Sir, Revisited
A while back, I wrote a short original story with a nameless Dom and sub, titled 'Sir'. They stuck in my head and I decided to see how they met. It's a WiP; I'm adding to it when I'm in the mood, but there are 14,000 words here I'm happy with and this is part one of their story. I included the original snippet at the start.
You can read it here:
Sir, Revisited, Part One
You can read it here:
Sir, Revisited, Part One
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May 21, 2014 05:18AM
Loved the first bit. Thank you for this.
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Thank you! I have an idea where it's going and another six thousand or so written, but I thought this stands alone well enough to post.
Andrea wrote: "This is great!"
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm fond of these two.
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm fond of these two.
I had read that first part before & enjoyed it immensely. I just finished reading the additions. Very good. I like these two characters & the way you've backtracked to flesh out that initial scene. I'll be eager to read further revisions.
Thank you! The original story had them in such a perfect place of trust and understanding and I was curious how they got there. More soon! I'm trying to leave each chunk fairly self-contained because I don't know when I'll run out of time to write it. Summer's a down-time for me when it comes to pro writing; I recharge, kids are home demanding the computer...anything I can get done is a bonus but mostly I play :-)
No worries. I am patient. It'll be a treat when the next part becomes available.
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