Shirtlifter 4 Revisions: Progress Report 1

I'm in the middle of revising the first of the two "Unpacking" chapters that will make up SHIRTLIFTER #4.

Part of the revisions is changing the color scheme, since I started the book planning for a duotone color scheme, which morphed into full color as my draft progressed.

Another part is rewriting. A third is getting rid of unnecessary material (only been a few panels here and there so far).

Another part is adding material. This is a panel from a complete new sequence that will be inserted about halfway through the chapter.

Revising is actually a lot more fun than working on the first draft - maybe because I can see the finish line. Hoping to get all the redrawing done by March.