Elizabeth Spann Craig's Blog, page 145
October 31, 2013
On Translation

Translator Julie Rose has translated some of France’s
most highly prized writers, both classical and contemporary and is best known
for her critically acclaimed translation of Victor Hugo’s masterpiece,
Les Misérables. Rose has always been an avid
reader of crime fiction. She just translated The Greenland Breach by Bernard Besson, a cli-fi spy novel recently published in English
by Le French Book.
How did you get started in translation?
For me it started
when I moved to France in the 1980s, after graduating from Sydney University
and scoring a doctoral scholarship from the French government. The scholarship
wouldn’t have kept a gal in kirs royaux,
should it have been required to, so I did what everyone else did: I taught
English to French people in firms all over town and interpreted for visiting
delegations of administrators and business people of all stripes.
Interpreting was a
baptism of fire and it sharpened my focus. It led to a lot of related
translation work, as well as a lot of lovely long lunches.
Literary translators
can despise the technical, commercial and legal stuff. I like it. I like having
the illusion that I know about the “real world.” And it’s stood me in good
stead, particularly with Paul Virilio, France’s great critic of the modern moment
who talks a lot about technological innovations and their downsides. And, even
more so, with Victor Hugo.
Yes, tell us about Victor Hugo.
Les Misérables has to be the major highlight
of my translating career so far. Victor Hugo’s interest in the real world was
encyclopedic. He was never content to mention a thing, whether it was man-made,
like lace or jet beads or sewerage systems; or whether it was a natural
phenomenon. He had to know how it was made or formed and explore all its
features in minute detail.
That forensic
interest of Hugo’s, combined with his social awareness and spiritual and
emotional depth, make his great masterpiece as potent as ever. I loved
translating it, but it took three years and was horribly intense. I couldn’t
have done it without my very supportive husband and our energetic dog: she and
I frolicked over hill and dale every day for hours. That gave me the stamina to
keep going - and the love. Les Misérables
is all about love... and what happens when it’s missing or corrupted.
Why translate The Greenland Breach?
This is an
action-packed thriller. It’s as fast-paced and racy as a manga comic. That’s
not a putdown. Besson has an unerringly dramatic sense of structure. He shifts
the action constantly from one part of Greenland to another, and from Greenland
to Paris and Paris to the ship in the Arctic Ocean and back to France – Le
Havre, the Morvan, Normandy. It becomes symphonic, in a military kind of way,
as Besson whips up the action and the various times of the action (Paris time,
Nuuk time, etc.) into a series of crescendos on all fronts. It’s spellbinding,
and exhilarating. But all that swirling movement and the “dirty deeds” that
propel it have a point: they stamp this as melodrama. And the thing about
melodrama, as G.K. Chesterton once said, is that it’s sensational: the
audience’s reward is tears... or, in this case, floods of adrenalin. We are
always in the action. That makes us a vital component of the plot.
Did you face any particular challenges translating The Greenland Breach?
The biggest
challenge as far as terminology goes, for me, in a way, was the boat. One
strand of the action takes place on a ship that has been exploring Greenland’s
icecap. I was born and bred in Sydney, Australia, a uniquely beautiful city
built around water. Boating’s very big. But I’m a landlubber, or maybe a fish.
I like being in the water, not on it. I kept a long list by my keyboard of
perfectly banal, but to me mysterious, words like “bulkhead,” “stem,”
“forecastle”/ “fo’c’sle,” and even “starboard” and “portside” – always have to
think twice before I remember which is which.
The first “adult”
book I ever read as a child was a novel by Hammond Innes, set on a ship. The
sulfurous, claustrophobic, isolated world of that ship has stayed with me as a
locus of foul play and dirty dealing. Besson’s ship is exactly that, and more.
Death is always looming, from within and without.
****
A cli-fi spy
novel by prizewinning novelist and former top-level French intelligence
officer

The Greenland Breach by Bernard Besson
is now available. This eco-thriller has environmental catastrophe, geopolitical
fallout, freelance spies and Bond-like action. The Arctic ice caps are breaking
up. Europe and the East Coast of the United States brace for a tidal wave.
Meanwhile, former French intelligence officer John Spencer Larivière, his
karate-trained, steamy Eurasian partner Victoire, and their bisexual
computer-genius sidekick Luc pick up an ordinary freelance assignment that
quickly leads them into the glacial silence of the great north, where a
merciless war is being waged for control of discoveries that will change the
future of humanity. Bestselling author Jon Land calls it “a spectacular
thriller.” Translated by award-winning Les
Misérables translator Julie Rose.
Published on October 31, 2013 21:01
October 29, 2013
Who Says You Can't Judge a Book By Its Cover?
by Rebecca Yount
As a child I had a love affair
with book covers.
Wesley
Dennis's artwork that graced Marguerite Henry's
stories
drew me in like a magnet attracts metal.
So,
too, Arthur Rackham's illustrated edition of Kenneth Grahame's The Wind in
the Willows. It was Rackham's cover that initially attracted me to
the book that would become one of the most beloved of my childhood.
To this day, I cherish memories of the "olde fashioned" illustrations
from my early edition of Mother Goose. At times I merely flipped
through the pages to revel in the pictures, rather than read the nonsensical
verses.
And
I surrendered to shameless vapors over Beatrix Potter's charming illustrations
for Peter Rabbit and her other tales.
My
point is this: these evocative covers led me to read those books and their
successors. In short, a passion for the cover preceded my love for the
story.
A
cover can make or break a book. If it fails to convey the essence of the
story, the buyer will move on. This is especially true for a first-time
author: the only thing readers have to go on is your book's cover. Does
it attract them? Does it intrigue them? Does it speak to
them? Does it compel them to flip through the pages, attempting to divine
your book's contents?
Ideally
a cover should announce to the prospective reader, "This book is going to
rock your world!"
I
am a new author, having had my debut crime novel, A Death in C Minor,
published as an e-book in the summer of 2012. The following November, my second
book in the series, The Erlking, was also published as an e-book. I
released the third title, The Ravenhoe Cauldron, on June 30th.
I
have been fortunate to work with Sarah Cotur, who manages to divine my
thoughts. Being a graphic designer, Sarah is visual while I am
verbal. While I am garrulous, she is a woman of few words. However,
what Sarah does say matters.
Somehow
she and I have managed to override our individual quirks while having fun along
the way.
"Designing
book covers, particularly electronic, is a relatively new design endeavor for
me," Sarah admits.
"As
a designer," she continues, "I have learned that asking the right
questions and listening well is as important as the design skills
themselves. From our first conversation, Rebecca immediately had an idea
about how she'd like to visually represent her novel. I didn't have to
ask too many questions.
"However,
it can be difficult to extract exactly the image a client (author) has
envisioned.... Even if the design is completely wrong, [designer and
author] will be literally 'on the same page' and can build upon feedback from
that first draft."
As
Sarah infers, our initial effort was further complicated by the book being
electronic, rather than hard copy. Does an e-book cover really
matter? Is rain wet?
Whatever
early differences Sarah and I may have had regarding concept, we both knew that
both covers had to knock my books out of the park.
Our
initial conversation about A Death in C Minor went something like this:
Me: "The story is about a mysterious man who is murdered with his own
kitchen cleaver."
Sarah: "Hmm."
Me: "So could you work up a cover with a bloody cleaver --
perhaps having it chop through the head of a musical note, since the female
protagonist is a concert pianist?"
Sarah: "I think you may need an illustrator."
Me: "But I want you."
Sarah: (Pause). "Okay, I'll take a crack at it. 'Talk to you
in a week."
A week later Sarah e-mailed her draft cover: a bloody cleaver impaling the head
of an equally bloody musical note. She had created exactly what I had
asked her to do.
And it was all wrong -- which was entirely my fault.
So it was back to the drawing board.
Our second conversation:
Me: "Gee, Sarah, this cover is really gory!"
Sarah: (Silence).
Me: "Then again, it's what I had asked for, isn't it?"
Sarah: "Perhaps some background would help."
Me: "How about a suggestion of the story's English rural village in
the background? And a reference to a musical score?"
Sarah
e-mailed her concept of the background to me: a village in the moonlight with a
ripped musical score slicing across the graphics. It was pure genius!
And so A Death in C Minor is graced with a cover that has received
effusive praise. It evokes the story, reaching out to the reader and
announcing, "If you enter this picture and walk with me down that moonlit
village path, you'll be in for the adventure of your life."
Conceptualizing
the covers for the next two titles was easier. By that time Sarah and I
were completely comfortable working together. As a result, she created
two more knock-out designs that have also attracted considerable praise.
So
don't ever delude yourself into thinking that e-book covers don't matter.
A brilliant one can take the book to places you never imagined.
Is
there a Pulitzer Prize for book covers? A National Book Award cover
prize? Is there something akin to a book cover Academy Award?
If
not, there ought to be.
Rebecca Yount's Mick Chandra series, A Death in C Minor, The Erlking,
and The
Ravenhoe Cauldron are published in e-book format and are available from
all major vendors. Her website is www.rebeccayount.com .

As a child I had a love affair
with book covers.
Wesley
Dennis's artwork that graced Marguerite Henry's
stories
drew me in like a magnet attracts metal.
So,
too, Arthur Rackham's illustrated edition of Kenneth Grahame's The Wind in
the Willows. It was Rackham's cover that initially attracted me to
the book that would become one of the most beloved of my childhood.
To this day, I cherish memories of the "olde fashioned" illustrations
from my early edition of Mother Goose. At times I merely flipped
through the pages to revel in the pictures, rather than read the nonsensical
verses.
And
I surrendered to shameless vapors over Beatrix Potter's charming illustrations
for Peter Rabbit and her other tales.
My
point is this: these evocative covers led me to read those books and their
successors. In short, a passion for the cover preceded my love for the
story.
A
cover can make or break a book. If it fails to convey the essence of the
story, the buyer will move on. This is especially true for a first-time
author: the only thing readers have to go on is your book's cover. Does
it attract them? Does it intrigue them? Does it speak to
them? Does it compel them to flip through the pages, attempting to divine
your book's contents?
Ideally
a cover should announce to the prospective reader, "This book is going to
rock your world!"
I
am a new author, having had my debut crime novel, A Death in C Minor,
published as an e-book in the summer of 2012. The following November, my second
book in the series, The Erlking, was also published as an e-book. I
released the third title, The Ravenhoe Cauldron, on June 30th.
I
have been fortunate to work with Sarah Cotur, who manages to divine my
thoughts. Being a graphic designer, Sarah is visual while I am
verbal. While I am garrulous, she is a woman of few words. However,
what Sarah does say matters.
Somehow
she and I have managed to override our individual quirks while having fun along
the way.
"Designing
book covers, particularly electronic, is a relatively new design endeavor for
me," Sarah admits.
"As
a designer," she continues, "I have learned that asking the right
questions and listening well is as important as the design skills
themselves. From our first conversation, Rebecca immediately had an idea
about how she'd like to visually represent her novel. I didn't have to
ask too many questions.
"However,
it can be difficult to extract exactly the image a client (author) has
envisioned.... Even if the design is completely wrong, [designer and
author] will be literally 'on the same page' and can build upon feedback from
that first draft."
As
Sarah infers, our initial effort was further complicated by the book being
electronic, rather than hard copy. Does an e-book cover really
matter? Is rain wet?
Whatever
early differences Sarah and I may have had regarding concept, we both knew that
both covers had to knock my books out of the park.
Our
initial conversation about A Death in C Minor went something like this:
Me: "The story is about a mysterious man who is murdered with his own
kitchen cleaver."
Sarah: "Hmm."
Me: "So could you work up a cover with a bloody cleaver --
perhaps having it chop through the head of a musical note, since the female
protagonist is a concert pianist?"
Sarah: "I think you may need an illustrator."
Me: "But I want you."
Sarah: (Pause). "Okay, I'll take a crack at it. 'Talk to you
in a week."
A week later Sarah e-mailed her draft cover: a bloody cleaver impaling the head
of an equally bloody musical note. She had created exactly what I had
asked her to do.
And it was all wrong -- which was entirely my fault.
So it was back to the drawing board.
Our second conversation:
Me: "Gee, Sarah, this cover is really gory!"
Sarah: (Silence).
Me: "Then again, it's what I had asked for, isn't it?"
Sarah: "Perhaps some background would help."
Me: "How about a suggestion of the story's English rural village in
the background? And a reference to a musical score?"
Sarah
e-mailed her concept of the background to me: a village in the moonlight with a
ripped musical score slicing across the graphics. It was pure genius!
And so A Death in C Minor is graced with a cover that has received
effusive praise. It evokes the story, reaching out to the reader and
announcing, "If you enter this picture and walk with me down that moonlit
village path, you'll be in for the adventure of your life."
Conceptualizing
the covers for the next two titles was easier. By that time Sarah and I
were completely comfortable working together. As a result, she created
two more knock-out designs that have also attracted considerable praise.
So
don't ever delude yourself into thinking that e-book covers don't matter.
A brilliant one can take the book to places you never imagined.
Is
there a Pulitzer Prize for book covers? A National Book Award cover
prize? Is there something akin to a book cover Academy Award?
If
not, there ought to be.

Rebecca Yount's Mick Chandra series, A Death in C Minor, The Erlking,
and The
Ravenhoe Cauldron are published in e-book format and are available from
all major vendors. Her website is www.rebeccayount.com .
Published on October 29, 2013 21:01
Who Says You Can't Judge a Book By It's Cover?
by Rebecca Yount
As a child I had a love affair
with book covers.
Wesley
Dennis's artwork that graced Marguerite Henry's
stories
drew me in like a magnet attracts metal.
So,
too, Arthur Rackham's illustrated edition of Kenneth Grahame's The Wind in
the Willows. It was Rackham's cover that initially attracted me to
the book that would become one of the most beloved of my childhood.
To this day, I cherish memories of the "olde fashioned" illustrations
from my early edition of Mother Goose. At times I merely flipped
through the pages to revel in the pictures, rather than read the nonsensical
verses.
And
I surrendered to shameless vapors over Beatrix Potter's charming illustrations
for Peter Rabbit and her other tales.
My
point is this: these evocative covers led me to read those books and their
successors. In short, a passion for the cover preceded my love for the
story.
A
cover can make or break a book. If it fails to convey the essence of the
story, the buyer will move on. This is especially true for a first-time
author: the only thing readers have to go on is your book's cover. Does
it attract them? Does it intrigue them? Does it speak to
them? Does it compel them to flip through the pages, attempting to divine
your book's contents?
Ideally
a cover should announce to the prospective reader, "This book is going to
rock your world!"
I
am a new author, having had my debut crime novel, A Death in C Minor,
published as an e-book in the summer of 2012. The following November, my second
book in the series, The Erlking, was also published as an e-book. I
released the third title, The Ravenhoe Cauldron, on June 30th.
I
have been fortunate to work with Sarah Cotur, who manages to divine my
thoughts. Being a graphic designer, Sarah is visual while I am
verbal. While I am garrulous, she is a woman of few words. However,
what Sarah does say matters.
Somehow
she and I have managed to override our individual quirks while having fun along
the way.
"Designing
book covers, particularly electronic, is a relatively new design endeavor for
me," Sarah admits.
"As
a designer," she continues, "I have learned that asking the right
questions and listening well is as important as the design skills
themselves. From our first conversation, Rebecca immediately had an idea
about how she'd like to visually represent her novel. I didn't have to
ask too many questions.
"However,
it can be difficult to extract exactly the image a client (author) has
envisioned.... Even if the design is completely wrong, [designer and
author] will be literally 'on the same page' and can build upon feedback from
that first draft."
As
Sarah infers, our initial effort was further complicated by the book being
electronic, rather than hard copy. Does an e-book cover really
matter? Is rain wet?
Whatever
early differences Sarah and I may have had regarding concept, we both knew that
both covers had to knock my books out of the park.
Our
initial conversation about A Death in C Minor went something like this:
Me: "The story is about a mysterious man who is murdered with his own
kitchen cleaver."
Sarah: "Hmm."
Me: "So could you work up a cover with a bloody cleaver --
perhaps having it chop through the head of a musical note, since the female
protagonist is a concert pianist?"
Sarah: "I think you may need an illustrator."
Me: "But I want you."
Sarah: (Pause). "Okay, I'll take a crack at it. 'Talk to you
in a week."
A week later Sarah e-mailed her draft cover: a bloody cleaver impaling the head
of an equally bloody musical note. She had created exactly what I had
asked her to do.
And it was all wrong -- which was entirely my fault.
So it was back to the drawing board.
Our second conversation:
Me: "Gee, Sarah, this cover is really gory!"
Sarah: (Silence).
Me: "Then again, it's what I had asked for, isn't it?"
Sarah: "Perhaps some background would help."
Me: "How about a suggestion of the story's English rural village in
the background? And a reference to a musical score?"
Sarah
e-mailed her concept of the background to me: a village in the moonlight with a
ripped musical score slicing across the graphics. It was pure genius!
And so A Death in C Minor is graced with a cover that has received
effusive praise. It evokes the story, reaching out to the reader and
announcing, "If you enter this picture and walk with me down that moonlit
village path, you'll be in for the adventure of your life."
Conceptualizing
the covers for the next two titles was easier. By that time Sarah and I
were completely comfortable working together. As a result, she created
two more knock-out designs that have also attracted considerable praise.
So
don't ever delude yourself into thinking that e-book covers don't matter.
A brilliant one can take the book to places you never imagined.
Is
there a Pulitzer Prize for book covers? A National Book Award cover
prize? Is there something akin to a book cover Academy Award?
If
not, there ought to be.
Rebecca Yount's Mick Chandra series, A Death in C Minor, The Erlking,
and The
Ravenhoe Cauldron are published in e-book format and are available from
all major vendors. Her website is www.rebeccayount.com .

As a child I had a love affair
with book covers.
Wesley
Dennis's artwork that graced Marguerite Henry's
stories
drew me in like a magnet attracts metal.
So,
too, Arthur Rackham's illustrated edition of Kenneth Grahame's The Wind in
the Willows. It was Rackham's cover that initially attracted me to
the book that would become one of the most beloved of my childhood.
To this day, I cherish memories of the "olde fashioned" illustrations
from my early edition of Mother Goose. At times I merely flipped
through the pages to revel in the pictures, rather than read the nonsensical
verses.
And
I surrendered to shameless vapors over Beatrix Potter's charming illustrations
for Peter Rabbit and her other tales.
My
point is this: these evocative covers led me to read those books and their
successors. In short, a passion for the cover preceded my love for the
story.
A
cover can make or break a book. If it fails to convey the essence of the
story, the buyer will move on. This is especially true for a first-time
author: the only thing readers have to go on is your book's cover. Does
it attract them? Does it intrigue them? Does it speak to
them? Does it compel them to flip through the pages, attempting to divine
your book's contents?
Ideally
a cover should announce to the prospective reader, "This book is going to
rock your world!"
I
am a new author, having had my debut crime novel, A Death in C Minor,
published as an e-book in the summer of 2012. The following November, my second
book in the series, The Erlking, was also published as an e-book. I
released the third title, The Ravenhoe Cauldron, on June 30th.
I
have been fortunate to work with Sarah Cotur, who manages to divine my
thoughts. Being a graphic designer, Sarah is visual while I am
verbal. While I am garrulous, she is a woman of few words. However,
what Sarah does say matters.
Somehow
she and I have managed to override our individual quirks while having fun along
the way.
"Designing
book covers, particularly electronic, is a relatively new design endeavor for
me," Sarah admits.
"As
a designer," she continues, "I have learned that asking the right
questions and listening well is as important as the design skills
themselves. From our first conversation, Rebecca immediately had an idea
about how she'd like to visually represent her novel. I didn't have to
ask too many questions.
"However,
it can be difficult to extract exactly the image a client (author) has
envisioned.... Even if the design is completely wrong, [designer and
author] will be literally 'on the same page' and can build upon feedback from
that first draft."
As
Sarah infers, our initial effort was further complicated by the book being
electronic, rather than hard copy. Does an e-book cover really
matter? Is rain wet?
Whatever
early differences Sarah and I may have had regarding concept, we both knew that
both covers had to knock my books out of the park.
Our
initial conversation about A Death in C Minor went something like this:
Me: "The story is about a mysterious man who is murdered with his own
kitchen cleaver."
Sarah: "Hmm."
Me: "So could you work up a cover with a bloody cleaver --
perhaps having it chop through the head of a musical note, since the female
protagonist is a concert pianist?"
Sarah: "I think you may need an illustrator."
Me: "But I want you."
Sarah: (Pause). "Okay, I'll take a crack at it. 'Talk to you
in a week."
A week later Sarah e-mailed her draft cover: a bloody cleaver impaling the head
of an equally bloody musical note. She had created exactly what I had
asked her to do.
And it was all wrong -- which was entirely my fault.
So it was back to the drawing board.
Our second conversation:
Me: "Gee, Sarah, this cover is really gory!"
Sarah: (Silence).
Me: "Then again, it's what I had asked for, isn't it?"
Sarah: "Perhaps some background would help."
Me: "How about a suggestion of the story's English rural village in
the background? And a reference to a musical score?"
Sarah
e-mailed her concept of the background to me: a village in the moonlight with a
ripped musical score slicing across the graphics. It was pure genius!
And so A Death in C Minor is graced with a cover that has received
effusive praise. It evokes the story, reaching out to the reader and
announcing, "If you enter this picture and walk with me down that moonlit
village path, you'll be in for the adventure of your life."
Conceptualizing
the covers for the next two titles was easier. By that time Sarah and I
were completely comfortable working together. As a result, she created
two more knock-out designs that have also attracted considerable praise.
So
don't ever delude yourself into thinking that e-book covers don't matter.
A brilliant one can take the book to places you never imagined.
Is
there a Pulitzer Prize for book covers? A National Book Award cover
prize? Is there something akin to a book cover Academy Award?
If
not, there ought to be.

Rebecca Yount's Mick Chandra series, A Death in C Minor, The Erlking,
and The
Ravenhoe Cauldron are published in e-book format and are available from
all major vendors. Her website is www.rebeccayount.com .
Published on October 29, 2013 21:01
October 28, 2013
Deepening the Mystery
by Paul Anthony Shortt, @PAShortt

mystery writer, I have enjoyed including mystery elements in Locked Within Silent Oath. Nathan Shepherd started off his journey
investigating mysterious deaths and disappearances. His eidetic memory helps
him piece together clues and figure out what his enemies are planning.
and
Many urban fantasy
series include elements of detective fiction. It’s common for the protagonist
to have a job, or some form of responsibility, that relates to crime
investigation. For Nathan, what started out as a strange death led to the
discovery of the supernatural world he was once a part of. One thing which I
did, which is a little different to many urban fantasies, was use Nathan’s
past-life memories to explore the setting and take that opportunity to make
other characters draw him into this world, rather than push him away. It was
the antagonists, Dorian and Morningway, who held the mystery, not the world
itself.
In Silent Oath, this practice continues. The
state of Nathan’s world is laid bare to the reader. He is working to create a
new conclave that can protect New York from the Council of Chains. However,
there is more mystery to be solved, with the arrival of Athamar, an enemy from
Nathan’s previous incarnations, and Elena, the reincarnation of his lost lover.
Until his memories fully return, can Nathan trust that these people are who he
expects? What is it that drives Athamar to hunt Nathan across lifetimes? Why
has it been so long since he and Elena were reborn? And why is it now, when
Athamar also returns to bring chaos to the city, that Nathan and Elena have
found each other at all?
When creating a
series, mystery or not, every answer must lead to another question. This way,
the reader is hooked and drawn into the characters’ turmoil. They share the
protagonist’s need to find the truth, even when that truth may be difficult to
accept.
An ideal mystery has
multiple layers. There’s the surface mystery, determining what the villain is
up to, why they’re pursuing this goal, and how they plan to achieve it. This is
the mystery that is most often actively investigated, the course of events that
snares the protagonist’s thoughts and drives them on.
Then there’s the
personal mystery. Why does the protagonist have such feelings for another
person? Why does the antagonist hate the hero so much? What could the hero have
possibly done to turn another person so completely against them? This mystery
may only be a mystery to the reader, but in Nathan’s case, because he has not
yet remembered all of his past lives, the reader shares in each of his
revelations and setbacks. Before this ordeal is over, Nathan will learn things
that make him question everything he thought he knew.
****

A
child at heart who turned to writing and roleplaying games when there simply
weren't enough action figures to play out the stories he wanted, Paul Anthony
Shortt has been writing all his life. Growing up surrounded by music, film and
theatre gave him a deep love of all forms of storytelling, each teaching him
something new he could use. When not playing with the people in his head, he
enjoys cooking and regular meet-ups with his gaming group.
Paul lives
in Ireland with his wife Jen and their dogs, Pepper and Jasper. Their first
child, Conor William Henry Shortt, was born on July 11th, 2011. He passed away
three days later, but brought love and joy into their lives and those of their
friends. The following year, Jen gave birth to twins, Amy and Erica, and is now
expecting their fourth child.
Paul's first novel, Locked
Within, was released on November 6th, 2012, by WiDo Publishing. Silent Oath is the second book in this
urban fantasy trilogy.
***

Hope
has returned to New York City. Nathan Shepherd leads a small band of dedicated
fighters against the Council of Chains and the city's supernatural masters. But
it's not enough. Because from the shadows of Nathan's former lives comes an old
enemy, one who knows terrible secrets that Nathan has not yet remembered,
secrets that could undo everything he has fought for.
Nathan's
only chance to uncover the memories of his previous existence, and to conquer
these new forces of evil, lies in Elena DeSantis. A woman he has fought beside
in past lifetimes. A woman he has loved.
Together, Nathan and Elena are the only future the city has.
Published on October 28, 2013 21:01
The Slow Release—Not the End of the World
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

It used to be, and
still mainly is, in traditional publishing, that you wanted a really strong
book release. My publishers like to see
good pre-orders and a high sale volume for the first month of a book’s release. They want books sold off bookstore shelves
and few returns.
That’s mostly because, in the print
tradition, if you didn’t have a strong start and your books hung out on
bookstore shelves too long, the stores would quickly end up shipping those
books back to the publisher to make room for other titles.
But with digital sales, we’re in it for
the long haul. Amazon will keep those
books for sale—there are no returns.
Having a strong start is nice…but not vital. It’s more important that we realize we’ve got
a long time to keep ourselves and our books visible—that the online
relationships and networking that we’re doing is going to continue for a very
long time.
The first time I put a self-published
book up in 2011, it took a while to get sales moving. Luckily, I’d read enough blogs at the time to
know that this was how it worked in the digital world. It wasn’t as if I really promoted the
release—I think I mentioned it on the blog.
I believe I made a Facebook mention (something along the lines of: If you’ve enjoyed my other series, hope
you’ll check out the new release in my Myrtle Clover series).
Slowly, though, it started to catch
on. What really accelerates sales is
when Amazon’s algorithms (whatever they may be…and none of us really knows what
they entail) start working in your favor.
I keep checking my book’s page to see when the “customers who bought
this also bought_____” shows up. It’s a tremendous relief when it does, because
my part is pretty much done at that point.
The sales escalate and I can start ignoring the sales and focus on
writing my next book.
Each of my self-published books has had a
slow start. Some took a week or more to
get going and others a little less than a week.
I know that Amazon sends emails to readers when I have a Penguin book
release—some folks share the emails they receive with me. But I don’t think
they’ve ever emailed readers to let them know about a new self-published
release of mine. At least, no one has
ever mentioned it. Obviously…that would
help. But their algorithm works enough
in my favor that I’m not too concerned about the lack of promo emails. And the free book promo that I run for
another book in the same series also helps with sales for the entire series.
Industry expert Jane Friedman’s new online magazine for
writers, Scratch, had an interesting
article recently in its preview issue: “The Age of the
Algorithm.” The article states:
Author Joanna Penn writes, in How to Market a Book, “Launch sales are
generally disappointing compared to what happens once the Amazon algorithms
kick in and you get some traction around reviews and reputation.” Likewise,
novelist Hugh Howey, who signed with a traditional publisher after succeeding
on his own, said during an industry conference in May, “I don’t have a
timeframe for a book to do well. I let readers be the one to discover it and
tell everyone. They can do it with a level of excitement that’s more genuine
than me. It’s a real slow burn.” See more of the article here.
I’ve gotten to the point where I’m not
restless while I wait for the book to catch on with readers. But I have friends who have other strategies
for a spike in sales at the start of a launch.
I’ve seen them:
Mention it on Facebook and Twitter (once
or twice is definitely enough there).
Throw a Goodreads giveaway for print
copies.
Send a newsletter to inform readers that
they’ve had a release.
Some have signed up for services like Wattpad or Story
Cartel to get reviews going. The
number of reviews a book has seems definitely linked into Amazon’s algorithm,
although no one knows to what extent.
Blog tour.
Whatever your strategy, it should include
writing that next book. All of the problems I’ve seen with writers who drive
others nuts with over-promoting is tied to the fact that they’re putting all of
their energy into that one book. So much
better to do some light promo while working on book two. Because one thing seems clear…the more real
estate you own on an online retailer like Amazon, the better it is for sales.
Thoughts about the longevity of book life
at online retailers? Have you ever had a
book that was slow to start? What kinds
of things do you do to spur sales for a launched book?
Image: MorgueFile: helicopterjeff
Published on October 28, 2013 02:40
October 27, 2013
Twitterific
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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@LydiaCrichton
How to Write a Screenplay in 3 Weeks: http://dld.bz/cSDMM @raindance
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Conquer Your Fear of Screwing Up the Book
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The Opposite of Success: http://dld.bz/cSDNw @rachellegardner
The 5 Keys to Being Unstoppable in Your
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Finding your next book, or, the discovery
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A clever book promo by @HughHowey: http://dld.bz/cSHeq @jonathangunson
Is Genre a Straitjacket? http://dld.bz/cSHes @AnthonyEhlers
The Dark Stories Dark Writers Tell in the
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Creative writing tips taught in writing
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22 storytelling rules: http://dld.bz/cSHfF
Why superheroes & supervillains need
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"No, I Am Not Going To Write Your
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How Do You Write? Answers of Notable
Screenwriters May Help Your Process: http://dld.bz/cSHgf
@nofilmschool
Dear Young Writer: http://dld.bz/cSHgr @susankayequinn
Plot and character are equally important:
http://dld.bz/cSHwg @mythicscribes @KMWeiland
Tips for writing better blog titles: http://dld.bz/cQ6y8 @MarcyKennedy
Thoughts on Other Cultures and Diversity
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Formatting for iTunes: http://dld.bz/cSHwC @susankayequinn
5 Good Habits for Writers: http://dld.bz/cSHwG @ava_jae
How screwed up can your hero be and still
be a hero? http://dld.bz/cSHyx
@stephenwoodfin @ventgalleries
Good rejections: http://dld.bz/cSHyC @WriterNancyJane
Testing Clarity and Wordiness in an
Opening Scene: http://dld.bz/cSK2p
@Janice_Hardy
What 1 writer learned by growing up with
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15 kinds of tweets that will get your
blog posts shared more: http://dld.bz/cSK2V
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6 things 1 writer wishes she'd known
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@TA_Martin
A writer's 10 writing confessions: http://dld.bz/cSK3D @roxannecrouse
5 writing mistakes: http://dld.bz/cSM6E @robertbruce76
Long to Write a Novel? Join in the Annual
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Pros and cons of self-publishing: http://dld.bz/cSM6S @Kerrie_Flanagan
How Beats Helped a Writer Self-Publish an
Amazon Hit: http://dld.bz/cSM6Y @ChrisKohout
Tools and skills for a successful
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@Indie_Jane
Talking Heads, Hearing Voices and the
Disappearing Narrator: http://dld.bz/cSM74
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5 Signs You're Hiding Behind Your
Writing—and 5 Ways to Use It as a Mirror Instead: http://dld.bz/cSM7C
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Writing a scene that works: http://dld.bz/cSM7R @woodwardkaren
Social Media Quicksand: http://dld.bz/cSNZ4 @susankayequinn
Rules, Discipline, and the Paradox of
Creativity: http://dld.bz/cSNZF @jeffgoins
Are Beat Sheets Intimidating? Cut through
the Clutter: http://dld.bz/cSNZN @jemigold
How to Start Your Novel: http://dld.bz/cSNZV @ChuckSambuchino
3 Tips On Cleaning Up Your Twitter
Account: http://dld.bz/cSPac @JennyHansenCA
The Best Online Photo Editing Tool is
Google+: http://dld.bz/cSPan
15 Questions That Will Define Your Book
Market: http://dld.bz/cSPar @wherewriterswin
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Mapping your story world: http://dld.bz/cSPa8 @Alvarez_Justin
Tips for writing for teens: http://dld.bz/cSPaJ
Book-Writing as Parenting: A Way to
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Facebook Groups for Indie Authors: http://dld.bz/cSQWF @cateartios
Ebook Pricing: What's The Perfect Number?
http://dld.bz/cSQYc @mollygreene
Choosing the Right Viewpoint and Tense
for Your Fiction: http://dld.bz/cSQYe
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5 Reasons to Use a Facebook Profile (Not
a Page) to Build Platform: http://dld.bz/cSQY4
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How to Please Your Editor—Without Losing
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Critique Technique—Confused Storyline: http://dld.bz/cSTdV @Ross_B_Lampert
Stop Self-Editing While Writing: http://dld.bz/cSTeb @larin20
Creativity Is Really Just Persistence,
And Science Can Prove It: http://dld.bz/cSTeA
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Your Characters Are Lost: 4 Ways to Find
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Radio Interview Pointers: http://dld.bz/cSTeK @carolewyer
9 Key Elements of a Great Author Media
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How Searchable are Your Book's Title and
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Dos and Don'ts of Pitching Journalists on
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5 writing exercises: http://dld.bz/cSTg9
Why 1 writer isn't a fan of tip jars: http://dld.bz/cSTgF @author_sullivan
Promo overkill: http://dld.bz/cSWtv @scarlettparrish
Why 5-Star Book Reviews are Utter
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8 tips for subtitling your book: http://dld.bz/cSWtX @JonAcuff
15 Ways to Survive as a Freelancer: http://dld.bz/cSWtZ @GlennStout
Writing In A Roomful of Elephants: http://dld.bz/cSWuj @JadedIbisPress
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How to Overcome Anxiety as a Writer: http://dld.bz/cSWuq @111publishing
3 Simple Tips for Finding Your Story: http://dld.bz/cSWuv
30 Mantras To Keep In Mind To Write
Better: http://dld.bz/cSWuz @ZionAmalRafeeq
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Series, Go High or Low? http://dld.bz/cSWu7
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How to develop a writer's instinct: http://dld.bz/cSWuB @nailyournovel
The Ebook Market No Author Should Ignore:
Think Globally: http://dld.bz/cSWuG
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Write short to write long: http://dld.bz/cSWuN @sciwrihandbook
7 easy questions to shape your story (and
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Tag Lines to Hook a Reader: http://dld.bz/cSWvB @novelrocket
Don't like doing promo? Don't write a
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How to pre-plot a series: http://dld.bz/cSWvM @plotwhisperer
Cover conferences: http://dld.bz/cSWwa
"Words are still the most powerful
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Are You In the Stare-Into-Space Phase of
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4 Reasons You Need a Business Plan for
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Published on October 27, 2013 04:55
October 24, 2013
Writing Our Region
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I know that my editors specifically
wanted a Southern writer for the two series I’m writing for Penguin. They do
get the South when they hire me on.
That being said, portraying a specific
region can be tricky. I think dialect
can be annoying to read, if you’re using it broadly. Southerners are fond of dropping gs, for
instance. That would get old after a
while. In fact, if you phonetically
wrote out Southern dialect, it would be incredibly difficult to read.
So what I aim for is using some Southern
vocabulary/colloquialism, and traditions/customs, climate, and common local
settings to help readers take a vicarious trip to the Southern US.
In dialogue, it’s also easier to bring it
out in a natural way. Many Southern women (and some men) use endearments in
addressing nearly everyone—even strangers. That’s something that’s easy to drop
into dialogue.
There are some words that are apparently
too obscure and cause readers to slow down or pop out of the story while they
try to decipher it. That’s not,
obviously, what we want. I’ve had
editors edit out a number of word choices that I didn’t think anything
about. But the reason I didn’t think
anything about them is because I’ve always lived in Southern states. So tote
as a verb went, buggy was quickly
dispatched for shopping cart (a particularly soulless substitution, I
thought), roll in terms of pranking (it
was fascinating having a discussion with my Manhattan-based editor on toilet
papering someone’s yard…it’s roll down
here, but apparently not up there). But
the one that particularly stumped me was when my editor asked me what the heck
an eye was (in terms of cooking). I emailed several friends and family before
responding to her. What else do you call it? You put your pot on an eye and bring the
water to a boil. What on earth could it
possibly be? No one had any ideas, so I
emailed her back and told her it was the black coil on top of the stove. She substituted heating
element. I shook my head over
that one but left it alone.
Traditions or customs are also important
ways to bring a region into your story. Food is hugely important in the South…
it’s not particularly healthy food, either.
So writing in fried chicken and potato salad and ham biscuits and
barbeque (I’ve got a whole series with
barbeque as a hook), pimento cheese sandwiches, black-eyed peas…it all goes in
to give readers a taste of the South.
Customs surrounding weddings and funerals
are thrown into the books, too. The fact that there is a huge food-centric
process to grieving here plays a part in my books (and provides my sleuth with
opportunities to interact with suspects).
The close-knit nature of many extended families in the South, the
willingness to talk with strangers (along with what might seem like a
contradictory suspicion of outsiders in small towns), and the slower pace of life.
Writing a region also involves bringing
in settings where people commonly interact—whether it’s a diner or a ball field, or a church. And it’s difficult to realistically write about
the South without bringing in church somehow, although I don’t touch religion
itself with a ten-foot pole. Actually,
now that I think of it, I’ve had two murders take place at church.
Even the old architecture—houses with big
verandas and space for rocking chairs.
Swimming pools, screen porches, and gobs of air conditioning.
Which brings in another element—the
weather and climate. The long
summers. And humidity that can almost
stop you in your tracks when you walk outside.
Do you focus on a particular region in
your writing? How do you pull a reader
in?
Image: MorgueFile: katmystiry

I know that my editors specifically
wanted a Southern writer for the two series I’m writing for Penguin. They do
get the South when they hire me on.
That being said, portraying a specific
region can be tricky. I think dialect
can be annoying to read, if you’re using it broadly. Southerners are fond of dropping gs, for
instance. That would get old after a
while. In fact, if you phonetically
wrote out Southern dialect, it would be incredibly difficult to read.
So what I aim for is using some Southern
vocabulary/colloquialism, and traditions/customs, climate, and common local
settings to help readers take a vicarious trip to the Southern US.
In dialogue, it’s also easier to bring it
out in a natural way. Many Southern women (and some men) use endearments in
addressing nearly everyone—even strangers. That’s something that’s easy to drop
into dialogue.
There are some words that are apparently
too obscure and cause readers to slow down or pop out of the story while they
try to decipher it. That’s not,
obviously, what we want. I’ve had
editors edit out a number of word choices that I didn’t think anything
about. But the reason I didn’t think
anything about them is because I’ve always lived in Southern states. So tote
as a verb went, buggy was quickly
dispatched for shopping cart (a particularly soulless substitution, I
thought), roll in terms of pranking (it
was fascinating having a discussion with my Manhattan-based editor on toilet
papering someone’s yard…it’s roll down
here, but apparently not up there). But
the one that particularly stumped me was when my editor asked me what the heck
an eye was (in terms of cooking). I emailed several friends and family before
responding to her. What else do you call it? You put your pot on an eye and bring the
water to a boil. What on earth could it
possibly be? No one had any ideas, so I
emailed her back and told her it was the black coil on top of the stove. She substituted heating
element. I shook my head over
that one but left it alone.
Traditions or customs are also important
ways to bring a region into your story. Food is hugely important in the South…
it’s not particularly healthy food, either.
So writing in fried chicken and potato salad and ham biscuits and
barbeque (I’ve got a whole series with
barbeque as a hook), pimento cheese sandwiches, black-eyed peas…it all goes in
to give readers a taste of the South.
Customs surrounding weddings and funerals
are thrown into the books, too. The fact that there is a huge food-centric
process to grieving here plays a part in my books (and provides my sleuth with
opportunities to interact with suspects).
The close-knit nature of many extended families in the South, the
willingness to talk with strangers (along with what might seem like a
contradictory suspicion of outsiders in small towns), and the slower pace of life.
Writing a region also involves bringing
in settings where people commonly interact—whether it’s a diner or a ball field, or a church. And it’s difficult to realistically write about
the South without bringing in church somehow, although I don’t touch religion
itself with a ten-foot pole. Actually,
now that I think of it, I’ve had two murders take place at church.
Even the old architecture—houses with big
verandas and space for rocking chairs.
Swimming pools, screen porches, and gobs of air conditioning.
Which brings in another element—the
weather and climate. The long
summers. And humidity that can almost
stop you in your tracks when you walk outside.
Do you focus on a particular region in
your writing? How do you pull a reader
in?
Image: MorgueFile: katmystiry
Published on October 24, 2013 21:01
October 22, 2013
Cover Conferences
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Traditional publishing is a funny
thing. It’s a hurry up-and-wait type
of business. Sometimes (quite frequently,
actually), everything moves at glacial speed.
But sometimes, things happen before you’re ready. And you never really know what’s going on
behind the scenes exactly to cause
either one.
I heard from my editor on Friday that
she’ll be attending—today, actually— the cover conference for the book that I’m
currently writing. This is a book that’s
due in January that will publish October 2014.
For some reason, everything that’s happened with this book has happened
earlier than I was ready for, and it’s made me a bit flustered. This is the same book where the teaser chapter
was due at the same time as the outline, but then the outline had requested
revisions…you remember.
This is the series where the editor (and
I love this editor—she’s very talented and I live in fear that she will be
promoted and won’t be my editor any longer), really likes me to be involved
with the cover process. Each time I
assure her that’s not necessary and I don’t know a darn thing about design—but
she’s good to keep at me and encourage me.
I’m sure, looking back now, that despite the fact I’ve dragged my feet
for every cover—it’s helped me out with the self-pubbed covers that I’m a good
deal involved in.
This is a cozy mystery, so there are
elements that need to be on the cover for branding both the genre and my
series. It will most definitely have a
corgi on the front of it, and I’m sure I would hear from the readers if it
didn’t. It will have a very peaceful,
picturesque scene with an element of danger in it—an overturned glass of red
wine, a knife to the side, a broken chair.
And, because the series hook involves quilting, there will be quilts.
The title was the first thing the editor
asked me about. She and the copy editors
had ideas for titles and she asked for my feedback on them. This is another area where I appreciate their
contacting me, but I know they usually have their own ideas for titles and
marketing plays a role. I do come up with ideas for titles…they tend to not use
them. :) But they’re very polite about
considering them.
Branding the covers in a series also
involves the way the title appears on the cover—font, appearance. It can even
go to the level of whether it’s an outdoor scene or an indoor scene.
My editor was going to attend the
conference with information off my old outline and I hadn’t updated her with a
new outline (oops) that reflected the changes we’d agreed on earlier. So…I agreed
to the changes she suggested, but didn’t correct the outline and send it to
her—instead, I scribbled the changes on my hard copy of the outline. That was clearly not helpful. Now I’m in a time crunch and don’t actually
want to stop to edit the outline and send it her way, especially since I’m
halfway through writing the book.
So she asked for the unedited copy that
I’ve written so far so that she could skim it for more ideas for setting the
cover using scenes from the book. This is the third time this has happened with
different series and now I hardly even blink an eye. Earlier, it would freak me completely out to
send what essentially was a disaster over to my editor. This time I attached the file with the
warning that although the teaser chapter one was in perfect shape but the
second and third chapters would be extensively rewritten…since there were two
more characters to add to them, and the other chapters should be fairly static
in terms of major changes. The text didn’t even have chapter breaks included
and had notes to myself included throughout.
At this point, though, it’s more of a trust issue—I know that she knows
that I’m not going to turn in something like that in January. So it’s easier to send it.
I
also sent along, at her request, pictures of quilts that were similar to ones
that I was writing into the story.
Honestly, I’ve never had a problem with a
cover that either Penguin or Midnight Ink has done—they tend to do beautiful
covers. I’ve heard horror stories from
other traditionally published writers about covers they’ve had and how they
feel the covers affected the sales of their books. I’m sure if I’d gone through a horrible
experience, I would be a lot more
involved in the process, except…well, I don’t know what I’m doing. I only know what I like and don’t like.
For both my other Penguin series and the
Midnight Ink book, the covers were done and it was more of a fait accompli
and I was asked afterward if I had any changes or if I approved of
them. So I didn't have the input on those
covers…and I will say that I think this is a lot more the case with most of the
big publishers…my experience with my editor and this series is more the
exception than the rule.
For my own self-pubbed books, I’ve taken
a page from my publisher’s book and branded the series as well as I could,
especially for using a couple of different cover designers …most recently Scarlett
Rugers. I have the sweet scene and the element of danger. And no images of people on the cover—there’s
never been a person on any of my covers so I won’t start now. Well, there’s been a dead person’s hand. That’s as close to human as has been on a
cover. I try primarily to make sure that
the color scheme used and the setting tell readers that there’s a new book in
my series…and that it’s the same series.
The difference with the self-pub is that
I think my designers have a sense of relief that I’m not trying to backseat
drive with the covers—I’ll throw in what I’m looking for and pick my
favorite design…maybe ask for small changes. But that’s the thing—I’m no
designer and I have no time to try to become one. I’d rather be writing more books.
But I do want it to look good in
thumbnails. I do want the
thumbnail-sized image to clearly belong to the rest of the series. And I want both my name and my series name
to be obvious on the cover—I need readers to find my books.
This is
how I start the cover process for the self-pubbed books:
I ask if they’re backed up. This is
important—if they are significantly backed-up, I’ll need to use someone else.
I give them the sales copy/back cover
copy that I’ve written for the book.
I give them a paragraph of ideas for
setting the cover. For the book that
came out in August, I emailed: “The cover scene could be set in a backyard.
We could consider using a croquet set or croquet mallet as the murder
weapon/dangerous object to indicate it's a mystery. Since the murder occurs
during a party, we could show a cocktail or wine glass spilled over on the
patio furniture, or a broken high heel...something like that.”
I attach pictures of the other books in
the series, if the designer hasn’t worked with me before.
I tell them what precisely I need in
terms of format. These days, I say: “I'm
interested in an ebook cover (the book will run on Nook, Kindle, iTunes,
Smashwords), a print cover (spine and back cover for CreateSpace), and an
audiobook cover for ACX.”
I give the ISBNs and the price to be
printed on the cover of the CreateSpace project.
That’s pretty much it. Then I field any questions from the designer.
(I do maintain a free database of cover
designers and other self-publishing professionals here
if you’re looking for a place to start.)
If you’re published, how involved were
you in the process? Does you genre have
a standard “feel” for its covers? If
you’re not yet published, how interested are you in being part of the cover
design?
Published on October 22, 2013 21:01
October 20, 2013
What's Important in a Story
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

I was going through my blog reader
recently and came across an interesting post from writer Jeff Cohen: “Stuff
Not to Do” on the Hey,
There’s a Dead Guy in the Living Room blog.
The whole article was good, but the part that particularly caught my eye
was this:
“Don't
decide on the crime and then create a character to fit it. Character
comes first. The crime is the bait; it's what Alfred Hitchcock called "the
MacGuffin," something the people in your book are desperate about but the
reader should find secondary. Your characters are first. Write characters the reader
cares about one way or another, and you're halfway home. Killing someone with a
guillotine in the middle of Indiana isn't the key to your book.”
I thought Jeff nailed it.
I don’t know how long it took me to
figure this out, but it was a while. I
thought, since I was being paid to write mysteries, that my primary focus was
that mystery…for you, it might be the magic in your fantasy or the science in
your science fiction. It was very
important to me to get my clues, red herrings, motives, murders, and solution
perfectly written. And I think I did a
good job with that. But one day, one of
my editors told me, “Elizabeth, your mystery is very sound. But what your readers particularly care about
is the characters. What’s going on with them? I’d like to see more of what they’re up to in
between the time while they’re working on the case.”
When I was starting out my series, I thought that the interpersonal
relationships of my characters, their problems, what was going on in their
non-mystery-solving lives was interesting to me,
but I wasn’t sure if my editors were going to perceive it as filler that needed
to be edited out. After all, wasn’t I
deviating from the plot—the mystery?
Then I realized that the in-between stuff was the way I was connecting
to my readers—the characters were pulling them into my story. Readers had purchased my book in order to
read about my characters…who just happened to be solving a murder mystery while
my readers caught up with their lives.
In some ways, the subplots that developed my characters and hooked
readers were just as important as the A Plot—the mystery itself.
I can write a 45,000 word book that’s
solely the mystery. That’s as long as it
takes to introduce suspects, outline the crime, and focus on an investigation
and a puzzle and a solution. But that’s only the puzzle—straight mystery. Adding in the subplots, the personal
interaction between characters, their conflicts, the way the mystery affects
them…this adds in about 30,000 more words.
It’s not fluff, either—it’s character development. It’s all about hooking the readers with the
character personalities.
Why would readers read my mystery,
otherwise? They wouldn’t care about the
victim (who is frequently a nasty personality anyway), they wouldn’t have
enough information to identify with or pull for the sleuth, and the
suspects…well, they’re all suspected of murder.
To hook readers, you have to make them care about all of the
characters—even the victim. The reader
has to care enough to want this case to be solved and to solve it alongside the
protagonist. To help out.
This is true with any genre. As Jeff Cohen put it, the genre functions as
the MacGuffin. It’s not all about the romance or paranormal aspects of a
story’s creatures, the science fiction or the fantasy. Those function as just the premise that lures
readers of that genre to our books. Most
popular books are popular because of the characters populating them.
As a reader and writer, how important are
the characters to you? How do you enrich
the story by revealing more about them while still keeping up your story’s pace
and keeping to your genre restrictions?
Published on October 20, 2013 21:01
October 19, 2013
Twitterific
By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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Published on October 19, 2013 21:01