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Naomi looked down. "Dean I still don't trust you. I know its been only a month and most of it is because I relive everything bad over and over again at night. I don't want to do that anymore. I want to have a good dream." She whispered. "I'm so afraid you are going to hurt me again. I don't want to live this way any more. I can't help myself I tried multiple times and I always land in this position feeling and hurting worse than before." She walked over to him and sat on his lap. "Dean please help me before I lose you."

"Wyatt you aren't leaving at this time a night. Lucifer wants you alone. Besides that Naomi found out that you covered for your dad and think he is going to leave. I want you to stay safe in here and go talk to your dad." Sam said softly.

Naomi looked at him and place by her on the bed. "Why didn't you sit by me?" She asked softly. Naomi looked down. "I'm trying so hard to correct everything and get better, but I can't seem to do that."


Sam sighed not wanting to mention her sister probably needed her right now.

"He's leaving." She whispered. "He has much hope in me as any of you. I know you believed what Sam said." Naomi said. "Am I really that screwed up?"


Sam saw Wyatt and looked down.

Naomi looked at her dad. "Why aren't you helping or trying to help. You just stand there like a stranger. Maybe that's for the better." She said.

Sam sighed some. He sat on a couch in the lobby.

Part of her believed that he wasn't coming back. "I need Dean right now before I have a break down."

Sam kept walking not wanting to deal with Wyatt.

Naomi sighed. "You could have just said you were leaving." The knife drop to the ground.

"She's like this every day Dean. I know you love her, but she needs help." Sam said and walked back to the hotel.

"You don't want to help because you will leave." Naomi said. "Maybe take Wyatt with you too. She's a lot happier with you."

"Do you really love her?" He asked. "Because sometimes you act like your not there. I'm tired of talking about your relationship problem with the broken girl."he said. "I'm just tired of her that's all."

Naomi looked at him. "Why do that when I can kill the one person who means the world to you. My sister. Your real daughter. The one who isn't the abomination on Earth." She said. "My father said I needed to stop thinking about what you said that night. Stop believing it, but for some reason I can't because I will always look for you approval. I don't need help from you. I need Dean right now." She whimpered.

"I meant what I said." Sam said. "I honestly did who cares the way I said. You don't try hard enough with her. You expect her to get better quick. She's afraid of saying something and you leaving. I'm sorry, but you signed up for that. I thought you would have dumped her by now."

"Is that the best you got, because I don't like that answer. I looked up to you. You were my hero and I was so very wrong about you. Then maybe should begin to understand how bad everyone ever made me feel."

"You know I'm right." Sam said he felt like something was lifted. He can't believed he said all those things. "I still firmly believe that is my outlook on things." He knew what happened. He knew they also made him say the things he would never have the guts to say.

Naomi took a deep breath trying her best to stay calm. She rose a knife mentally with her mind. "Tell me why I shouldn't drive this into your heart right now?" She asked. "It better be a good reason because I'm honestly think you should have died instead of mom."


"You're lying to yourself. I think maybe you don't want to help her or maybe you think she can't be fix. You got yourself an attention hog too. That's a great combo. Maybe if you actually cared about her you would find away to help her and wouldn't take no for answer." Sam smirked. "But just between me and you. She's way too broken and messed up. She has some major trust issues well that's not her fault there."

Naomi looked down. "See even you don't want to help. Neither does Dean, my real dad, Wyatt, no one wants to help. And that's my fault. No one understands the fact that I'm trying to get better." She whispered.

"Why are you coming back here?" He asked. "I don't believe you should have a girlfriend who is crazy." Sam said. "You don't care or you would help her. When you love someone you go to any limits to help them and you haven't done that."

"Can't answer me?" Naomi snapped. "No because all you are is a coward." She hoped Dean would back. "And by the way Dean believed every word Sam said."

Sam stopped and smiled coldly. "Oh and Dean congratulations for dating Princess Crazy." He shouted back. Some of the ghosts including Nix attached themselves to Sam.

"No I didn't I needed you I even called you before this happened. I called you right after Dean broke up with me. You told me you didn't have time for a mistake of a daughter. You didn't let me even talk to mom. " she said. "How is that my fault? Family isn't suppose to abandoned you like you did."

Sam didn't want to talk to Dean.

"Stop okay. I don't like Naomi and neither should you." Sam said as he kept walking.

"I was a happy kid. I was excited to go to school. Then you basically disowned me. You hurt me really bad. I looked up to you and I believed everything you said. You made me this way." Naomi said. "If you would have just let me back I may have not drink or cut my sorrows away"

"You obviously don't care about her or you would help her." He walked out of the building ever since he left the haunted building he felt weird.



"You lied saying she got my letters. All you done to me is lie." Naomi said. "You made me this way."

"She's stuck in the past and hasn't moved on. You aren't the only one who is getting annoyed by. She needs help because she thinks she does no wrong. I don't want my brother having a future with the mayor of crazy town." Sam paused. "Nothing is wrong"

"Are you acting like I don't care?" She asked. "Because for the past 6 months all I have been doing is trying to get my sister back, but obviously you brained washed her too much. Real fathers don't do that." Naomi said.

Sam sighed. "Someone had to tell her."

Naomi looked as Dean left did he really think that too? "Is it true? I love my sister and to find out that she despised me crushed me." Naomi was hurting everything was falling apart. "Tell me if this is true." She snapped. "You can leave and tell Dean he can leave too. You all can leave." She paused. "At least I had a real father who would tell me the truth." She curled into a ball. Naomi knew she probably needed help, but she didn't want to admit that.

"You know what's your problem Naomi, is that all you care about is yourself. You expect everyone to bow at your problems." Sam said he was sick of hearing her complain and start fights about everything. "You are never happy and ever since we meant you been like this. Honestly it's pathetic and childish and you really need to grow up. News flash not everyone is stuck in the past like. Oh and p.s Wyatt lied earlier to cover up for him so he could rebuild your relationship." Sam got up and went out of the room. He didn't mean to be harsh, but no one else was telling her that.


Naomi looked down crushed and hurt. "Do you all really think that?" She asked softly. "And did Wyatt really cover up for you dad?" She asked softly. Tears were coming down her face she felt awful about herself.

Sam sat in a chair thinking about everything.


"Then why did you say you were and I wasn't allowed to go?" She asked. "You had 5 years to make things better why all of the sudden are you acting to care?"

Sam got impatient and decided to go to the room. He walked in not wanting to talk.

"Talked to me sooner? You have 5 years to talk to me and make things right. You wouldn't let me come to my own mother's funeral." Naomi said softly. "You keep saying you want to fix things, but why now?"