one more month...

Happy New Year, all!

So, only one more month to the hardcover release of Gentleman Jole and the Red Queen. My author's copies of the actual printed book have arrived -- still a thrill even after all these years and books. They look very clean, although I'm sure I'll open it to some random page or another and spot that last elusive typo that escaped all nets. Anyway, the die is cast, the print run is set, etc. etc., and the copies are all ready to start wending their way through the book distribution system.

One year ago, I was just coming to grips with Chapter Fourteen. Huh.

Here's a scan of the Real Thing. Baen has done their usual trick of foiling the art; very pretty from some angles, goes black at others, looks weird on a scan.


and the back:



The previews of reader-response from the eARC release have been, hm, interesting. I expected them to be all over the map, and they are (as they always are, for every book, so that's a sucker-bet.) Different pools of readers seem to have curiously different profiles of positive and negative responses. Trained reader-expectations for some species of action-adventure seem to be interfering the most with taking in the book as it is on first reading. Those readers who speed through the book waiting for the ninjas to burst through the windows and the physical violence to commence for "the story to start" will still be waiting when they shoot off the end, having missed the actual story that was being laid in front of them, and risk being artificially nonplussed.

To reiterate: not an action-adventure, not a political thriller, not a mystery, not YA, not a dystopia, not grimdark. It contains a romance as a major subplot, but (as revealed by the structure and sequencing) that is not the main plot, which is, in fact, SF-nal. "Character study" is not an unfair summation, but characters in the context of technologically driven social changes in their world.

Although I DO WISH old readers would stop telling new ones that they have to read umpty-ump other books before this one. If I've done my job as I hope, they don't.

When writing, I have always to keep in mind those readers who will be picking up this book as their first Bujold or first Vorkosiverse -- the story must be minimally complete in this kit. This is a harder and harder hat trick to pull off as a series advances. The choices are to stuff in wodges of recap, to leave new readers to sink, or to turn away from stories heavily dependent on what went before. This being the only story I seemed to want to tell, the last was not an option.

I hope a new reader will get a complete read; it's even possible that a new reader will get a better reading, as they won't be arguing with the text in their head so much, but rather, attending to the story in front of them, but I have not seen a review from that quadrant yet. I'm very curious about that, although, of course, such readers will be all over the map as well; it'll just be a different map.

Baen plans their e-book release of the finished edition for January 16th. (The eARC will go off-sale at that point.)

Ta, L.
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message 1: by Christianne (new)

Christianne Swearson We just wish everyone would read the umpty-ump other titles so they can share the fun! Looking forward to the new book! Chris


message 2: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper Can't wait for this one :)


message 3: by Johan-Kristian (new)

Johan-Kristian Wold Looking forward to get it in e-book format...
I'd love to have it in hard cover, but alas, the bookshelves at home are way past overflowing, and my SO demands her share of shelfspace too, so I need to economize on space...


message 4: by Carol (new)

Carol I started with Mirror Dance, and - sorry - I was somewhat lost. So I suggest that Brothers in Arms should be read before that one. That's the only one where I think a prerequisite is essential. Probably nice to read Komarr before Civil Campaign, also. But I do like to recommend the whole series - that's what prompted me to start reading them, a coworker told me that he thought I'd like the Vorkosigan Saga.


message 5: by Heather (new)

Heather Simon Generally you do just fine with not absolutely requiring folks to read previous books in the series, but I will still recommend folks read "in order" if they're new, if only because there's so much wonderful story to be had. On the other hand, I'm extremely excited for this book because the last few installations in the series have been off-the-charts wonderful.


message 6: by Fred (new)

Fred Zimmerman I have to say that I was one of the pool of readers who really hated this book (most unusually, as I've loved almost everything you've done). It wasn't so much the lack of action as the major retconning of central relationships. That's a sore spot for me. the book is successful and thoughtful as defined, "characters in the context of technologically driven social changes in their world." In that sense, this might be a good *introductory* book to the series. Start at the end then look back at how everyone got here!


message 7: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Carol wrote: "I started with Mirror Dance, and - sorry - I was somewhat lost. So I suggest that Brothers in Arms should be read before that one. That's the only one where I think a prerequisite is essential. Pro..."


I agree, Brothers in Arms and Mirror Dance, and Komarr and A Civil Campaign, are very much diptychs. And there is always the spoiler issue to be considered.

On the other hand, if it's a choice between "read this book out of order" or "put it back on the shelf, drift away, and never get back to the series at all", I'd vote for the first.

Ta, L.


message 8: by Carol (new)

Carol Indeed. The second book I tried was Memory = still my all-time favorite, and what got me hooked on the whole series.


message 9: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Fred wrote: "I have to say that I was one of the pool of readers who really hated this book (most unusually, as I've loved almost everything you've done). It wasn't so much the lack of action as the major retco..."

I admit I have a lot of trouble thinking of it as a retcon, because it's been floating around in my head (but not in Miles's) in parts since 1989, and was mostly in place by the mid-1990s. But those relationships weren't what the prior books were about, and then there was that long hiatus in the mid-00s where I did not think I would get back to the Vorkosiverse at all. But, readings. Every one is a unique combination of reader and text, and the writer only controls one-half of the ingredients.

Ta, L..


message 10: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Johan-Kristian wrote: "Looking forward to get it in e-book format...
I'd love to have it in hard cover, but alas, the bookshelves at home are way past overflowing, and my SO demands her share of shelfspace too, so I nee..."


E-sales are good, too.

:-), L.


message 11: by Beth (new)

Beth I loved this book, especially because Cordelia has always been my first love, and this gave her a chance to pick up some dreams she had put on the shelf because of how her life worked out so far.


message 12: by Fred (new)

Fred Zimmerman Yes - everyone brings baggage -- I was very happy with Miles's perspective on things. The situation that ultimately required his rethink was reminiscent of some bad experiences in my family of origin, so that was not pleasant for me. Probably more important, though, that I am just one of the people who likes things to stick a bit closer to space opera. I'm still hoping for the Miles saves the Nexus novel.


message 13: by Taraza (new)

Taraza My first book was Mirror Dance, probably the most confusing book to start with, but it was the only one of the series the library had. I always have a soft spot for Mark; for awhile I thought the series would continue with both Miles and Mark. I say pick up a series when you can, and don't hesitate if it's in media res.
I've only read the first four chapters of GJARQ, and am looking forward to the rest.


message 14: by Rotem (new)

Rotem Gorodeisky Happy new year.
I'm just reading the e-arc couldn't wait for release start new job tomorrow
I love it. I love Oliver and Cordelia as amazing as always
I now really want a short story of young general pioter courting princess Olivia and having to deal with her Betan mother


message 15: by Col (new)

Col Kay i've been here since the Warrior's Apprentice and have found the trip More than Worthwhile.

Thank-you Mam

I'd add a chunk of coal for first footing but its stuck in my keyboard.


message 16: by Hélène (new)

Hélène Louise "not an action-adventure, not (...) "Character study" is not an unfair summation, but characters in the context of technologically driven social changes in their world."
Yum, it's seems the exact book for me!
I love the way you make your characters alive and interesting, in all your books, and haven't any other expectations... so I'm just very excited about my soon-to-be own copy!
Thanks so much to treat us with your writing :) and a really happy new year to you (a lot of satisfaction, very few vexation ^-^)


message 17: by Susan (new)

Susan The new book is pre-ordered on Amazon. But right now I am getting the eARC via a librarian site (of all the perks of librarianship, free previews are the best) so I have a good start on my happy new year! Thanks, Lois!


message 18: by Nongingercat (new)

Nongingercat I have yet to meet one of your books that I haven't loved, and I am very much looking forward to this one. Happy New Year!


message 19: by CY (new)

CY Sorry, not a virgin newbie reader, so can't fulfil your wish for that p.o.v. but a long time fan. I got the e-ARC as a treat, and of course will get the hardcover so it can join your other books on my shelf. Prior to this, I had sort of come to the conclusion your readers tend to split between certain lines in terms of what they like among your works: sci-fi vs fantasy; within Vorkosiverse: action vs character-driven (there are of course those who love 'em all, but that seems rare, I certainly have my preferences). But the response to this particular book seems to depend a bit more on readers' personal points of views regarding monogamous relationships (or even single-sex relationships) - I get a sense some people are horror-struck that the Aral/Cordelia relationship wasn't this ideal they had in their minds (sort of like how I would perhaps have expected a child to react when they find out their parents were human after all). I always enjoyed that Aral and Cordelia were almost super-human in the books where Miles had the main storylines (perhaps reflecting his view of them) whereas in the books starring Cordelia, she was very human and full of doubts of herself. Likewise with Ekatarin and how people perceive her as so reserved, and we know the whole seething gamut of her emotions from the books about her. I always loved that about the series - that it has this sort of meta-awareness of perceptions of truth rather than absolute truth.


message 20: by Lois (last edited Jan 03, 2016 07:55AM) (new)

Lois Bujold Chen-yen wrote: "Sorry, not a virgin newbie reader, so can't fulfil your wish for that p.o.v. but a long time fan. I got the e-ARC as a treat, and of course will get the hardcover so it can join your other books on..."

Yes, absolutely; changing viewpoint recenters the entire universe. Of all the choices I make, when starting writing a story, "Whose viewpoint?" has the most impact on everything.

"...I get a sense some people are horror-struck that the Aral/Cordelia relationship wasn't this ideal they had in their minds (sort of like how I would perhaps have expected a child to react when they find out their parents were human after all). "

It was my editor who pointed out that one of Miles's roles in the tale was to act as a sort of psychological stand-in for that experience for those readers, which I thought was a very shrewd observation.

Btw, when the book comes out (again -- it really is going to feel like Groundhog Day) I plan to set up a fresh spoiler thread for discussion.

Ta, L.


message 21: by ShoSho (new)

ShoSho I just pre-ordered Gentleman Jole and the Red Queen by Lois McMaster Bujold on audible! I can't tell you how excited I am!
**Happy Dance**


message 22: by CY (new)

CY Lois wrote: "I plan to set up a fresh spoiler thread for discussion."

Eeep, I hope I didn't spoil anything for anyone, I wasn't thinking! (I don't write many reviews) Feel free to delete spoiler parts from my post or the whole thing by all means.

In response: I think that is why I loved the Mark books, it was such a fresh perspective on ... just about everyone, but most of all Aral and Cordelia. And he brought out different aspects of them (and Miles).

And what you did in Komarr ... I don't even know that people really noticed you managed to tell us a story written from the p.o.v. of a woman undergoing the death throes of her relationship ... not something you normally find in a sci-fi series.

Anyway, please do get into the head of many many more of your characters! :)


message 23: by Paul (new)

Paul Keelan The only way I would like this more is if I'd explicitly sailed that particular ship. I would have if the option had occurred to but being in Miles' head for the key appearances left me with blind spots.


message 24: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Chen-yen wrote: "Lois wrote: "I plan to set up a fresh spoiler thread for discussion."

Eeep, I hope I didn't spoil anything for anyone, I wasn't thinking!


I don't think so; at least no more than the jacket flap does.

And what you did in Komarr ... I don't even know that people really noticed you managed to tell us a story written from the p.o.v. of a woman undergoing the death throes of her relationship ... not something you normally find in a sci-fi series.

Judging from my fan mail on that one, every woman who had ever undergone a similar experience noticed. There were a lot more than I would have anticipated.

Ta, L.


message 25: by Ruth (new)

Ruth West Nongingercat wrote: "I have yet to meet one of your books that I haven't loved, and I am very much looking forward to this one. Happy New Year!"
Yes, yes, and yes!


message 26: by Tracey (new)

Tracey Meek I confess that I was one of the trained readers who read the book waiting for the action to start. I couldn't just relax and enjoy the book. I kept bracing for action. How will Cordelia smack Plas-Dan? When is someone going to steal that ship? Are the Kayburg loyalists planning a coup? Will there be a natural disaster? Then I ran out of book and nothing had happened! Felt a bit like Wile E Coyote running off a cliff...

I flashed on the Author's Afterword from Vor Game, where you lamented having to fill the culvert package with :: cookies :: to get readers to shut up about it, laughed at myself, and went right back to page 1 and read it again. Thoroughly enjoyed it the second time through and it's now a favorite.

Thank you for the lovely Christmas present!


message 27: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Tracey wrote: "I confess that I was one of the trained readers who read the book waiting for the action to start. I couldn't just relax and enjoy the book. I kept bracing for action. How will Cordelia smack Plas-..."


I'm so glad you were able to enjoy the book more on the second, less distracted pass. Very reassuring.

If you look at where everyone is at the start of the book, and compare it to where everyone is at the end, I maintain that one may see that quite a bit has changed, and profoundly, too; thus, plot must have occurred, if not an expected plot. But any more comments belong in a spoiler thread, methinks...

Ta, L.


message 28: by Suelibevg (new)

Suelibevg I'm a long time fan and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Cordelia has been a favorite character. It does have the unexpected twists and turns, no spoilers. Those were most enjoyable and for some reason, Jole reminded me of Ivan. His sense of humor, maybe. I was also wonderful to revisit Miles. How he has grown, quite nicely rounded as a character, I must say.


message 29: by K (last edited Jan 07, 2016 09:47AM) (new)

K Sorry if this has been asked/answered, but how do you pronounce "Jole"? Is it like Joel? Or Joe-lay? Or more a more hispanic Hole-ay? or is the J completely silent for a cheery-sounding Olé ! :)


message 30: by Lois (new)

Lois Bujold Katie wrote: "Sorry if this has been asked/answered, but how do you pronounce "Jole"? Is it like Joel? Or Joe-lay? Or more a more hispanic Hole-ay? or is the J completely silent for a cheery-sounding Olé ! :)"


Jole rhymes with prole (or vole), one syllable. J as in justice. (So, I suppose like Joel, but not as much diphthong.)

(To add to the confusion of Js, some language groups pronounce them like Y or Yu. But not here.)

Ta, L.


message 31: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie Chen-yen wrote: "Sorry, not a virgin newbie reader, so can't fulfil your wish for that p.o.v. but a long time fan. I got the e-ARC as a treat, and of course will get the hardcover so it can join your other books on..."

I think you are correct that readers tend to polarize on science fiction vs fantasy and action vs. character driven. I am definitely more interested in science fiction and read a limited amount of fantasy. But, I also think that people who have been reading science fiction for a very long time are more likely to read both action and character, maybe because our choices were more limited 45 years ago. On the other end, I introduced my daughter to science fiction when she was young and she raided my bookshelves (and still does), yet she ended up reading an equal amount of fantasy and sci fi. I also think the genres themselves have become less polarized and there is more crossover as I find myself reading books that I am not sure which category they belong in.


message 32: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie I have had my hardcover pre-order in with Amazon for a while and upon receipt will ignore the rest of the world while I read Gentlemen Jole and the Red Queen in its entirety. Until then, I don't want spoilers and don't like piecemeal reading and ignore reviews. Returning to the Vorkosigan saga is like returning to a favorite summer vacation spot. I don't particularly care if action, character, or world driven, though the balance and interaction of all three has always been my ideal. My daughter (who has stolen my whole Miles series) has her copy on order too.


message 33: by CatBookMom (last edited Jan 09, 2016 07:05PM) (new)

CatBookMom E-book is pre-ordered, as is the signed hardcover (for my collection) and the audiobook. I expect I'll sit down on Jan 16 and read the ebook and anxiously await the audio version, as read by our Grover Gardner.

I've read the 4 sample chapters, goggled a bit, and am ready for the whole thing, wherever you take me, in whatever fashion. It's been a long time since there was a focus on Cordelia, though I still re-read or listen to the "Cordelia's Honor" duo every year.

I'm thinking of this as a combination Winterfair and birthday present (b'day in Feb). Thank you!


message 34: by Mage (new)

Mage Bailey Can hardly wait,


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