The Game Is Afoot - Read-through

I’ve done my first read-through of the short story I posted. This is when I just read what I have written and make notes about things that I need to fix, add, delete, and otherwise edit in upcoming passes. 

As part of the read-through I ignore:

Fix Tense
Fix Grammar
Fix Spelling 

and just focus on the story.  I make notes as I read. Here is what I need to fix in upcoming edits organized by scene:

Holmes

Motive
Add early references to strange odor
Add early references to cats
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