Spells of Old Draft 2

I went ahead and grabbed a few people from my mailing list to read through the second draft of Spells of Old. Out of them, I’ve had three responses thus far, and they’ve been largely favorable, though there have been a handful of errors that I’ve corrected thus far.

I’m waiting for a little more feedback, but I’ll probably be starting on a second round of editing of Spells of Old tonight, focusing mostly on character names and perspective shifts. All of this assumes I can concentrate while my...