Hooking the Reader

Some authors and experts put great store in that magic first sentence to hook the reader into buying the book. While reading an article on the subject recently I realized that, while I was familiar with the theory, I have never bought or borrowed a book based on that, or paid serious attention to the rule while writing my own novels

I usually glance at the front cover, read the back blurb, read the inside blurb, and based on that, and any familiarity with the author or subject, buy or borrow the thing. I never see the first sentence until I’m at home.

I agree the opening is critical, especially if you want the reader to finish the book, but to me there is a lot more than the first sentence, or even the first paragraph.

Here are some opening sentences from a scattering of some of my novels and novellas.

“They say she is the Devil’s spawn, born in a cloud of brimstone and sulphur on a night when the peaks echoed with thunder and the castle walls trembled.” (The Dark Lady)

“They are through the city gates!” (The Queen’s Pawn)

“I don’t like elves, never have.” (Housetrap)

“Alexis came through the door like an unguided missile at the end of its orbit.” (Alex in Wanderland)

“Macy rose to her feet, leaned over, and poured the entire ruby contents of her wine glass over the crotch of his light gray slacks.” (We’re Not in Kansas)

“My Liege, these sources are not guaranteed, but are drawn from the best information at this time, including fleeing refugees and captured prisoners.” (Toltec Dawn)

“Atacama Desert, DeGrassie Observatory, 9:05EST “I just picked up a bright flash near Jupiter.” (Of Destiny’s Daughters)

Maybe I’m missing something by not paying more attention to the first sentence rule?