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May 29, 2016
Book Review: The Ern Malley Affair by Michael Heyward
I’ve read this book before but The Ern Malley Affair is such a complex and interesting story populated by the most impressive array of real-life characters that reading it again is like reading it for the first time.
The Ern Malley Affair chronicles the mid-World War II literary battle between Australian writers exploring modernism and Australian writers convinced that modernism was a bunch of boo-hockey. In 1943, Max Harris, co-editor of the Angry Penguins literary journal, received a number of poems from a woman named Ethel Malley. She wrote in an accompanying letter that they were the work of her now dead brother and wondered if there was any literary merit in them. Max Harris was bewildered and ecstatic, believing them to be the stuff of genius.
Instead, they were the stuff of a hoax. Written in a single afternoon by poets Harold Stewart and James McAuley to expose Harris as unable to recognise truly worthy poetry, the poems and the non-existent poet nevertheless took on lives of their own.
The story of Ern Malley and Max Harris, if portrayed as fiction, would be dismissed as requiring too much suspension of disbelief. The fact that it is a true story makes it delicious, even as we wonder – seventy years later – how something that was intended to enable a moment of jumping up from behind a couch and shouting, “Surprise!” has managed to maintain such a grip on the literary industry of an entire country.
Probably because the poems, which were intended to be specimens of bad poetry display moments of evocative brilliance. “The black swan of trespass on alien waters.” “It is necessary to understand / That a poet may not exist, that his writings / Are the incomplete circle and straight drop / Of a question mark.” “O far shore, target and shield that I now / Desire beyond these terrestrial commitments.” “I have split the infinitive. Beyond is anything.” Good poets trying to write bad poetry might not be able to shed the influence of themselves as easily as they had hoped.
The story itself deserves five stars but the writing of Michael Heyward is dense at times and sometimes requires momentary diversions to the dictionary. In fact, sometimes his writing suffers from the same insensibility that some of the poetry of Ern Malley does, requiring the reader to ponder it much longer than would have been necessary had it been written simply.
There are also a lot of tangents explored as the author seeks to develop a wider sense of the literary community, the diverse literary feelings and the broader societal expectations of the time. It’s a triumph, particularly when you consider how far Australia and the world has come in terms of literary exploration. This hoax could not be perpetrated now and if it was, it would not receive anywhere near the same sort of attention as it did back then (broadsheet newspapers covered it with as much fervour as the Pyjama Girl murder trial happening at the same time).
This book won’t be of any interest to anyone who doesn’t care about or enjoy poetry. It’s very much for a niche audience. But if you fall within that niche, you’ll be fascinated by a story that enfolds John and Sunday Reed (patrons of the arts at the time), the famous painters Sidney Nolan (who deserted the army and changed his name for a time) and Albert Tucker, and a huge cast of supporting players. Special mention must go to Detective Vogelsang, who investigated Ern Malley under the obscene, immoral and indecent provisions of South Australian law at the time, and Magistrate Clarke who found some references to be indecent and thought it might be possible for certain plays by Shakespeare to be prosecuted under the same laws if anyone was so inclined.
The book includes all the Ern Malley poems, so you can make up your own mind about whether they are any good or not. I doubt any two people will come to precisely the same conclusion. Which is an apt description of how literature has evolved. It is a deeply personal thing and being asked to justify why you love a piece of poetry is like being asked to justify why you love your significant other. Why one poem (or one person) speaks to someone is a great mystery of life.
The events are also a cautionary tale for writers. Because once they publish, they will forever be associated with their writing. Harold Stewart and James McAuley were never able to shake their tags as the authors of the Ern Malley poems and they ended up resenting it. Perhaps they would have faded into obscurity without Ern Malley. Perhaps they would have gone on to develop reputations independent of him. But they never got to find out.
The Ern Malley Affair is a story that is greater than the sum of its parts and I have no doubt I will read it again because it made me think about many more things than simply poetry. And if this review seems vague, it’s not intentional, it’s just that it’s difficult book to do justice to within such few words.
4 stars
*First published on Goodreads 21 December 2015


May 26, 2016
The Last Great Shame – Song Lyrics
Verse One
A girl wading out to sea
Praying there is no baby
And hoping she’ll be able to forget
A guy bragging to the boys
Didn’t leave her with a choice
Left her with bruises and a threat
Verse Two
And now she has finally guessed
Nothing more than second best
Nothing less than worthy of his hate
She can’t forgive the violence
So she balances her silence
With a blood red circle round the date
Bridge
What happened to utopia?
The vision proud and grand
This sure as hell don’t look
Like the promised land
Chorus
Void the moon and blind the sun
All evidence would suggest
Count infinity and clone the one
A world of conformed unrest
Outside it’s raining
Inside it’s the same
But no-one’s complaining
This is the last great shame
Verse Three
Exactly one year to the day
What does he have to say?
Now the gun is held to his head
Remember last year’s touch
Doesn’t really mean that much
Took back everything he did and said
Verse Four
What is there to do
Now that it’s just them two?
No friends for him to hide behind
Will it help to see his death?
Watch him take his last breath?
To find the peace she needs to find
Bridge
What happened to utopia?
The vision proud and grand
This sure as hell don’t look
Like the promised land
Chorus
Void the moon and blind the sun
All evidence would suggest
Count infinity and clone the one
A world of conformed unrest
Outside it’s raining
Inside it’s the same
But no-one’s complaining
This is the last great shame
Coda
Her first memory gives her the drive
And the journey into darkness won’t take her far
Her worst memory twists the knife
As she focuses in the distance on the mourning star
Her last memory ends her life
Fallen friends and hazy honour but nothing in particular
Verse Five
Too late but still the deed is done
And now her conscience on the run
With scars that only candlelight will show
His leaking blood is on her hands
Just like her blood was on his pants
And yet fate must strike the final blow
Bridge
What happened to utopia?
The vision proud and grand
This sure as hell don’t look
Like the promised land
Chorus
Void the moon and blind the sun
All evidence would suggest
Count infinity and clone the one
A world of conformed unrest
Outside it’s raining
Inside it’s the same
But no-one’s complaining
This is the last great shame


May 24, 2016
Perfection – Song Lyrics
Verse One
Someday long ago
Tears for a tale of woe
And smiles for what you perceive
Never right now
Silence as you take a bow
And voices as you prepare to leave
Advocate devil’s advice
Lies you can’t hear twice
And truths you can’t ever hear
One liberated urge
Children right there on the verge
And adults who can only fear
Bridge
It’s happened before
It’ll happen again
The question is only a question of when
Chorus
Can you see your imperfection
And the beauty of it all?
Will you help to build it up
Or push and watch it fall?
Will you find true pleasure
In what it simply means to be?
Can you see perfection
In the imperfection that is you and me?
Verse Two
After solid steel
Nothing is hard to conceal
And most things are a bitch to find
Maybe right here
Thoughts become truly clear
And abstracts take shape in your mind
You’ve always prayed
You wouldn’t need to seek the blade
Or find redemption in the ground
Lucky in this tale
Love can’t be drawn to scale
And hate won’t let itself be bound
Bridge
It’s happened before
It’ll happen again
The question is only a question of when
Chorus
Can you see your imperfection
And the beauty of it all?
Will you help to build it up
Or push and watch it fall?
Will you find true pleasure
In what it simply means to be?
Can you see perfection
In the imperfection that is you and me?
Coda
Maybe it seems impossible
A world where no-one thinks like this
Where promises are meaningful
And problems disappear with a single kiss
Maybe it seems inevitable
That no-one will never break
To you it seems laughable
A world that never thinks to take
Chorus
Can you see your imperfection
And the beauty of it all?
Will you help to build it up
Or push and watch it fall?
Will you find true pleasure
In what it simply means to be?
Can you see perfection
In the imperfection that is you and me?


May 22, 2016
Poetry Spotlight On Christina Rossetti
Although I am a more dedicated fan of modern poetry, Christina Rossetti (along with William Shakespeare) is where I diverge from this dedication. Virginia Woolf in “I Am Christina Rossetti” wrote, “Yours was a complex song. When you struck your harp many strings sounded together… A firm hand pruned your lines; a sharp ear tested their music. Nothing soft, otiose, irrelevant cumbered your pages. In a word, you were an artist.” (I had to include that because it is poetry in itself as much as an ode to a poet.)
Rossetti’s two most famous poems are “Goblin Market” and “Remember” – it is the second of these poems I am going to showcase here, not just because it’s a sonnet, whereas the former is sixteen pages long. “Remember” is also one of two poems I can remember in its entirety from memory (no pun intended – on either point). And it is perfect: bittersweet, words that are the silence the poem talks about, with a slight lift at the end but not too much of a lift because, as those suffering the loss of a loved one will know, attempts to be raised from the depths of grief are usually unwelcome if they are more than momentary.
Many of Rossetti’s poems focus on the necessary duality of life and death and she was unfairly tagged as morbid instead of being recognised for her unbelievable insight. After her death, she was also considered a “pitiable thing: a repressed Victorian spinster whose leaking libido attracted knowing winks from Posterity”. Yikes!
Even if that’s true (and I highly doubt it is), poetry can be appreciated without having to appreciate the poet and Christina Rossetti is worth appreciating.
“Remember”
Remember me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you planned:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.


May 19, 2016
Messiah – Song Lyrics
Verse One
What are you looking for?
What are you waiting for?
Better hope to God you know what you’re doing
Who are you looking to?
Who are you praying to?
Better hope to God
Bridge
So choose
Truth or dare?
Still frightened of the scare
So choose
Dare or truth?
Still looking for the proof
Chorus
You know you’ll be saved, not depraved
By the Messiah
You know you’ll be fulfilled, not chilled
By the meaning
You know you’ll be propped, not dropped
By something higher
You know you’ll be consumed, not doomed
By the feeling
You know Messiah meaning higher feeling
Verse Two
Where are you looking now?
Where are you going to?
Better hope to hell you know where this is going
How are you looking now?
How are you holding up?
Better hope to hell
Bridge
So choose
Truth or dare?
Still frightened of the scare
So choose
Dare or truth?
Still looking for the proof
Chorus
You know you’ll be saved, not depraved
By the Messiah
You know you’ll be fulfilled, not chilled
By the meaning
You know you’ll be propped, not dropped
By something higher
You know you’ll be consumed, not doomed
By the feeling
You know Messiah meaning higher feeling
Coda
You know He’ll be lenient when it’s convenient for you
You know the mystery clears when He appears to you
But in the meantime the next lifetime will just have to wait
Today we’ll be colliding while we’re providing the debate
Verse Three
When are you looking away?
When are you giving up?
Better hope for something more tangible than faith
Why are you looking up?
Why do you believe?
Better hope for something else
Bridge
So choose
Truth or dare?
Still frightened of the scare
So choose
Dare or truth?
Still looking for the proof
Chorus
You know you’ll be saved, not depraved
By the Messiah
You know you’ll be fulfilled, not chilled
By the meaning
You know you’ll be propped, not dropped
By something higher
You know you’ll be consumed, not doomed
By the feeling
You know Messiah meaning higher feeling


May 17, 2016
Sessions With The Shrink – Song Lyrics
A quick note on these song lyrics: I had bought a new computer which came with a pre-installed voice recognition program. I had to read a bunch of words to train the computer to recognise me specifically but even after all that work, it still struggled to translate what I was saying into the headset onto the page. In fact, a lot of it was gobbledy-gook. I took some of the gobbledy-gook phrases and turned them into these song lyrics because I thought they had a certain poetry to them, even though they often made no sense.
The phrase “What can I say?” was what I had to say when the computer when it was struggling and I was struggling. I incorporated that, too, and obviously that is what the reference “I thought at least a machine would understand” means.
Verse One
She always said sessions with the shrink
Would result in non-linear thought
But it was completely, blindingly linear
How easily I was caught
Pens drawn at dawn or on the hour
Did she say I had a choice?
Could she tell the strongest impulse I had
Was to lose my failing voice?
But what was the worst she could find?
Holidays that earmarked fears
A wedding band worn to deter successors
Rusty old tins that were tears
The debutante nymph and the frail voyeur
Nursing each other to health
A broken hammer on the soapbox stand
A lazy preoccupation with stealth
Chorus
But sessions with the shrink
Were always held in silence
The hard way was my way
And sessions with the shrink
Always ended in violence
Someone besides me had to pay
My sessions with the shrink
Were nothing more than pretence
Little more than a delay
I thought at least a machine would understand
What can I say?
Verse Two
She found nothing for her sermon
So I stayed confined for her contentment
And my three prisons were forming alliances
Guaranteed overnight resentment
A husband who never thought to say goodbye
A mother who never thought to let it lie
A shrink who never thought not to pry
A heart that never thought to fortify
Old books weighed my other half
But I had no time for ounces
Only the previous wearer’s happiness
But the good shrink always pounces
But the good shrink never thought to ask
My chosen path in life
She never thought my choice would be
The path of eternal wife
Chorus
So sessions with the shrink
Were always held in silence
The hard way was my way
And sessions with the shrink
Always ended in violence
Someone besides me had to pay
My sessions with the shrink
Were nothing more than pretence
Little more than a delay
I thought at least a machine would understand
What can I say?
Coda
But the sessions were lessons
And the lessons were hard
And the shrink made me think
But the thinking was scarred
And more strident than the silence
And more hurtful than that violence
And more real than the pretence
I never was a machine
Chorus
Still sessions with the shrink
Were always held in silence
The hard way was my way
And sessions with the shrink
Always ended in violence
Someone besides me had to pay
My sessions with the shrink
Were nothing more than pretence
Little more than a delay
And I’m closer to you than ever
Sessions with the shrink couldn’t stop it
I’ll be with you any day now


May 15, 2016
Book Review: Twentieth-Century Russian Poetry
Published in 1993, and therefore missing seven years of potential inclusions, Twentieth-Century Russian Poetry is nevertheless an impressive contribution to my poetry library. Translated into English so a non-Russian reader like me can still appreciate it, it encompasses several difficult periods in Russian and world history including World War I, the subsequent revolution, the Stalinist years, World War II and the later Soviet years.
The big names in Russian poetry are all here: Anna Akhmatova, Boris Pasternak, Wassily Kandinsky (yes, he was a poet as well as a painter), Vladimir Nabokov (of Lolita fame) and hundreds more I’d never heard of. The two poems I’ve chosen to showcase here are reproduced in their entirety because they are as perfect as poems get and I would hate to be responsible for interfering with that.
“Retribution” by Ilya Ehrenburg
She lay beside the bridge. The German troops had reckoned
To cheapen her by this. Instead, her nakedness
Was like an ancient statue’s unadorned perfection,
Was like unspotted Nature’s loveliness and grace.
We covered her and carried her. The bridge, unsteady,
Appeared to palpitate beneath our precious load.
Our soldiers halted there, in silence stood bare-headed,
Each transformed, acknowledging the debt he owed.
Then Justice headed westward. Winter was a blessing,
With hatred huddled mute, and snows a fiery ridge.
The fate of Germany that murky day was settled
Because of one dead girl, beside a shaky bridge.
“Forest Fire” by Vadim Shefner
A careless hunter, breaking camp,
Failed to trample his fire down,
Went off into the forest, left it
To smoke away till dawn, burning itself out.
But in the morning, when the wind arose, dispersing
The mists, it also fanned the dying embers,
And, strewing sparks about it in the clearing,
Set crimson rags of flame among the trees.
It scorched the grass and flowers, then ignited
The bushes, and into the green forest
Advanced, dashing from trunk to trunk,
Like a pack of terrified red squirrels.
And the forest roared in the fiery blizzard,
With a frosty crackle, trees collapsed,
Sparks flying up from them like snowflakes
Over the gray drifts of ash.
The fire overtook the hunter who, tormented,
Suffocated in the fiery prison.
He had brought this fate upon himself,
But what a way to expiate his guilt.
Does not conscience work like this?
I dream,
Sometimes, in the stillness of the night,
That somewhere I have left a fire burning
And already roaring flames are in pursuit…
The collection includes mini biographies of all the poets, offering a unique insight into the circumstances of birth and later life events that shaped their experiences and inevitably their poetry. The book can be viewed as history from a different perspective, from those with the skills necessary to be able to distil the horrors of war and oppression that the average soldier and sufferer lacks.
It’s not a light volume (either in weight or subject matter) but it’s important. I bought this book the year it was published, over twenty years ago, and it still takes pride of place amongst many other poetry books.


May 12, 2016
Counting – Song Lyrics
Verse One
One true love and I thought that you were mine
Two sides to every story but you were at her shrine
Three in the bed and I was the one pushed out
Four times I saw you with her to make me doubt
Twenty years old when I let myself get caught
A lifetime of misery in the lessons I was taught
Fourteen diamonds in the ring that kept me chained
Too many stories I believed when you explained
Bridge
I can’t count, just want to forget
All the times I cried
I can’t count, just want to forget
All the times you lied
Chorus
You said it’d just be us forever
But forever came and went
Now I’m counting broken promises
You said it wouldn’t be her ever
But she was heaven sent
And I’m still counting
Verse Two
Five nights in a row that you were all but gone
Six years and our child to cement the perfect con
Seven mortal sins and you embraced them all
Eight love letters to her in your lazy scrawl
A dozen red roses sent to her every week
A million words I didn’t want to hear when you decided to speak
A billion men – what did I do to deserve you?
Not one damn good reason for what you put me through
Bridge
I can’t count, just want to forget
All the times I cried
I can’t count, just want to forget
All the times you lied
Chorus
You said it’d just be us forever
But forever came and went
Now I’m counting broken promises
You said it wouldn’t be her ever
But she was heaven sent
And I’m still counting
Coda
There’s so many simple numbers
But still I’m losing track
So many silver linings
But all my clouds are black
So many times, counting the times
As I watched you pack
So many lies, counting the lies
I won’t ever let you back
Chorus
You said it’d just be us forever
But forever came and went
Now I’m counting broken promises
You said it wouldn’t be her ever
But she was heaven sent
And I’m still counting


May 10, 2016
Happy – A Poem
The child has seen good but
The adult has turned bad
The innocence is long gone
The girl once had dreams but
The woman went slowly mad
Opportunity was just a con
The boy thought he could love but
The man stayed always sad
Living under a sun that never shone
Is anyone happy anymore?
The stranger seems inviting but
The friend is shown the door
The affinity was a lie
The student thinks of learning but
The teacher sees the flaw
There’s no reason left to try
The angel tries to pacify but
The devil begins the war
No-one thinks to ask why
Is anyone happy anymore?
The virgin imagines perfection but
The whore will never forgive
Long ago the bubble burst
The mistress drowns in jewels but
The wife wonders who he’s with
It doesn’t help to know she was there first
The animal seeks to survive but
The monster perpetuates the myth
Perpetuates what is worst
Is this all planned?
Is there any going back?
If I held out my hand
Would someone take up the slack?
Sometimes it’s easy to understand
The lure of the bloodless black
The lure of the end
No one’s happy anymore


May 8, 2016
Poetry Spotlight on Bruce Dawe
Continuing on with the month of Mondays in May dedicated to poetry and poets, today’s subject is Bruce Dawe. As far as I’m concerned, Bruce Dawe is Australia’s greatest poet and making a statement like that could potentially spark heated debate given the other candidates: Banjo Patterson, Henry Lawson, Les Murray and several others.
The three Bruce Dawe books in my collection are This Side of Silence: Poems 1987-1990, Condolences of the Season: Selected Poems and Sometimes Gladness: Collected Poems 1957 to 1997. So I have a good selection of Bruce Dawe poems to showcase and demonstrate his genius.
There is a real sense of Australian-ness to Bruce Dawe’s poetry but then he mixes it up with sentiments, ideas and language that are universal. He can also come across as a real writer’s writer but then throw in something that everyone will recognise as brilliant writing, regardless of their poetical knowledge.
Some of his poems I’ve included here in their entirety because an extract will just not do them justice. Happy reading!
From “And a Good Friday Was Had by All”:
Orders is orders, I said after it was over
nothing personal you understand—we had a
drill-sergeant once thought he was God but he wasn’t
a patch on you
From “Head for the Hills!”:
‘Head for the hills!’ And before you could say, ‘Whose shout?’
The pubs were empty, sentences hung in mid-air,
Bar-flies, not even bothering to wipe the froth from their whiskers,
Were out of the door and running,
Old age forgotten: to see them cover the ground
Was, if nothing more, an inspiring example to youngsters.
“Kiss of Death”
What I fear from you
Elegant ladies who move
With stately step and
Heads held high, eyes clear
Around and about your ordered
Drawing-room world,
Is not these delicate facts in themselves
(The tune you are moving to
Finished long ago).
Primp as you will your
Concept of yourselves
(Stand in a pose by the mantel,
Shoulders just so,
Toy with a wine-glass,
A chivalrous opponent, words)
—But of your charity
Regard my feelings:
Promise me one thing only—that the next
Slim volume you take up with a rapturous cry
Shall never be mine
—I am too young to die…
From “Katrina”:
We do not know, but fear
The telephone call from a nurse whose distant sympathy
Will be the measure of our helplessness. Your twin brother’s
Two-month-old vigour hurts us…
From “Life-cycle”:
And the tides of life will be the tides of the home-team’s fortunes
– the reckless proposal after the one point win,
the wedding and honeymoon after the grand final…
“Good Sport”
Good sport, she laughed about her weight
And jogged about the court in shorts,
Her butt the butt of many a joke
—She turned the other cheek in sports
Which left her flustered, sweating, still
So quick to rally to the wit
Of friend or stranger you would swear
If anything she welcomed it…
Her husband, then, was most surprised
To find, returning from a trip,
She’d hanged herself, in what for her
Was thoroughly bad sportsmanship.
“Prison Alphabet”
Behind the walls
the walls begin,
behind the bars
are bars
A can make a knife of tin
B can cut out stars
C can get you what you want
a needle, drink or smoke
D can laugh through broken teeth
E can tell a joke
F can fake a heart-attack
G can throw a fit
H can write a letter home
as quick as you can spit
I can con the chaplain
J can con the ‘con’
K will know someone to ask
just where your wife has gone
L can keep an eye out
M can pass the word
N can hear the gospel truth
and then forget he heard
O will know which warder
can be got at—and the price
P will offer nothing
but a lot of free advice
Q will want no part of it
R will not be told
S will roll a cigarette
and shudder with the cold
T will hum a lonely tune
U will turn his back
V will lie as still as death
W will crack
X will read his bible
day by holy day
Y with eyes like torches
will burn the bars away
and Z, poor Z, will think the walls
must end where they begin
and that a man, outside, will be
the same as he went in.
All of these poems are from Condolences of the Season, described as containing “the best of Bruce Dawe’s earlier books… The unavailability of his first three books has made such a selection a necessity”. And here’s a few more to search out if you take my advice and make your own exploration:
“Two Songs for a Bicentenary Year”
“On First Being the Subject of a Question in a Late Afternoon Television Quiz Programme”
“On the Present Chinese Government Suppression of Student-Worker Dissent” particularly the fifth of the five poems that comprise this subtitled “Description of an Idea”
“Unless Things Change”
“Planning a Time-Capsule”
“A Literature Teacher Looks Ahead”

