A few things inspired this piece, but mostly I just turned on music, notably "
Il viaggio a Reims" and started typing. The poem's shape was mostly happenstance, although when I reached the last few lines, I did
try to keep the cascading shape alive. This is very different from my usual poetry because it's very stream of consciousness, but that's what I really dig about it. Enjoy!! :)
condemn the judgecan't you find the cooler you:the one who digs and chills insteadof one who drags worlds through puddles formed of bitter, bereft, and beaten-down rejectsfrom reality shows, pageants, and the religion race,lost as it is, as we are, lost as god is with his one-way road rashburning from sunday mass to teakettle over all of us beautiful killers,sinners, tramps, and dancers at the helm of worlds bettered by studded kisses.
Published on November 04, 2011 04:49