August 10th, 2012

My two favorite editors (mother and cousin) have read through the first three chapters of not-publicly-named novel, and rendered their verdicts!

Mother corrected sections where things didn't make sense, while cousin insisted that character feelings were very well-done - but the world itself is difficult to grasp.

Not sure how to make the world more vivid, especially in the framework that already exists. Any of my fellow authors out there have advice?