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November 19, 2016

Writing - The unexpected

Having completed my 10th Steele novel I decided to take some remedial action. If you have written much you will have undoubtedly come across that like every repeated activity you improve. I had a look at my first Steele novel, 'I Have To Get It Right' and frankly was appalled. It was naive and riddled with errors so I decided to do something about it.

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My first step was to commit the book to Amazon Prime and then to start re-formatting, correcting and re-writing. It is a slow process but the outcome will be something that I'm happier with rather than the current turkey that it is. There are all kinds of excuses I could make but in fact writing the book was a positive step in that it got me started on the journey.

In fact the book in its raw state is FREE on Amazon until Monday. 
The next step is to continue the re-write then change the title. It will be 'Steele Begins' published on Createspace (Amazon). I will market it under Prime. Watch this space.

At the current time there is the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.


Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 19, 2016 10:05

November 18, 2016

Writing - Keep the customers satisfied

When I write it is to satisfy a need within me and with little regard to a clientele or customer base. In other words a luxury. Not all have that facility and tend to need to tailor their writing accordingly. 
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In the words of the song of the same name as the post title,
And I'm one step ahead of the shoe shine
Two steps away from the county line
Just trying to keep my customers satisfied,

I just hope that other writers are afforded the opportunity to write from their hearts and not their wallets.


At the current time there is the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 18, 2016 11:15

November 17, 2016

Writing - A new outlet

The really big sticking point if you are trying to make money from writing is the sales and marketing aspect. On a personal level my least favourite task. One thing that definitely helps is word of mouth. In fact that has been going quite well this time with 7 Hours After 

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I have new friends that run the newsagents in the centre of town from which my hero, Patrick Steele, bases his actions. This was just a casual conversation and the owner offered to display my books. A great opportunity from a chance meeting.
Obviously there are the usual channels through which works can be advertised - social media, local news, and so on, but I felt that such opportunities as the above could be golden.



At the current time there is the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 17, 2016 10:22

November 16, 2016

Poetry Thursday 238 - A momentary reality

The poetry this week is odd even if I do say so myself. It is an image of the way my mind was working at the time of writing. Fist of all I had been watching the BBC's Strictly Come Dancing.[image error]
Good is not enough
Sensational, outstanding, breathtaking, morebut never just good, it’s not enough.Brilliant, stupendous, magnificent or,good just not enough.
Over doing stuff is de rigueur,no room for mediocre or average.Exceptional performance, immense vigour,but being good – all you can manage?
It has to stop, there is dangerin overblown, extravagant adjectives.There’s only so far to adventurein the realm of verbiage descriptive.© David L Atkinson November 2016



Then there were the continual self-doubts.


What am I doing?
I’m sure that I’m doing no harm,sketching, writing, painting, poetry,encouraging the hidden artist to come out,I don’t claim to be better at anything,an enthusiast allowing the mind to go where it will.Freeing feelings to feed ideas expressed visually or literally!© David L Atkinson November 2016

Then there was the first advertisement for Christmas.

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Hey Mr. Santa
Hey Mr. Santa,don’t forget to come,I’ve done my best to be good,through the year almost done.
Hey Mr. Santa,forgive moments of weakness,I sometimes err when attention slips,not a failure of goodness.
Hey Mr. Santa,I’m only humanly fallible,the sins are quite small really,nothing awfully terrible.
Hey Mr. Santa,sorry for any mistakes,I know you promise to make a drop,A minute is all it takes.© David L Atkinson November 2016

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Published on November 16, 2016 10:22

November 15, 2016

Writing - Human frailty and stories

Films are one of my hobbies which is a bit of a cop out because all they really are stories on celluloid! I love stories. The basis for stories can literally be anything but quite often they stem from some frailty in a human.

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I have just been to view The Accountant starring Ben Affleck who plays the part of a mathematical savant come hitman/enforcer. It was an interesting mix and though not great, certainly entertaining.
Affleck's character had elements of my Patrick Steele. Steele is a man with compulsions bordering on the obsessive which underpins all of his adventures to a greater or lesser extent. Choosing the human frailty to write a story around isn't new but there are so many to choose from.
How about,a shoplifting detective?
an asthmatic cat burglar?
a wheelchair bound lawyer!!! (been done)
a private eye with one leg!!! (been done)
in fact there have been many versions but you have to select something with which you have some experience to elicit the best results.

At the current time there is the result of the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 15, 2016 10:55

November 14, 2016

Tuesday Food Blog - Katsu beef curry

In the constant round of trying to find something different to eat I have tried cuisines from many parts of the world via the supermarket!!!! This week I'm back to Japan for something slightly different, very tasty and very simple.

Katsu Beef Curry
Katsu is usually a cutlet of chicken covered in breadcrumbs and served with a curry sauce and rice. My version has stewing beef and vegetables. I cheated using a prepacked katsu curry block but then added my own ingredients.
Ingredients
100g Yutaka curry tray1 large onion, chopped800ml boiling watersalt and pepperstewing beef, cubedcarrots, dicedturnip, cubed
Method
Fry off the onion in a little oil with salt and pepper. When the onions have begun to clarify add the boiling water, bring back to the boil, add the tray of katsu curry and stir until it is all broken up. Simmer. In a separate pan brown the meat then add it to the simmering sauce along with the prepared vegetables. Simmer for a couple of hours and serve with rice.
In the case of using the curry sauce as intended, you cook the breaded chicken cutlet, prepare the sauce as above and serve on the side as a sauce rather than as a base for a curry dish. I found that the dish works very well as I prepared it and is very tasty. It is different to Indian curry but is very satisfying if you like curry.
This would work with most meats.

At the current time there is the result of the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 14, 2016 11:03

November 13, 2016

Writing - Here it is again

So which candidate is in power? Well it doesn't really matter in the context of this new book but in a sense the political aspects of this story point towards the nature of US politics.

7 Hours After hints at some of the background that Trump (Drumpf) may have been connected to indirectly or directly, but whatever there is a level of dissatisfaction with the political classes.


At the current time there is the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.

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Published on November 13, 2016 09:40

November 12, 2016

Writing - 10 things

Cosmic decisions.


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1. You can vote from space.

If you went to space why would you want to?


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2. People spend 1.3 years of their life on average deciding what to watch on television.

So some people spend time watching dogs chase their tales.


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3. The most common word in letters written by ordinary Americans to President Barack Obama is "help".

Always on the cadge.


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4. An average-sized condom should be able to hold 18 litres of air.

Has to be the most useless fact today.


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5. The budget for prison food in England and Wales is £2 per prisoner per day.

Similar to mine.


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6. Dogs might be genetically predisposed to be man's best friend.

Tell that to guard dogs.


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7. Most British tourists in the Spanish resort of Magaluf are on their first holiday without their families.

Sadsville


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8. Medical marijuana is legal in Florida - but it's also legal to sack someone from their job for using it.

That's a hard call.


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9. Women use the f-word more than men.

I wasn't brought up in a puritanical household but in an old-fashioned part of the world where ladies didn't swear in public and definitely not the 'f' word. It still isn't my favourite thing to hear girls swearing.


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10. The Chicago Cubs parade and rally after their baseball World Series victory may have been the seventh largest gathering in human history.

Congratulations.


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Published on November 12, 2016 09:20

November 11, 2016

Writing - Leonard Cohen a legend

I first came across Leonard Cohen in 1968 at a folk club where one of the acts covered Suzanne. I was so taken by the haunting nature of his words and the imagery that I went out and bought the album that included that track.

[image error]Leonard Cohen (1934 - 2016)
Leonard Norman Cohen, CC GOQ (21 September 1934 – 7 November 2016) was a Canadian singer, songwriter, poet and novelist. His work explored religion, politics, isolation, sexuality, and personal relationships. Cohen was inducted into both the Canadian Music Hall of Fame and the Canadian Songwriters Hall of Fame as well as the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. He was a Companion of the Order of Canada, the nation's highest civilian honour. In 2011, Cohen received one of the Prince of Asturias Awards for literature and the ninth Glenn Gould Prize.
The Academy of American Poets has commented more broadly on Cohen's overall career in the arts, including his work as a poet, novelist, and songwriter, stating that "Cohen's successful blending of poetry, fiction, and music is made most clear in Stranger Music: Selected Poems and Songs, published in 1993, which gathered more than 200 of Cohen's poems … several novel excerpts, and almost 60 song lyrics... while it may seem to some that Leonard Cohen departed from the literary in pursuit of the musical, his fans continue to embrace him as a Renaissance man who straddles the elusive artistic borderlines.
So Cohen was prolific in a number of literary fields. He wasn't everyone's cup of tea and I have had people say to me that what he produced was weird but in fact his words need to be studied. I am not personally familiar with his novels or poetry so I decided to do some research.
whose thighs are bound in casual red cloth,
comes thundering past my sitting place
like a forest-burning Mongol tribe,
the city is ravished
and brittle buildings of a hundred years
splash into the street;
and my eyes are burnt
for the embroidered Chinese girls,
already old,
and so small between the thin pines
on these enormous landscapes,
that if you turn your head
they are lost for hours.

I chose this poem because of the way he used imagery and simile to achieve the view he needed to convey to his readers. Many of his songs are similar in their obscure nature. My favourite still is Suzanne although Sisters of Mercy saw me through the dying of my mother.


Sisters of MercyLeonard CohenOh, the sisters of mercy, they are not departed or gone
They were waiting for me when I thought that I just can't go on
And they brought me their comfort and later they brought me this song
Oh, I hope you run into them, you who've been travelling so longYes, you who must leave everything that you cannot control
It begins with your family, but soon it comes around to your soul
Well, I've been where you're hanging, I think I can see how you're pinned
When you're not feeling holy, your loneliness says that you've sinnedWell, they lay down beside me, I made my confession to them
They touched both my eyes and I touched the dew on their hem
If your life is a leaf that the seasons tear off and condemn
They will bind you with love that's as graceful and green as a stem.
When I left they were sleeping, I hope you run into them soon,Don't turn on the lights you can read their address by the moonAnd you won't make me jealous if I hear that they sweetened your night,We weren't lovers like that and besides it would still be alright.We weren't lovers like that and besides it would still be alright.
RIP Leonard Cohen

Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.

Or click on the links below.
The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.
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Published on November 11, 2016 09:28

November 10, 2016

Writing - A portfolio stretched

So today I have updated my portfolio which you will see below. Also the book is live at Smashwords and you should look out for a give away this weekend.

Portfolio November 2016

7 Hours After hints at some of the background that Trump (Drumpf) may have been connected to indirectly or directly, but whatever there is a level of dissatisfaction with the political classes.


At the current time there is the presidential election in the USA and if you consider the electoral system there is undoubted connection back to the events of 9/11. There is the involvement of the security agencies, unexplained and precipitate actions by the US Government and a failure of security agencies to communicate knowledge with each other. Many of the same people are probably still in post 15 years later. So read 7 Hours After and allow your mind to wander freely and decide what is fact and what is fiction.

Synopsis
Patrick Steele is off crusading once again with his sidekick, fiancée Naomi Kobayashi. This time he is risking life and limb by returning to the hostile shores of the USA. He has had brushes with the authorities in that vast country on previous occasions, but now has been stimulated to return because of apparent dodgy dealings over the World Trade Centre disaster of September 11th 2001.After discovering numerous ‘theories’ concerning 9/11 and who was behind it, Steele identifies possible links between large corporations with financial interests and political parties. In a presidential election year he is concerned that those vying for that prodigious post may have links with the disaster.Has Steele discovered underhand dealing by the US security services? Did one of the major political parties have a hand in the destruction of 9/11?Will Steele be caught by the CIA or can he escape back to the safety of the UK?
What was Building 7?
Where can the books be bought?
amazon.co.uk
completelynovel.com
smashwords.com
In each case search under David L Atkinson, don't forget the 'L', and search through the available options to see all 11 novels.
Or click on the links below.

The Kindle copy available from amazon.co.uk will upload to devices supporting the Kindle App as well as Kindle devices so you can get this an all of my books on your smartphone.



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Published on November 10, 2016 09:52