First Paragraph(s): The Mingled Destinies of Crocodiles & Men




 Who can truly say what the river valley looked like? Its appearance changed depending on one’s perspective, for every soul sees the world differently. A patch of tree moss so apparent to one person might go completely unnoticed by another. The agreed-upons lay few and far between. The essential topography of the valley could be seen from a few specific locations: high on the barren rock of Beggar’s Hill, or from the heights of the Lone Tower, at the foot of which rested an ancient orchard. These and a few other strategic plateaus looked out over the vast waterway to the first rising hills of the Otherside—that land across the great river where very few ventured—where the land fell ever-steeped in a thick, heavy fog.

Alongside the river, sometimes too close to its edge, homes of the valley folk clustered beneath the calm twin siblings of blue water and sky. Past these houses, when the hills did not rise immediately from the beach as they were prone to do, the hinterland spread in long acres of field and fancy—fancy having more than a little power in the valley—stretching out like yawning earth. A couple of lapzine fields had been left to struggle, having survived a swelling of the river; few people remained to tend their blue-tinged flowers or harvest their gel-like resin for lamplight.
Beyond the initial hills and inclines rose greater cliffs, at points almost completely hiding the river valley from the view or acknowledgement of the outside world, such was their height. And finally, before anything “modern” could be reckoned, there spread the Farlands. Still considered of the valley proper by most aside from the college, those of the outside world ignored them as wilderness. Things were changing, though. A new organism called ‘Industry’ was starting to take notice of certain regions of the Farlands. And Industry began to wander about this seemingly unused land, wondering how it might be used for its own industrious progress. This new attention made a few of the valley’s unseen inhabitants very uneasy.

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message 1: by Lori (new)

Lori Who can truly say what the river valley looked like? Its appearance changed depending on one’s perspective, for every soul sees the world differently.

What an opening sentence. God I love your books.


message 2: by Eric (new)

Eric Arvin Lori wrote: "Who can truly say what the river valley looked like? Its appearance changed depending on one’s perspective, for every soul sees the world differently.

What an opening sentence. God I love your bo..."


Thank you so much!


message 3: by Ann (new)

Ann Ditto Lori! She and I have been fangirling all over your words :)


message 4: by Eric (new)

Eric Arvin Ann wrote: "Ditto Lori! She and I have been fangirling all over your words :)"

The fact that I have fangirls is an idea I'm still trying to get my mind around. ;-) But thank you!


message 5: by Lori (new)

Lori Ann wrote: "Ditto Lori! She and I have been fangirling all over your words :)"

:) Ann, you make me smile!


message 6: by Ann (new)

Ann Hehe, kinda scary huh? You should hear what she calls us (view spoiler). :D


message 7: by Lori (last edited Sep 04, 2013 06:54AM) (new)

Lori Eric wrote: "Ann wrote: "Ditto Lori! She and I have been fangirling all over your words :)"

The fact that I have fangirls is an idea I'm still trying to get my mind around. ;-) But thank you!"


We could pretend to be fan boys if it makes getting your head round it easier. And that sounded way ruder than it was meant to...don't press the post button Lorraine....


message 8: by Ann (new)

Ann Lori wrote: "Eric wrote: "Ann wrote: "Ditto Lori! She and I have been fangirling all over your words :)"

The fact that I have fangirls is an idea I'm still trying to get my mind around. ;-) But thank you!"

We..."


I love Lori


message 9: by Lori (last edited Sep 04, 2013 07:05AM) (new)

Lori Ann wrote: "Hehe, kinda scary huh? You should hear what she calls us [spoilers removed]. :D"


Sshh - (view spoiler)


message 10: by Ann (new)

Ann Lori wrote: "Ann wrote: "Hehe, kinda scary huh? You should hear what she calls us [spoilers removed]. :D"


Sshh - [spoilers removed]"


I think it may be too late for both of us :)


message 11: by Lori (new)

Lori I fear you could be right.


message 12: by Eric (new)

Eric Arvin Ann wrote: "Hehe, kinda scary huh? You should hear what she calls us [spoilers removed]. :D"

The Arvinettes?! LOVE.THAT.


message 13: by Ann (new)

Ann WHEW! I'm glad, since we already had the t-shirts made and all :)


message 14: by Eric (new)

Eric Arvin Ann wrote: "WHEW! I'm glad, since we already had the t-shirts made and all :)"

LOL. Well, if that's so, I want pictures ;-)


message 15: by Ann (new)

Ann Eric wrote: "Ann wrote: "WHEW! I'm glad, since we already had the t-shirts made and all :)"

LOL. Well, if that's so, I want pictures ;-)"


Damn, I was afraid you were going to say that. Lori better get to work :P


message 16: by Lori (new)

Lori Lol! T-shirts huh...
Yeah - I'm better at writing book reviews.


message 17: by Ann (new)

Ann And Lori TOTALLY DELIVERS!!!




message 18: by Lori (new)

Lori Lol - I should have been doing housework. But this was more fun! (Thanks for the link Ann, you're good at this computer stuff!)


message 19: by Eric (new)

Eric Arvin Ha! ;-)


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