Where has the time gone?

I can't believe I've let a whole week go by without posting anything here. The odd thing is that it has been an eventful week, but now looking back on it, it is a bit difficult to point back at what actually got done. I'm sure everyone has weeks like that. But there are a few things I can definitely point to as accomplishments…


"Northern Mist" is finished now. It has a proper title, I've done a first round of edits and cleaned a few things up, and submitted it for consideration. No word back yet about how the story was received, so I'm proceeding under the impression that it hasn't been read yet. After all, it is an anthology and other people are submitting stories. There is plenty to keep the editor occupied. So, until I get the official word that the story has been accepted and can be talked about, I'm going to have to keep the story's title and setting a secret. I'm expecting some back and forth editing of the story, but that process hasn't really begun.


The surprising thing about wrapping up "Mist" is how short my last writing session was. Last Friday I sat down to add 250 words to the story so that I could say I wrote something, and by the time I got done with that, I realized that I was done. The writing session prior to that I had stopped because I was so very tired, and it hadn't registered how close to the end I was. I did a first editing pass over the weekend and caught a few mistakes and polished up a few rough edges. Rather than batter at it to make it "perfect" I went ahead and submitted it. If I'm going to make changes, I'd rather they be changes that get the story accepted. The first draft is around 7000 words, so it is a healthy sized short story. We will see if it stays that long, or if I have to cut it back down towards 5000 words.


In the wake of finishing "Mist" I've found it hard to get back to writing. Part of me seems to want to wait for word to come back on "Mist". The reality is that I need to get back to working on Perils and get that finished off. If I'm going to podcast Perils this fall, I have to get it edited and line up voice talent. Just a ton of work there.


Last week also saw the release of a new Shrinking Man Project episode. That was an interesting episode, in that I recorded it while I took a 2-mile walk around my block. I've got some positive feedback from it, in the form of people who like the honesty of hearing me exercise while I'm talking about exercise. I've had at least one request to do more shows like that one. And it got Nathan Lowell to subscribe to the podcast!


I think I've also had it with grocery delivery services. I placed an order with Giant's Peapod delivery service for delivery last Tuesday. Peapod only gives a limited selection of what is available in the stores, but the lure of it is that they pull the groceries and deliver them to your door at a specified time. Right. My delivery was supposed to arrive between 5 and 7 PM on Tuesday evening. A little after 4 PM, they called to say that they were going to be late, but they'd deliver between 7:15 and 7:45 PM. Irritating, but not horrific.


When 8 PM rolled around, I called Peapod customer service to ask if they were planning to make the delivery at all, since they were now 3 hours past the original delivery window. The truck finally showed up at 8:20. And then it turned out that they forgot two of the items I ordered, and they crushed my loaf of bread.


Obviously, this did NOT make me a happy camper.


The whole point of services like this is that they'll save you time. But my experience is that having the groceries delivered TOOK me more time. In the time I spent waiting for the truck to show up, I could have gone to the grocery, shopped, brought my groceries home, put them away, AND cooked dinner. This would have required me to carry my own groceries, but I wouldn't have had a limited selection of foods, and I'd have all the things on my list.


I believe I've had it with Peapod. It just isn't worth the aggravation.

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Published on March 23, 2012 06:37
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message 1: by Lord David (new)

Lord David Prosser Nice to meet you Doc. Congratulations on finishing your story. You'll have to share the secret since I can't find the impetus to get moving on the third chapter of my fourth book at all. It's been months now.
I hope the new 'Shrinking Man' goes well. I haven't seen your previous podcasts but I assume you've done well so far.
Home deliveries can be a nightmare especially when they decide to put an alternative in for something they don't have and the alternative bears no relation to what you ordered.Much easier to go yourself.
You photo shows you wearing some fascinating looking badges/awards on your jacket. One looks quite Templarish?
I look forward to hearing if the story is accepted without too many changes.
Regards
David


message 2: by Doc (new)

Doc David wrote: "Nice to meet you Doc. Congratulations on finishing your story. You'll have to share the secret since I can't find the impetus to get moving on the third chapter of my fourth book at all. It's been ..."

David,

Thanks for your comments. I apologize for taking so long to respond, life has been hectic. And I'm still trying to deal with the fact that my regular blog feed has not been updating Goodreads properly.

As far as a secret for finishing a story, my technique can best be summed up as "Write something, anything." I find if I just take an hour and try to write 250 words, I usually wind up with around 2000 words written instead of 250. Don't wait for a flood of inspiration, just add another drop to the bucket. It all adds up.

I've lost over 100 pounds since I started my weight loss program. Right now, I'm kind of stuck. I need to clean up my act and get back on track. I've had a hard time with trying to lose weight for the last year.

The pins on my jacket in the photo are mostly from Airship Entertainment. That is Phil and Kaja Folio's company, and the publisher of Girl Genius comics.One is a Corset Inspector pin, one is the pin of the Tesla Rangers, and the third is a pin from a real society: The Society for the Advancement of the Steamtopian Ideal (SASI), which is a local steampunk enthusiasts organization that I joined. I had one more pin on, which I don't believe made it into the picture, and that was the Adventurers Society pin, also from Airship Entertainment.

"Northern Mist" was accepted, although I've recently made some edits due to problems in the story that became apparent during editing of the audio version of the story. While the true title is still under wraps, I can reveal that this story will be part of Tales from the Archives, Volume 2, a podcast anthology set in the world of Philippa Ballantine and Tee Morris's Ministry of Peculiar Occurrences series. Once the story goes live, I'll reveal the actual title and post a link to where you can hear the audio. A week after the audio goes live, the text will be available for purchase on Amazon.

Doc


message 3: by Lord David (new)

Lord David Prosser Doc, no apologies necessary. There are times when things just get away from us with so much going on. My health has beena bit off recently with the annual bout of bronchitis and my wife's cancer has us pretty much on the go. She's refusing to let it beat her and still manages to ride though.
Your technique seems to be a good one but it's not working for me so far. Perhaps it's lack of planning. Since each chapter is pretty contained I never go out with an idea of what's happening. I just write and see where it takes me.At the moment it has me up a dead end.
100 pounds is phenomenal. Well done. That takes serious will power. I hope you manage to get back on track and achieve your goal.
I have to confess I know little (nothing) about steampunks but if they're for going back to an earlier more gallant era I'm all for it. I like the clothes I see on Ebay certainly.
Well done with Northern Mist. I'm sure the edits were easily ironed out. I look forward to hearing more when the audio goes live.
Regards
David


message 4: by Doc (new)

Doc David wrote: "Doc, no apologies necessary. There are times when things just get away from us with so much going on. My health has beena bit off recently with the annual bout of bronchitis and my wife's cancer ha..."

Sorry to hear that your wife is struggling with cancer, but heartened to hear that she still intends to fight. I wish her much luck in her battle.

As far as writing technique, I know I have been intending to end my chapters on cliffhangers, both small and large. That probably does make a difference in ending my chapters, because I'm ending in the middle of an action.

The Steampunk movement hearkens back to the Victorian age, and that sense of gallantry and adventure. A time when a man can reasonably master all of known science and push the frontiers forward in several directions. Some is more lighthearted, and some deals with the dark underbelly of that era.

Doc


message 5: by Lord David (new)

Lord David Prosser Ha, the fact that I still like to wear frock coats and cravats must stand me in good stead then. Now all I need do is find a suitable steam railway from the era to be seen boarding top hat in hand.
David


message 6: by Doc (new)

Doc David wrote: "Ha, the fact that I still like to wear frock coats and cravats must stand me in good stead then. Now all I need do is find a suitable steam railway from the era to be seen boarding top hat in hand...."

I am sure there are a few of them around.

Doc


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