Help! The Pace, It’s Too Fast!

You’ve finished writing down your story; the rough draft is done! You go back and look things over, pleased with yourself, when you suddenly realize something’s not quite right. You look more closely, maybe even compare it with another story. You come to realize what’s been nagging at you: The pace of your story is too fast! The pace of your story is too slow! Whichever one it is, you start to worry, and beat yourself up about it, trying to think how this problem can be resolved; or can it be...