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Tessa Gray (TID) 59
Sydney Sage (VA) 28
Isabelle Lightwood (TMI) 52
Rose Hathaway (VA) 48

Tessa Gray (TID) 54
Sydney Sage (VA) 29
Isabelle Lightwood (TMI) 56
Rose Hathaway (VA) 51

Indie was a really suspicious character. I didn't know what to make of her.
I swear nothing happened in this book. I gave a 5 minute summary of it to my friend, who hadn't read it yet, and with that information she was able to go onto Reached without any problems.
There were some great opportunities for conflict and excitement, I thought, but none of them happened.
Switching POVs is okay, but only if the author shows that the two characters think differently. Cassia and Ky both spent like 5 paragraphs describing the color of the leaves at one point.


xD I agree with you on that point.


Tessa Gray (TID) 53
Sydney Sage (VA) 30
Isabelle Lightwood (TMI) 55
Rose Hathaway (VA) 50

Tessa Gray (TID) 53
Sydney Sage (VA) 32
Isabelle Lightwood (TMI) 54
Rose Hathaway (VA) 49