Journeying in WIP Wednesday

I’m rewriting Maggie’s Wheelbarrow, a newsletter subscriber short story, into a Christmas tale for the next Bluestocking Belles Christmas collection. Here’s a snippet with Maggie and her children, poor as church mice, trying to make their way through England to find Maggie’s mother-in-law.


Maggie shook her head. Ma and Pa had been all the family she had. Both were orphans and both were gone, Ma of a fever in Portugal four years ago and Pa at Salamanca the following year. She and Will had been courting when Pa died, but he’d not received permission to marry. With Pa’s death, they went ahead without permission.


“If Will’s family don’t want me, at least I’ll know,” she said, more to herself than to the other woman. “I can make a life for myself and the children, but I need to know what happened to their Daddy.”


The baker stood up. “Wait here.” She bustled off along the street and disappeared into another shop. A few minutes later, she came back, smiling. “You and the children will sleep here tonight, Mrs. Parker. You can have my brother’s room.” Her eyes filled with tears, which she blinked away. “He died at Talavera, he did, and I know he’d want me to help a fellow soldier’s wife.”


She gave a decisive nod. “And then, in the morning, the carter will take you on your journey. He is not going far, but he’ll save a days walking, I reckon.”


Maggie accepted, and tried to offer money for bed and board, but the baker said that Will had fought to save England, and the least she could do was help out his little family. The carter said the same. “I was in the Peninsula, ma’am. If I cannot help the family of one of our own, what is the world coming to?”


Furthermore, when their ways parted, he left her with an innkeeper’s son who had been in his company in the army, and the son insisted that his family would be glad to have her and the two little ones to stay for the night.


In the morning, a friend of his drove her north, but he proved to be not quite so charitable, and in the end Maggie had to produce the pistol that her father had given her long ago. It was not loaded, of course. Loaded guns could not be carried in pockets and were, in any case, not safe around children. Maggie judged that the man would not know the difference, and she was right. He unloaded her wheelbarrow and her possessions from his cart, called her some unpleasant names, and went on his way.


And so it went through the following weeks. Maggie and her children found safe refuge some nights and on others slept outside under the stars. Sometimes they were offered lifts and sometimes they walked. Twice more, Maggie had to use her pistol to discourage someone with quite the wrong idea about camp followers.


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Published on June 18, 2025 11:52
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