LOST CHANCES - A Twitter-prompted experimental short story

Earlier today I asked on Twitter for some writing prompts to use over lunch. I'm experimenting now - writing short, fast pieces that don't have much planning, and don't have much time. It's part of getting better at what I do - writing, telling stories, and making words do what I want. The following story was written based on those prompts, and took about thirty minutes. I've edited it up quickly, but it's still a rough thing with some sharp edges that need sorting. I hope you enjoy - and let...