What makes a scene "not work" for you so that you feel you have to rewrite it/tear it apart (rather than wordsmith)?
This question is so excellent because it is so hard.
The short answer is: I just know.
The medium answer is:
I feel uncomfortable with it (see: "I just know" above) because:
the rhythm feels wrong when I re-read it. The rhythm of a scene should flow smoothly and inevitably for however you are defining inevitability -- you should never catch or stumble over the flow of action and c...
Published on July 02, 2010 06:08