OOPS!

I'm infamous for leaving out words in initial drafts. Generally a second read or a critique group will find them. Does it matter? Check out my latest blunder.

Corrected ---The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook for the newest guest.
Original--The maid smiled and stood prepared to cook the newest guest.

Hmm...Cannibalism in the Vegas suburbs.
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Published on August 27, 2017 09:10 Tags: bloopers, blunders, proofreading
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