how I write, and a small scene from Berlin

At work on a new novel set in Berlin for Tamra Tuller of Philomel, I stop (breath held) to read the first 75 pages through. I return to photographs. I skinny things down, reverse the order of scenes, change the sound of a voice, then (breathing again) write forward.



It is the way it goes.  The going back to move ahead.  The shaving away to make room.  All the way through the writing a novel I am held in suspense.  Can it be?  Will it?



I think it can.  I hope it will.  But it is one page at a time, and, often, it is disappearing pages. I hold onto scenes like this:

The Turks have
been out since dawn, the Gastarbeiters. 
The caravans are busy, the little corner shops, the wood smoke piles,
the minced lamb man and the dill weed man and the lady who sells the sesame
kuver.   The air is a mix-up
of factory bells and machine scree, the wide wallop of Arabelle's bike wheels
across the cobblestone streets, the songs of the Chaotens and the wind in the plane
trees.  The cars are pissed, the
buses are crowded, the U-bahn chinks on its rails.  When we finally hit the platz, Arabelle takes her big booted
feet off the pedals and conks her legs out straight, letting her coat catch the
wind.  She hee-haws like a donkey.

"Safe again!" she
says.

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