Trilogy draft completed - critique requested

I have completed the third part of the Cameron trilogy. "Cameron's Quest" is a story about the Columbus Avenue Boys as they mature from high school seniors to their early adult years.

I am looking for willing readers to critique this story which is in manuscript form. Yes, it needs to be edited grammatically, but the story is complete and I believe very solid.

If there are any volunteers, let me know. I will send to you.

Thank you.
David Carraturo