Choosing a Point of View

I have just finished writing the third draft for the first chapter of Two Necromancers, a Fortress, and a Titan. It comes in at around 7000 words. Now, you might be asking: why have I already done three drafts for the first chapter? The answer is two-fold. Having a first chapter that I’m happy with really helps give the whole story a boost, and I wasn’t sure what point of view to adopt for the first chapter.

To avoid giving spoilers away, the first chapter focuses on Timmy and Katie although the...