Time to pee in a cup

I wanted to share this snippet earlier, but when I sat in front of my computer (and yes, this is a brain fart moment), I couldn’t remember which scene I was looking for in OPPOSITES DISTRACT.  (Carl Grody–not a word!)  But tonight, when I was thinking of something else, it came to me.  Brody’s brother, Ian, has been worried about his wife (and Harmony’s best friend) Tessa.  She hasn’t felt up to par for a while.  This scene’s a game changer.  It shifts how everything works, so far, in the story.  The snippet sums it up:


Tessa greeted them.  “Ian’s grilling steaks on the back patio.  Supper will be ready in a few minutes.”


Harmony studied her as she led them into the kitchen.  Her frizzy, copper hair was flat.  A no shower day, for sure.  Her creamy complexion looked pale.  “Are you okay?”


Right then, Ian came in the back door, teeth chattering.  His nose and cheeks glowed like Rudolph’s.  He held a platter with four steaks, tented in foil.


Tessa looked embarrassed.  “I baked with Grandma all morning.  I felt great.  I wanted to make bouillabaisse, but the smells bothered me.  I kept getting nauseous.”


“Oh, shit.”  Brody shook his head.


Ian frowned at him.


“You need to go see a doctor,” Brody said.


“What do you think is wrong with her?”  Ian sounded concerned.


“I don’t think I’m sick,” Tessa said.  “Or contagious.”


“Neither do I.”  Brody went to the refrigerator to fetch two beers.  “I think you’d better start taking prenatal vitamins.”


Ian stared.  So did Tessa and Harmony.


Tessa asked, “What do you mean?”


Brody raised an eyebrow.  “I think you’d better pee in a cup.”


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Published on July 22, 2016 14:40
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message 1: by Judith (new)

Judith Post Thanks, Midu! I can't believe there's only one more week of July. It's gone fast!


message 2: by Midu (new)

Midu Hadi My July went molasses slow


message 3: by Judith (new)

Judith Post Makes me think of the opening scene in ROMANCING THE STONE. Love that movie! My sister and I watch it together every once in a while just for fun.


message 4: by Midu (new)

Midu Hadi Judith wrote: "Makes me think of the opening scene in ROMANCING THE STONE. Love that movie! My sister and I watch it together every once in a while just for fun."

Is the same as Jewel of the Nile?


message 5: by Judith (new)

Judith Post Jewel of the Nile is the second movie, a sequel to Romancing the Stone. It was fun, but not as good as the first. In the first, the writer--Joan Wilder--who's afraid of EVERYTHING, blossoms and keeps getting stronger through the entire movie. Fun to watch.


message 6: by Midu (new)

Midu Hadi I have seen the second one and found it funny :-)


message 7: by Judith (new)

Judith Post I liked the second one, too. Thought it was fun that the "Jewel of he Nile" was a guy.But the first was my favorite.


message 8: by Midu (new)

Midu Hadi Judith wrote: "I liked the second one, too. Thought it was fun that the "Jewel of he Nile" was a guy.But the first was my favorite."

The guy er the jewel was funny too, if I remember correctly


message 9: by Judith (new)

Judith Post I thought he stole the show.


message 10: by Midu (new)

Midu Hadi Judith wrote: "I thought he stole the show."

Hehehe agreed!


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