okay, so i was a little confused with the end of atoning... because as a reader, the way it was written made it sound like chloe and derek were waiting to have sex, yet..? and i really don't know how I feel about derek leaving to go to college, but im glad

Jumping ahead in the my question queue to address this one…


They are waiting to have sex :) The last chapter is a circle back to the first, where Chloe says that, after Derek runs, they’re no longer in a hurry for him to dress, and that while they aren’t having sex, there are many other things they can do. So when you get to that last scene, and they’re lying in the forest after his run and mostly undressed, that’s what you’re seeing. It’s not post-sex…it’s post “other forms of entertainment” ;) I wanted to address the issue of sex in a long term teen relationship and make it clear that, after 18 months of dating, they’re doing more than kissing, but I didn’t want it to be too explicit, knowing I have some younger readers for this trilogy.


It’s always possible I’ll return for more stories. I’m still waiting to get a sense of how this one did in terms of readership—were many readers actually still around to follow it or have they (understandably!) wandered away from this series by now.

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Published on December 03, 2014 05:46
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message 1: by Darlene (new)

Darlene I, myself, am enjoying the added stories for Derek and Chloe, It is nice to see how their lives have evolved into something more than just a teen crush on each other. as well as how they are interacting with other subjects in their world.
thank you for your writing, I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories.
A big fan D.F.


message 2: by Mylia (new)

Mylia Muse I love reading any and everything that comes out having to do with Chloe and Derek.


message 3: by Sarah (new)

Sarah I would love to read more about Derek and Chloe!


message 4: by Lorre (new)

Lorre I'm really hoping there will be another short story like this when they are all in college!


message 5: by Rez (last edited Dec 04, 2014 08:37AM) (new)

Rez I love any stories with Chloe and Derek. I would love to see how their relationship progress while they are in college.


message 6: by Emely (new)

Emely love chloe and derek!


message 7: by Cristin (new)

Cristin Robin In truth not only do I enjoy Chloe and Derek I like Maya and Daniel. I'd like to see more with the four of them working as a team.


message 8: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Bakker I NEED more!!! Seriouly i love this serie. My first fandom ever


message 9: by viktoria (new)

viktoria I love seeing them again, although I understand your workload must be ridiculous. (Which makes these stories even more awesome.)


message 10: by Jenny (new)

Jenny I love Derek and Chloe as well as the others! I would definitely love to read more!


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