#minutewriters Even if it seems necessary, cut...

A post shared by Sara Raasch (@sara_raasch) on Jun 12, 2017 at 7:00am PDT

#minutewriters Even if it seems necessary, cut “even”! Examples below, as promised! #writingadvice #writingadvice

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Which wasn’t helpful and didn’t even make him feel better. —> Which wasn’t helpful and didn’t make him feel better.

An old woman, by the sound of it, and that instantly made Lu hate Pilkvist even more. —> An old woman, by the sound of it, and that made Lu hate Pilkvist more.

That island was a week’s sail away, and supposedly even hotter and more humid than Argrid’s capital. —> That island was a week’s sail away, and supposedly hotter and more humid than Argrid’s capital.