Fix scene holes by listing every emotion of every character

When blocking out a scene (or already writing it), you will invariably stumble upon a spot that just doesn't feel right. Logically it seems to be working, but your gut is telling you something is off, yet you can't pinpoint what it is exactly.

That's a scene hole—a blind spot where you don't know what happens. 

Write a list of emotions each character goes through, to fix it (my edior calls this the "emotion train," and we study it in more detail at Wolves and up level in our writing classes)....