The Grim Reaper

I am feeling like the Grim Reaper for the bodies are falling fast and furious in Outremer. I had to kill off a major character in the last chapter and I will be bloodying my hands with two deaths in the next chapter…..yikes. Anyone who has read my books knows that by the end, the landscape is usually littered with bodies. But I rarely have to deal out so many deaths in such close succession. I think one of the hardest deaths I’ve had to write was that of Ellen de Montfort, wife of Llywelyn ap Gruffydd. Here is a scene from her death in childbirth chapter on June 19, 1282.
The Reckoning, p. 485
The chamber was deep in shadows. Llywelyn was alone with his wife, sitting very still in a chair by the bed. He did not look up as they entered, not until Elizabeth said his name. He showed no surprise at sight of Davydd, showed no emotion at all. Davydd stepped forward, still not knowing what he would say. “Llywelyn….” He stopped, started again. “I’m sorry. Christ, but I’m so sorry….How does she?”
Llywelyn was holding Ellen’s hand in his, staring down at the jeweled wedding band, the ring she’d called her talisman, her luck. Just when Davydd had decided he was not going to answer, he said tonelessly, “She is dead.”
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Published on June 20, 2017 16:59
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message 1: by Therese (new)

Therese But you do it so well, even when I like a character and keep "hoping" that they will live even though I know they won't… You do that to me.


message 2: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Sorry, Therese! One reader wrote to tell me that every time she reread Sunne, she hoped that somehow the ending would change and he'd survive. I really tried to convince the nice folk at Bosworth's centre that they should let Richard win the battle just once. The timing was perfect, for they'd just discovered his lost grave in Leicester, and I pointed out what amazing publicity they'd get, world-wide, if they did that. Plus, the crowds would have loved it. They just laughed.


message 3: by Therese (new)

Therese Don't apologize! You do such a great job of making us care for the characters. I don't doubt that your characters laugh at you frequently, not to mention your readers. :-)


message 4: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Some of them are more troublesome than others, Therese. And a few--thankfully, very few--just take over. Davydd ap Gruffydd, Llywelyn ap Gruffydd's scapegrace brother, was not supposed to have as large a role as he ended up having, but he was like a horse that got the bit between his teeth and just took off. Another one who was even pushier was Maud, the Countess of Chester, Robert of Gloucester's daughter. She managed to finagle herself a much larger role in Saints by offering to become Ranulf's go-between in his adulterous affair. She got herself more screen time by flirting with Hywel, the Welsh poet prince, and sealed the deal by befriending Eleanor. The only reason she did not carry on in Lionheart and Ransom was that she died!


message 5: by RJay (new)

RJay In my opinion, your Welsh series of books has been the most heartwrenching. Although I must admit, it took me a month to read the last chapter of Sunne because I couldn't face what I knew was coming. As an author, that's quite an accomplishment!


message 6: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Thank you, RJay! The Reckoning was the most emotionally difficult of my books, for it was dealing with more than personal tragedies. It was very depressing to know how the Welsh would suffer in subsequent centuries under the English, second-class citizens in their own country like the Irish.


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