Tuesday Writing Tips: The Ellipsis
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Once again, with help from Punctuation Made Simple (who threw me for a loop because they changed their website up, and who I'm calling PMS for short from this point on. HAHAHAHAHA), we're learning about some commonly misused punctuation marks. This week: the ellipsis. Especially overused by newbies (definitely me in my first attempt at a novel).
Here are the rules:
[1] An ellipsis takes the place of omitted words in a quotation
"...and didn't even say goodbye."
"She was talking about writing, editing...until she turned blue in the face."
[2] Indicates a long thoughtful pause
I want to write...no, I need to write.
[3] Indicates trailing off (as opposed to an abrupt interruption)
I was so tired. I just couldn't write anymore. Just couldn't...
[4] Indicates a continuation of time
The bomb counted down: ten, nine, eight...
[5] Indicates pauses in conversation as if a "realization" is occurring
"But how could he...could she...could they?"
Syntax
No spaces before or after the ellipsis.(okay, this is what PMS says. When I got my copy edits they not only put spaces before the ellipsis, the put them between the dots. Like so: . . . Just sayin')
"Don't let me fall..."
No period after an ellipsis. Do remember to close your quotation.
Usage Key
Stylistically, it is helpful to think of ellipsis points as a thoughtful sigh.
Misuse
The biggest misuse of ellipsis is to overuse them (Yup). As with all highly stylistic constructions, a little goes a long way.
Remember: for an interrupted quote, us an em dash (we'll talk about the em dash next week. I loves me the em dash, so did my copy editor) . Reserve ellipsis for long pauses, not abrupt interruptions.
I hope this clears things up a bit.
Like I said next week, we'll be talking about the em dash. Happy editing!!!
Here are the rules:
[1] An ellipsis takes the place of omitted words in a quotation
"...and didn't even say goodbye."
"She was talking about writing, editing...until she turned blue in the face."
[2] Indicates a long thoughtful pause
I want to write...no, I need to write.
[3] Indicates trailing off (as opposed to an abrupt interruption)
I was so tired. I just couldn't write anymore. Just couldn't...
[4] Indicates a continuation of time
The bomb counted down: ten, nine, eight...
[5] Indicates pauses in conversation as if a "realization" is occurring
"But how could he...could she...could they?"
Syntax
No spaces before or after the ellipsis.(okay, this is what PMS says. When I got my copy edits they not only put spaces before the ellipsis, the put them between the dots. Like so: . . . Just sayin')
"Don't let me fall..."
No period after an ellipsis. Do remember to close your quotation.
Usage Key
Stylistically, it is helpful to think of ellipsis points as a thoughtful sigh.
Misuse
The biggest misuse of ellipsis is to overuse them (Yup). As with all highly stylistic constructions, a little goes a long way.
Remember: for an interrupted quote, us an em dash (we'll talk about the em dash next week. I loves me the em dash, so did my copy editor) . Reserve ellipsis for long pauses, not abrupt interruptions.
I hope this clears things up a bit.
Like I said next week, we'll be talking about the em dash. Happy editing!!!
Published on July 26, 2011 05:18
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