Your first pages – 5 more book openings critiqued by a literary agent (and me!) at @Litopia

Originally posted on Nail Your Novel:
I’ve just guested again at Litopia, the online writers’ colony and community. Each week they have a YouTube show, Pop-Up Submissions, where five manuscripts are read and critiqued live on air by literary agent Peter Cox @agentpete and a guest, or sometimes two (this time we had longtime Litopia…