Thoughts on The Sunne in Splendour

Today's Facebook Note, which began as a comment in yesterday's Goodreads Note.

I did not have anything to post today, another one of those blank dates on the medieval calendar. But yesterday I’d posted something about Sunne on my Goodreads page in response to a reader’s comment and a friend who saw it suggested I post it here, too. Since I have nothing else to write about, here it is, slightly expanded.
I've reached the point in the Sunne galley proofs where Richard and Edward are in exile in Bruges, and it brought back some nice memories of my time in that lovely city, sometimes called the Venice of the North. I remember admiring the magnificent Gruthuuse Museum, which was the town house where Edward and Richard stayed, thinking it must have seemed ironic to them that they were living in such luxury with no money to pay their rapidly mounting debts. I originally had a scene in Sunne in which Richard and his friend Rob Percy raced each other to the top of the Belfort, and I climbed myself to the very top so I could experience it; too. I didn't run up the stairs like they did, not being 18 and not being crazy. But it was quite a climb even at my snail's pace, and the view of the red roofs and sun-silvered canals was spectacular. So of course we ended up deleting that scene before the book was published!
Writers often do daft things like this. I started to write about some of them, but then decided to save those stories for a blog sometime. It is strange to be rereading Sunne after so long, for it has been years. What struck me anew was the burden of responsibilities that Richard shouldered for his brother at such a young age. I am accustomed to my medieval men growing up fast. Henry invaded England at age fourteen, after all, and Llywelyn Fawr was the same age when he launched his rebellion to overthrow his uncle. Richard and Geoffrey gained experience in war while still in their teens. But Richard’s duties were greater and more daunting, for they involved the exercise of real power. At seventeen, he was Lord High Constable of England, Chief Justice of North Wales, Chief Steward, Approver and Surveyor of all Wales, Chief Justice and Chamberlain of South Wales. Obviously he had men to advise him, but they were not empty titles.
It is hard for us to imagine entrusting such authority to a teenager. But then Edward had rescued his family’s plummeting fortunes and claimed the crown of England after winning the bloodiest battle ever fought on English soil while still a month from his nineteenth birthday. So it is not surprising, I suppose, that he would also entrust his youngest brother with an even greater honor, the command of the vanguard when they met Warwick on Barnet Heath. And as we know, Richard justified the faith Edward placed in him—just as those other precocious youngsters went on to greater fame, Henry as a great king, Geoffrey as a highly competent duke, Richard as one of the best battle commanders of the MA, and Llywelyn as the first true Prince of Wales even if he did not actually claim that title. I feel very lucky to have found such remarkable men to write about, even luckier that they so often had equally remarkable women at their sides!
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Published on February 15, 2013 05:39
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message 1: by Oshun (new)

Oshun I was thinking yesterday about comparing Richard and Edward favorably to Alexander the Great with their early-in-life military successes. In some ways they met greater challenges; they did not simply go from one spectacular victory to another, but actually tried to govern what was an almost ungovernable country at that moment in time.


message 2: by RJay (new)

RJay You make a great point about the women at their sides. When so many MA marriages were made for power-broking reasons, it's amazing to realize that there were "good" marriages that resulted as well. And the women held everything together at home while their men were away fighting. How did women ever become thought of as the "weaker sex"? Maybe physically, but certainly not less intelligent, less able to think politically, nor less able. I'm even more amazed when a male author writes a book from a female historical figure's point of view - like Brian Wainright and Within the Fetterlock. Kudos!


message 3: by Sharon (new)

Sharon I enjoyed Within the Fetterlock very much, and I also loved Brian's Ricardian spoof, The Adventures of Alienore Audley. Christopher Gortner is another male writer who creates very believable female characters.


message 4: by MichelleCH (new)

MichelleCH Bruges is beautiful and such a great setting; just out of curiosity, why did you delete the scene?


message 5: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Because my editor wanted me to cut back the book size; it was 1200 pages, after all. So I reduced it by about 10%, and that was one of the scenes that I decided was not essential to the story line.


message 6: by Oshun (new)

Oshun Tell your agent we would pay to read the 120 pages. :)


message 7: by Sharon (new)

Sharon I don't even have them anymore, Oshun, as Sunne was published 30 years ago! I am sure they are stored away somewhere, but I'd need a pack of bloodhounds to find them, Computers really have changed our world. I typed all 1200 pages of Sunne on an IBM Selectric, and had to use white-out and carbon paper. Seems like a world away.


message 8: by Oshun (new)

Oshun Sharon wrote: "I don't even have them anymore, Oshun, as Sunne was published 30 years ago! I am sure they are stored away somewhere, but I'd need a pack of bloodhounds to find them, Computers really have change..."

I remember those days very well! I'm just being greedy. The book really stands the test of time.


message 9: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Thank you, Oshun. I am very excited about the upcoming new hardcover edition of Sunne; books rarely get a rebirth like that. This was a wonderful opportunity to correct some horrible typographical errors that appeared in the British edition, and to correct some of my own mistakes that got by us and into print. So the hardcover & e-book Sunne coming out in the UK in September and in the US as an e-book will be the "new, improved" version. Sadly, Richard still loses at Bosworth.


message 10: by MichelleCH (new)

MichelleCH I agree with Oshun about being greedy! I too would absolutely read those 120 pages.

Isn't funny how now autocorrect is such a pain in the neck! We have to take the good with the bad I suppose :)


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