Chapter 4’s on my webpage!

I put K.M. Weiland’s blog link in my last post.  She explained the differences between a book’s Hook, its Inciting Incident, and its First Plot Point.  The interesting thing is, I just wrote the inciting incident for Babet and Prosper’s novel in my fourth chapter.  In this book, that would put it just about at the 12% mark, where Weiland says it should be.  I’d pat myself on the back, but I have a lot more chapters to write, so let’s hope this IS the inciting incident.  But there’s no turning back for Babet and Prosper now.  They’ve committed to the long struggle.