By Your Request: Query Success Stories and Why They Were Successful — AoR Ladies

Cassandra Page:

Want to see the query that landed me a contract with Turquoise Morning Press? I’m sharing it today over at Aussie Owned.


Originally posted on Aussie Writers:


Recently I asked you, our readers, what you wanted to see. The answer I received was about querying successfully, how to do it, and examples of successful queries. So today, I have the ladies here, at AOaR telling their stories.





Cassandra Page  Cass!



First off, I should warn you that the query letter contains a minor spoiler for the book. (There was also a bigger one in there, but I’ve deleted it from the example; I don’t think it’s strictly necessary to illustrate the point.)



There are a few reasons why I think this query was successful. I followed a basic when/then structure in the pitch (the first two paragraphs). When Isla’s life starts to spin off the rails, then she must discover the truth about who she is and what she can do. It also outlines the stakes: Isla’s father is in danger and needs rescuing. (He’s such


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Published on December 02, 2014 01:15
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