OOPS!
I'm infamous for leaving out words in initial drafts. Generally a second read or a critique group will find them. Does it matter? Check out my latest blunder.
Corrected ---The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook for the newest guest.
Original--The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook the newest guest.
Hmm...Cannibalism in the Vegas suburbs.
Corrected ---The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook for the newest guest.
Original--The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook the newest guest.
Hmm...Cannibalism in the Vegas suburbs.
Published on August 27, 2017 09:10
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