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May 21, 2017

Cleopatra Video

1 – Cleopatra

LATE ON a moonless night.

Bedsprings are squeaking in a constant rhythm, and gasps and groans are coming from a narrow window high up on the wall of a stand-alone garage.

The squeaking accelerates. 

February 23, 1974

TOO DARK to recognize the young man and young woman going at it in the loft above the garage. The sex soon culminates with outcries of delight, followed by heavy breathing while they recover.

Moments pass.

“I need more nectar,” the young woman says.

The request puz...

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Published on May 21, 2017 11:02

Cleopatra VIDEO

Cleopatra – 21 Years Where’s Beth? – Chapter 1 – Season 1 – Episode 1

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Published on May 21, 2017 04:56

May 20, 2017

Cleopatra

Chapter 1 – Cleopatra

LATE ON a moonless night.

Bedsprings are squeaking in a constant rhythm, and gasps and groans are coming from a narrow window high up on the wall of a stand-alone garage.

The squeaking accelerates.

February 23, 1974

TOO DARK to recognize the young man and young woman going at it in the loft above the garage. The sex soon culminates with outcries of delight, followed by heavy breathing while they recover.

Moments pass.

“I need more nectar,” the young woman says.

The reque...

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Published on May 20, 2017 21:15

What Is 21 Years?

Episodic Crime Drama

21 Years is an episodic crime saga following in the footsteps of Sons of Anarchy, The Blacklist, Narcos, House of Cards, and Breaking Bad. Each episode becomes available as soon as written.

It’s cutting-edge and hard-hitting. Plenty of action and adventure. Interesting characters on both sides of the law. Plenty of twists and turns in the plot. Violence and bad language.

Cross my heart, you will see things in “21 Years” that you never saw before.

The first episode is “...

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Published on May 20, 2017 21:15

May 18, 2017

Fact to Fiction

from Born to Be Wild to 21 Years

Born to Be Wild is fact and 21 Years is fiction. I wrote both. Now let’s take a look at the opening paragraphs of each one. Let’s look at Born to Be Wild first …

CHAPTER 1

 December 12, 1971

Bobby Nauss was having sex with his girlfriend at two-thirty in the morning. The sex-act was taking place in Folcroft, Pennsylvania, a tiny suburban borough of some 10,000 inhabitants, a mixture of both blue-collar and white-collar workers. Folcroft was located two miles...

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Published on May 18, 2017 21:01

May 14, 2017

Meet Pearl Kovac

Pearl Kovac

We meet one new character in Chapter 3 of the Pilot Episode of 21 Years. And we meet her as she goes over to her daughter’s home on the night the family realized that Beth was missing.

TEN MINUTES LATER.

We’re still in the living room at Lew and Izabel’s house. And we hear a patterned knock on the front door. Lew and Izabel recognize the knock and know it’s her mother.

Lew heads upstairs. There’s no love lost between Lew and his mother-in-law.

Izabel waits for a moment so he can m...

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Published on May 14, 2017 06:22

May 13, 2017

¿Dónde Está Beth?

1 – Cleopatra

 TARDE EN UNA NOCHE EN LUNA.

Oímos jadeos y gemidos, y el rítmico chirrido de los muelles. Los sonidos vienen de una estrecha ventana en lo alto de la pared de un garaje independiente.

El chirrido se acelera.

23 de febrero de 1974

LOFT SOBRE EL GARAJE.

Demasiado oscuro para reconocer al joven ya la joven que lo van a hacer. Con el tiempo, el sexo culmina con gritos de alegría. Seguido por la respiración pesada mientras se recuperan.

Los momentos pasan.

“Necesito más néctar,” dic...

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Published on May 13, 2017 07:44

Meet Lew Kaminski

Where’s Beth?

We meet two new characters in Chapter 2 of the Pilot Episode of 21 Years. And we meet them as they return home in a yellow cab from a week’s cruise to the Caribbean:

The back door of the cab swings open and Lew Kaminski steps out. Forty-five. Dressed casually, and exuding confidence with every movement.

He leans down and helps his wife exit the cab. Izabel, also forty-five. Slim and attractive with blonde hair. Wearing a long navy overcoat and heels, and carrying a matching hand...

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Published on May 13, 2017 05:26

May 9, 2017

ng Coalescence

Characters Make Your Story

No matter how good or how intricate your plot, you’ll lose viewers if they don’t like your characters and/or don’t find them interesting. That said, let’s take a look at the characters as they appear in the Pilot Episode of 21 Years — “Where’s Beth?”

We meet two characters in the first chapter (Cleopatra), but we have no idea who they are or what they look like. We meet a YOUNG MAN and a YOUNG WOMAN.

Too dark to recognize the young man and young woman going at it.

W...

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Published on May 09, 2017 15:16

May 8, 2017

List of Episodes

What is 21 Years?

21 Years is an epic crime saga following in the footsteps of Sons of Anarchy, The Blacklist, Narcos, House of Cards, and Breaking Bad. Originally written in screenplay formatting and aimed directly at Netflix, and later transposed into ebooks and paperbacks for your reading enjoyment.

Twenty-two episodes comprise a Netflix series. Below you’ll be able to follow the progress of the completion of the episodes. I plan to write all twenty-two myself. Why? I love The Blacklist an...

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Published on May 08, 2017 18:54