Learning Curve cover, take 2, (and a free book)

Soooo the saga of the cover for this book...

When I wrote Life Lessons, MLR press knew there was one sequel coming, if the first book sold well enough to release the second. The artist picked a couple of cover guys - a Tony who was perfect and a Mac who wasn't even close. (Polished, waxed and grinning, with a gold chain - just, nope.) But she heard my comments and looked around, and changed the "Mac" to this cool angled shot of a guy who looked a bit scruffy, but solemn, and had the right feel. I loved that first cover.

And after two books, I thought the series was done. But no. The guys had more to say. By the time we hit this fourth book, Learning Curve, we were running up against the limit of plausible pictures for "Mac." Not that he doesn't have a gazillion stock picks, just that most of them are either ridiculous like this or so different looking you have to check the credits to believe it's the same guy, like these, okay, and also ridiculous, or all smiley. Some were possible... but. After looking at this guy's stuff through a long evening, the artist and I were both irritated with him, and when the artist said, "How about another guy who looks like him?", I said, "Why not?" So we did that, and around 1 a.m. decided we were done. And I liked that cover, objectively. It's pretty.

But when I posted it, people immediately were recognizing it wasn't "Mac". And what's more, Tony was bitching in my head. Now, that's a downside to being a writer. Well an upside and a downside - the guys feel real and they talk to me. A lot in some cases. (Tony Hart, I'm looking at you.) Tony didn't like being on the cover with a new guy - it felt like I was making him cheat on Mac. It was uncomfortable, no matter how pretty the cover was. Not that Tony could get Mac to pose for a freaking usable picture for me, but that didn't keep him from complaining.

So the artist and I went back to the "Mac" pictures, looking for one that might slot into the same cover, and look OK. Again. And nothing was perfect, but some were possible, and in the end we picked one. It's the right man, despite the different look: Mac cleaned up, hair shorter after cutting it in Home Work, and dressing up, which happens a couple of times in the book. And something about the expression appealed to me - I imagine their eyes meeting in the mirror this way.

New Learning Curve cover

Some people will like the other one better, despite the switch. Some will find some other stock picture of this guy more convincing. (You have no idea how many I played with and debated over. Indecisiveness is my middle name.) But this is it. Hopefully most folks will like it, and at least Tony isn't waking me up in the night to bitch about it.

You can sign up to win a copy of Learning Curve on the giveaway at Stumbling Over Chaos. Good luck. I hope you all enjoy the book. It's having final proofing now, and looks like it should release on schedule on the 6th. It will be available first from MLR Press directly, then Amazon shortly after, and gradually the other retail sites. And now, I need to go have fun writing the next thing. A writer's life is good :)
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Published on August 30, 2013 08:22
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message 1: by Lori (new)

Lori I like both covers (and it's what inside that is most important, and I'm pretty certain I'm going to love that!) I have a huge crush on Mac and he's going to look like Mac in my head when I read it anyway.

Besides in this photo he looks like the more relaxed Mac that he's become with Tony's influence - if that makes sense. :)


♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ It sounds like you were able to come to an acceptable resolution for yourself when it comes to the cover :)
Definitely looking forward to reading it!


message 3: by Jess (last edited Aug 30, 2013 09:06AM) (new)

Jess Candela Lookin' good! :)

And wow, release day is exactly a week from today. Woo hoo!


message 4: by kasjo_peja (new)

kasjo_peja Kaje I love the series and can't wait for the book. As for the cover I know there was a whole discussion about first proposition by MLR and many people didn't like it, but IMHO it's not an improvement :(.


message 5: by Sun (new)

Sun Can't wait for this book to come out!!!!!


message 6: by Sunne (new)

Sunne Looks better than I thought it would and your comment about the mirror is making it even better.


message 7: by Jax (new)

Jax I was a bit jarred by that first cover because Mac didn't look like Mac. I do think it's better to use the guy from the previous covers, but it's amazing how much younger he seems with a different facial expression. I agree with Lori, that the happier look can be attributed to his life with Tony. He is younger looking than I picture Mac, but you have to work with what you've got. (Mind you I can't remember his actual age - just the picture in my head.) I sympathize with your dilemma!


message 8: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper Well, it was an interesting process. Serves me right for not planning things out - the books seem to spawn sequels without me meaning to. Like Rebuilding Year, which I swore was a stand-alone, but now won't be. I have no clue if there are more pics of those two guys either...


message 9: by Fritz42 (new)

Fritz42 Like Rebuilding Year, which I swore was a stand-alone, but now won't be.

OMG! Really? I am so excited about that. As for your books "spawn[ing] sequels," that is a happy thing for your readers! Can I just say, let them keep spawning?


message 10: by Sunne (new)

Sunne So glad to hear that, because I always thought that Ryan's and John's story wasn't yet over.


message 11: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper Yeah, Ryan wants to introduce John to his dad...


message 12: by Jenni Lea (new)

Jenni Lea Kaje wrote: "Yeah, Ryan wants to introduce John to his dad..."

Oh, this makes me so happy! ♥


message 13: by Neet (new)

Neet I'm sorry about the cover dilemma... I'm satisfied with anything on it, even a cow, it's what's inside the book that counts. I'm doing the big old x's on my calendar to the big date! Also, thank you for the news about Rebuilding Year. I was one of your nerdy fan girls who started to beg you for more on John & Ryan, but decided not to because I begged for more on Mac&Tony. Didn't want to seem too greedy...hee-hee! Take care and keep those sequels coming.


message 14: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper I'm always happy when people want more of my guys :)


message 15: by Sunne (new)

Sunne Kaje wrote: "I'm always happy when people want more of my guys :)"

That really isn't a problem - shall I make you a list of sequels I want to you to write? ;)


message 16: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper LOL.


message 17: by Christine (new)

Christine Which is why I try never to judge a book by its cover--although some of them are so ridiculous I have to avert my eyes and hope the author has a good excerpt so I'll still want to buy the book. I always have pictures in my own mind of how Mac and Tony look (sorry, Mac's more rugged and Tony's less twinky)so I'm ready for the release no matter what the cover looks like.


message 18: by Kaje (new)

Kaje Harper Yeah, I don't pay much attention to covers on books I read (especially the appearance of the guys), but I know some people do. There are some great books with really non-fitting covers out there. But good covers are nice when possible. I'm glad you have your own Mac and Tony though :)


message 19: by Kaje (last edited Sep 03, 2013 09:12AM) (new)

Kaje Harper Shelley wrote: "This was interesting to read since I've often wondered how much input authors get into the covers of their books because I've seen some that make me wonder just how high everyone involved had to ge..."

Author input varies, with the press, the artist, the tightness of the time frame and budget for artist-time to make changes, the author's experience and probably sales potential. With some presses, both artist and author are superseded by the decisions of the marketing department at the end.

Some artists will let authors submit possible stock pictures right at the start, to improve the first draft cover, some don't. I didn't even know that was possible with the first couple of books (or where to look for pictures.) Some artists will make a ton of changes for you, some will only have time for a couple after the first draft before the money for cover tweaking runs out.

And of course, some self-pubs are doing their own covers to save money, which I did for a couple of freebies with very minimal success early on (Lies and Consequences and And To All A Good Night).


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