Six Sentence Sunday: An Echo in Time #2

It's Six Sentence Sunday! This is the 2nd tidbit from my WIP, An Echo In Time (formally titled The Stone of Destiny). After chatting with my editor we decided on the new title. What do you think? The story will be feature in the "Twist of Time" anthology.

In this scene: A docent convinces Kendra to kiss the Blarney Stone and make a wish. When she sits up, the docent is gone and 15th century man sits beside her.

And now the six...

A mixture of astonishment and compassion filled his eyes that were the color of storm clouds.

“You look so real.” The moment she said the words, the enchantment broke. His features shimmered like ripples in a pond.

His hand reached for her. “Stay with me,” he pleaded, his voice raw with emotion.

 

Now for the SIX. In this scene: Kendra has traveled in time to the 14th century and is greeted by less than questionable characters. Just when she thought she couldn't escaped, her hero shows up, but I'll let him introduce himself.

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Six Sentence:

“Cian Laidir of the MacCarthys at yer service.” The man bowed with over exaggerated flare before his lethal gaze sought his adversary. “But I am afraid it is ye who will see the fiery pits of hell this day.”

His look alone oozed with authority and raw power. Dougal was a fool to mess with this guy, but who was she to argue. Go Cian

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I hope you enjoyed the sneak peek of my upcoming tale, An Echo in Time.  So...do you think Cian can take Dougal?

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