condemn the judge

A few things inspired this piece, but mostly I just turned on music, notably "Il viaggio a Reims" and started typing. The poem's shape was mostly happenstance, although when I reached the last few lines, I did try to keep the cascading shape alive. This is very different from my usual poetry because it's very stream of consciousness, but that's what I really dig about it. Enjoy!! :)


condemn the judge

can't you find the cooler you:the one who digs and chills insteadof one who drags worlds through puddles formed of bitter, bereft, and beaten-down rejectsfrom reality shows, pageants, and the religion race,lost as it is, as we are, lost as god is with his one-way road rashburning from sunday mass to teakettle over all of us beautiful killers,sinners, tramps, and dancers at the helm of worlds bettered by studded kisses.
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Published on November 04, 2011 04:49
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