

((Yeah that would be interesting. Maybe this friend liked her and is angry at Sam?))


Naomi was in a lot of pain. She had to open her eyes. Dean and her happy family made her smiled.

"In all seriousness do you have a plan?" Sam said looking at her.


Naomi winced again. She could give up right now and nothing would go wrong for her again, but then she would leave Dean.

Sam smiled softly and chuckled. "Very funny." He said rolling his eyes.

There wasn't much of pulse, but it was still there. Everything was up to her now she had to fight. "She has to fight " Cas said to them.

"Great." Sam said with a smile. "Any ideas?" He asked looking at her. Another thing was thrown above their heads.


"In the bathroom with Seb." Cas said.

Lucifer snapped his fingers. Figuring she suffered enough. Naomi laid unconscious. She winced as her dad touched her back.

All of the sudden something was thrown at them. He immediately pushed them on the ground. "Got the salt?"


Naomi smiled weakly. She believed every word he said. She could picture it right now the perfect life with man of her dreams. She was about to kiss him back then he was gone. Her body shivered and curled into her father for warmth.


"Lucifer did something and I can't do anything about it." Cas said. "I'm sorry."

Sam smiled softly at her. "Okay." He said.


Naomi looked up at him. "I want something happy." She whispered weakly her breaths were becoming shallow from the blood lost. If the blood didn't stop soon she would bleed ro death.


"I can't heal her." Cas said. "It keeps bleeding no matter what." He walked over to Dean shaking him. If he she died while he was in their he would be trap in her mind.

"Afraid?" Sam asked chuckling softly.

Naomi looked at him. "I'm not sure how to." She looked at him weakly. Her whole body was exhausted physically and mentally. "Dean can you give me a good dream?"

Sam knew this place was very haunted. He hoped something would happen..

Naomi looked at him. "This real though he was hurting me over and ovrr again and so was those demons." She said softly and weakly. She shivered some the water was really cold. "I want to have a good dream for once."

Sam smiled some.

"I'm sorry for saying that." She whispered. "I have to obey him or he will hurt me again." Naomi said. She felt something cold rush on her back. "I'm cold Dean."

Cas nodded.

Sam took her hand and walked in the building.


"Now promise you won't disobey me again. You will find away to do what I say." Lucifer said. He knew his plan to break her was working.

She looked up at Dean her eyes were glazed over with tears. She needed to say it or he would keep hitting her. Since she wasn't answering he kept hitting her hard. "I-----i promise to obey master." Lucifer smiled and left. Her body slumped over in the chains. She hoped Dean would save her.

Cas opened the bathroom door.

He smiled and led her to and old building. That looked haunted on the outside
"This the most haunted building here." Sam said.

Naomi saw that he was still there. She screamed in pain. He hit her harder than all the other times. She looked up like she was dying.


Cas ran a cold bath. "If you want to put her in the cold bath that will numb the pain on her back." He said.

"Ready for the fun?" Sam asked.


Naomi looked at Dean he looked like he was fading away. Tears stung in her face from the pain and from the fading image. "See your boyfriend will always leave you." Lucifer whispered into her ear as he hit her again. Naomi hated to admit it, but she believed him.

"Okay let's hope Dean stays in their because she will need all the help she can get." Cas said.

Sam stopped and turned to the oldest part where there was run down buildings. "Here we are."

Naomi smiled softly. "Thank you." Sometimes she realized these were dreams other times it was more of reality. Her eyes wandered to Lucifer standing there.

"Dean nice of you to join your girlfriend's next punishment." Naomi was soon away from Dean and in cage near him. He whipped her with a loud crackle noise rang in the building. "This is actually going to hurt her in reality. Aren't I nice."

Cas notice the Naomi bleeding. "Seb do you know of way to make it stop? It's coming to fast for me to heal."

"Follow me." He led her down one alley way that led to another and soon the light of day. "We are almost to the best part for Ghost hunting." The buildings went from New to very old quickly.

"Dean my back." She whispered her back was bleeding. "This is real. I'm reliving it then I'm going to relive something else over and over again."

"No problem." He said and led her out of the shop.


"Dean my back." She whispered softly.

Sam smiled. "I thought you never asked." Sam said paying for the meal.


The demon tugged the whip hard but it fell out of his hands. Naomi didn't even know what happened.

Sam nodded hoping he didn't ruin anything.


Naomi looked up to see Dean and smiled faintly as they hit her again.

"Oh I'm sorry." Sam said.


Naomi heard someone she thought it was Dean, but no one ever ended in her dreams unless if it was meant as nightmare. Sometimes she thought this was why she couldn't move on because she tortured herself with the past. She screamed again pain.

"It's okay if you don't want to talk about it." Sam said.

Naomi screamed. They laughed at her and hit her harder.

"Yeah." Sam said.


"Please no." She whispered. "Dean will find you and he will kill you." This was so fresh in her mind.