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Characters Make Your Story

No matter how good or how intricate your plot, you’ll lose viewers if they don’t like your characters and/or don’t find them interesting. That said, let’s take a look at the characters as they appear in the Pilot Episode of 21 Years — “Where’s Beth?”

We meet two characters in the first chapter (Cleopatra), but we have no idea who they are or what they look like. We meet a YOUNG MAN and a YOUNG WOMAN.

Too dark to recognize the young man and young woman going at it.

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