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Junction needs more work, and I need your help

Well nuts. The first-round publishers have all rejected Junction. The feedback from them consistently faults characterization. The characters just don’t click with them.

There are more publishers out there, but before I start submitting again, I have to revise. I have to fix those characters. Here’s my plan so far, and I’d appreciate your advice on all of it:

1) work through exercises on characterization do you guys know any good ones?

2) draw the characters (which helped in previous books. Plus, it’s therapeutic