From Chaos, Order

I've been reading early parts of Dragon Ball and One Piece lately, as well as the first couple books of Discworld. They all have something in common - they're all pretty crazy and wild and fast compared to what would come later. Things are way more in flux, you never quite know what happens next, there's not as much structure or narrative expectations yet. But there would be.



It's hardly unusual: few stories know what they want to be from the very start, and they tend to flounder about a bit and need to search for their own voice and style. From there on things begin to grow more coherent, as recurring characters and character motivations and personalities pop out of the primordial slime of creation, and as the setting itself begins to manifest and hold itself together. You get more involving storylines, more drama and tension, more call-backs, more structure, more order.

There's a lot to like in this kind of growth, and more often than not a story cannot survive if it does not take this step. But still, one often comes to miss those early wild days. The age of chaos and Sword & Sorcery in Discworld, when the realm was more dominated by strange magical landscapes and high adventure, before it was tamed and brought low by realism; the sheer quick pace of Dragon Ball, before the story demanded to slow things down for the sake of building things up; all the goofy sidetrip islands and their characters in One Piece, before the plot got kicked in such a high gear that we no longer could spare the time for such.

I hope it will never come to that for me. I hope to always keep a little bit of the essential Chaos in my works.

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message 1: by Lorenzo (new)

Lorenzo It's not only a matter of 'chaos' as you mentioned, it's also a matter of flow. It's more of a spark, the bit that you as author are willing to put in it. You can either keep it stable, and there it ends up creating a stable story but yet predictable in its ways, or let said spark go wild, and risk to alienate your readers. It's not easy to find a good balance for authors, even expert ones. The lucky ones who did get published regularly at their own terms get to do their own thing at their pace, free to unleash their spark (see Neil Gaiman). Others who have to follow routines, deadends, and such, are instead bounded to a certain limit of what they can do. One piece to make that example as you brought it up, became too big and needs to be relevant to the readers. It can't stop anymore to 'smell the flowers', so to speak.


message 2: by Misfire (new)

Misfire I really like when shows manage to balance serialized plotlines with little monster of the week episodes, or even slower ones for just pure character development. It means a lot more when a character dies if we've enjoyed a whole episode about them learning to take care of a dumbass cat or something.


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