Writer's Digest Judge's Commentary & Ranking of "The Oath"

23rd Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards




Entry Title The Crest of The BEAST~Book I, The Oath
Author: C.A. CLARK
Judge Number: 72
Entry Category: Mainstream/Literary Fiction





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Structure, Organization, and Pacing: 4

Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar: 4

Production Quality and Cover Design: 4

Plot and Story Appeal: 5

Character Appeal and Development: 5

Voice and Writing Style: 4




Judge’s Commentary*:

THE CREST OF THE BEAST, BOOK 1, THE OATH, by C. A. Clark, is an ambitious book that starts what will obviously be a new series of books by a lovely author, whose personal history makes the book even more interesting. Ms. Clark gives us a very large cast of unusual characters with a young pair, Prince Willan and the lovely Adlai, leading the cast. However, it is very much Adlai’s book because she is the main viewpoint character and most of the adventures that evolve from the plot involve her. The author’s writing style draws the reader into the scenes and demonstrates her ability to create legendary characters and plot. The suspense keeps the reader’s attention with very little down time. In other words, this is a well-plotted book that will give the reader much reading enjoyment. The cast is too large to list here, but it includes dwarfs and mermaids, a Sorceress, and a Serpent of Old, as well as handsome dark men who make our hearts beat faster. Add a few high-spirited horses ready for riding, a castle with hidden staircases, and stone statues that speak, and you will understand the good and scary fun that lies within the pages...
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Published on November 13, 2015 17:20
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