Writing: How do you know when a scene has to be rewritten?

What makes a scene "not work" for you so that you feel you have to rewrite it/tear it apart (rather than wordsmith)?


This question is so excellent because it is so hard.

The short answer is: I just know.


The medium answer is:

I feel uncomfortable with it (see: "I just know" above) because:

the rhythm feels wrong when I re-read it. The rhythm of a scene should flow smoothly and inevitably for however you are defining inevitability -- you should never catch or stumble over the flow of action and c...
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Published on July 02, 2010 06:08
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