Notebook

There is a short story competition and I’m thinking of this as my entry. It has to be 600-2000 words (this is 1996…) and there has to be a black notebook. The other requirement is that someone needs to get $20,000. I’d LOVE to get some feedback on this story.

The courier van slid to a stop on the gravel in the trailer park.  The driver looked around cautiously.  Evening was giving way to night as the shadows lengthened around him.  There were no external lights, and few shining from the ...