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Less Wham-Bam, More Thank You Ma'am: ROW80

As promised last Wednesday in my New Adult Fears post, today it's all about the New Adult genre.

To summarize, my daughter recently inquired about New Adult... a new genre she'd heard about and noticed me reading. She reads all the time and prefers paranormal/fantasy. Basically, she's exhausted most of her YA options. She thought NA would be a solution. 

However, here's what I've discovered about NA.

So far it's basically adult romance. There, I said it. 

When I first saw "new" before adult, I thought it meant the target audience would be newer or almost adults (high schoolers). Since young adult is read by late elementary and early middle school students, I thought this would be a genre to bridge the gap between that and reading full adult books.

Not so. It's more that new = contemporary. Quite frankly, if these books are depicting 20-year-old romance today, my daughters are not allowed to leave the house until they are 35.

I don't want my 8th grader, almost 14, to be reading some of the sex scenes I've read in NA. From what I've read so far, it's romance light and kinky heavy. Some have bordered on erotica light. It's too much wham-bam and not enough thank-you-Ma'am. 

To clarify, I'm 41. I don't need every romance scene to be knight-in-shining-armor. That's unrealistic. But sex should be respectful and at least a little sweet. Right?

Another thing I don't need (for myself or my daughter)... the use of the F word for shock value only or as a sex come-on. Sure, if I drop a freaking cinder block on my foot, you are getting the F word. If I'm trying to land a date with some hot dude, not so much.

One last complaint... too often the writing is similar to YA (less details, word choice, less maturity) with just the aforementioned additions. Is NA simply a way to amp up YA sex and language?

Please note, I support all authors and know some great ones who write NA. It's just a confusing genre for me, particularly as a mom.

If I'm missing something, please let me know. And I might be a little old-fashioned, although I cringe at the word.

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A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) Update

It's Monday, and time for my check in. My family and I went to DC this weekend for my husband's brother's wedding. What fun! But I'm definitely in catch-up mode this week. My main goal is to focus on my Tala Prophecy novella. Wish me luck!

Oh, and I thought I'd share a picture of me and my three daughters from the wedding.

8 Weeks by Bethany Lopez Cover Reveal & Giveaway

I'm so thrilled to host Bethany Lopez's cover reveal today. Not only is she an awesome indie, but she's someone who really gives back. Happy Friday!
8 Weeks by Bethany LopezCover Reveal

Title: 8 Weeks
Author: Bethany Lopez
Publication Date: March 24, 2014
Summary: Is eight weeks enough time to earn back the love of someone you've betrayed...the only one you've ever loved?

Shelly has been in love with Cal since they started dating in eleventh grade. Despite everyone saying that the odds were against them, they got married after graduation and built a life together. Now, six years later, she is faced with the ultimate betrayal. Devastated, her first instinct is to call it quits…

After a drunken binge at his best friends’ bachelor party, Cal betrays the one person who has always been there for him, his wife, Shelly. Terrified and realizing she might divorce him, Cal must come up with a way to prove to her that his love is true…

Cal asks Shelly for eight weeks. Eight weeks to convince her that their marriage is worth the fight. Will Shelly be able to trust him again, or will their marriage end the way many others do when faced with opposition… In divorce?

About Bethany Lopez: Award-Winning Author Bethany Lopez began self-publishing in June 2011. Since then she has published various YA and NA books. She is a lover of romance, family, and friends, and enjoys incorporating those things in what she writes. When she isn't reading or writing, she loves spending time with her husband and children, traveling whenever possible.

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New Adult Fears: ROW80

Since I was in high school NOT that many years ago, I'm hyperventilating that my oldest daughter will go to high school in the fall. It's so strange that she's aging twice as fast as I am. *smiles*

As if it's not bad enough that I'll be attending several upcoming meetings about her future (and what classes will lead to said future), I've been noticing a lot of other growing up signs. *sniff, sniff*

My oldest loves to read. In addition, she's an advanced reader. She's been reading Young Adult for almost four years. At first, I pre-read every book to determine if it was appropriate. After a while, I trusted her judgement. She's a great kid with a good head on her shoulders. 

Now she wants to move into New Adult. I have some very intense feelings about this. I understand that some of the YA is on the younger end, and she's exhausted a lot of the options thanks to her veracious reading habits.

She loves paranormal/fantasy, but she doesn't like a lot of romance. So far, the NA books I've read have been focused on amping up the sex. Quite frankly, some of the supposed YA books are way too focused on that subject matter. Not okay for my almost 14 year old. (I so sound like a fuddy-duddy -- wait, that word choice didn't help, did it?)

I'd love to hear from other parents, and New Adult authors, about the genre. What do you like/not like about it? Is it really just a glorified adult book?

Please check back on Monday, 2/24/14, for my thoughts on the NA genre from a mother's point of view. I want to devote an entire post to the topic. 

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Wednesdays are my A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) check ins. 

I am considering entering the Amazon Breathrough Novel Award , but I have to admit I'm pretty freaked out by the "pitch" portion. Any advice from authors who've gone before me? 

My blurb is coming along slowly, so I'm sure that's why the pitch idea is so terrifying. Why is it easier to write an entire novel than to summarize it in a marketable way? ARGH!

Cover Reveal for Promise Me Forever by Sarah Ashley Jones & Giveaway

We join Grapevine Book Tours in presenting the new cover for:

Cover designed by Okay Creations
Promise Me Forever
by Sarah Ashley Jones
Promise Me Forever #1.5
Publication: March 17th, 2014
New Adult Contemporary Romance | Novella



Charlie Jennings and Jhett Hudson knew that a single moment could change everything.

It took them one song to find each other, one question to give them a chance, one kiss to fall in love, and one night to almost lose it all. But they had one thing other couples lack—pure, unconditional love—and that takes more than a moment to walk away from.

Falling in love is only the beginning. Forever is what happens next.





 


Sarah Ashley Jones

Her Website | Facebook | Twitter | Google+ | Pinterest | GoodreadsSarah Ashley Jones was raised in San Diego, California, but currently wrangles her husband and three dogs in Clarksville, Tennessee. When she’s not writing she works in a pottery studio and comes home covered in paint on a daily basis. She has a slightly unhealthy obsession with cupcakes and chapstick. She is an eternal optimist and can often be found dancing and singing to music at any given time. It’s rare to see her not smiling or laughing, but if you do, just bring her a cupcake and it will cheer her up. Her huge imagination was always in overdrive as a child and now she is beyond excited to put it to good use as an adult. She plans to write as long as she has stories that need to be told.Three (3) eBooks of Promise Me Forever (and book one, Promise Me This) by Sarah Ashley Jones {INT}a Rafflecopter giveaway Cover reveal organized by

Writing Competition, Souls of Indie & ROW80 Update

Happy Monday. I have stuff to share today.
First, a great opportunity to enter a short story contest for a low fee ($10 per entry) and nice prizes ($100 to the winner, $50 to the runner up). Check out the Pamlico Writers Writing Competition .
Deadline: February 23, 2014
Information (for further details, visit here ):

Who May Enter: Any adult writer (age 18 or over).The High School Category is for students in Grades 9-12 ONLY.Members of the current Steering Committee, Jurors, and Workshop Presenters WILL NOT participate in the competition.What You May Enter:Your entry must be your original work. You must own all publication rights (i.e., the work must never have been published in a manner in which you gave away your rights). You generally do not give away rights when the work is published on the Internet. You may, as when you are not paid, retain all rights whenever you have published the work in a conventional way.Entries flaunting degrading sexual and physical violence or espousing extreme political views will not be considered for judging at the discretion of the contest juror.There are five contest categories:Fiction Creative Non-fiction Young Adult Poetry High School Second, an amazing deal on 5 full-length novels...
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Mondays are also my A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) check in days. 
After completing my second round of edits on Chasing Shadows, I needed to play quite a bit of catch up on everything from blog posts to taxes. Now, I'm working on Chasing Forgiveness, a Tala Prophecy novella, while I'm waiting for CS to come back. Plus, I need to finish my Acknowledgements and back cover summary. 
Wishing everyone a great week!

Dauntless Indies, A Collection of Shorts: FREE eBook 2/14 & 2/15

Happy Valentine's Day!
Wishing everyone a sweet day surrounded by loved ones, and spreading the news about a wonderful freebie today...

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- Beyond Dusk: Anne - Anne Fontaine recently discovered the life she grew up in was a lie. She must step outside the world she knows to learn more about who she is...including this terrible, inexplicable ability she was born with

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- Masked Encounters - Korah Daniels has been through a lot in her nineteen years. Broken hearts, abusive relationships, and horrid dates have caused her to doubt love. Dane Davidson is the worst kind of playboy. The ultimate frat boy, drinking and ending up with a different girl every night. The two meet one fateful Halloween night, changing their lives forever.
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A Bad Bubba: ROW80

I've been in my editing cave for days.

What began as a small plot hole developed into a bigger one. Fixing it required my Muse who in turn had strong feelings about how to further improve the story.

It was like that string on a shirt that you pull. Sometimes it comes right off. Other times, you pull and half the shirt unravels.

SourceChasing Shadows is back with the amazing Jo Michaels . Although the editing process is draining, it's what keeps us all from having rough drafts forever lingering on our computers.

As my youngest always says, I've been a bad bubba. I missed my Sunday A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) update (and technically Wednesday since this is late) thanks to editing. 

As a reward for getting closer to publication, I'm playing around with cover images. Yeah, the fun stuff. 

Next up: a blurb. Not so fun!

What do you think is the most important part of a successful blurb? Any help is greatly appreciated.

Cover Confusion

Let me preface my thoughts by saying I read a lot (roughly 100 books a year). Plus, I'm a mom to three. I can't always count on my brain to remember what I have read. 
It makes me crazy that books in a series don't have numbers on them to help me out. A simple 1, 2, 3, etc on the bottom of the binder or even within the book would be extremely helpful. 
My cynical mind wonders if big publishing houses choose to leave off the numbers so poor, helpless, overwhelmed people like myself will simply make a mistake and repurchase the book. But, I'm going to blame that on my cynicism. 
Still, please, I beg my fellow authors, do not confuse me even further by making the covers look too similar. I understand the importance of complimentary covers in a series, but each one should be distinctive. 
For example, I recently received the first three books of a series to review. The first book was blue and stood out, but books two and three were so confusing. 

Two hot guys with orange backgrounds (the exact same color, although the picture is a bit off) with one word F titles. If I had seen book three in the store, I would have assumed I already read it and kept moving. It's just too similar. The back covers didn't help, either.

Please tell me I'm not crazy!
Do you have any cover pet peeves or preferences?

Mystified by Marketing: #IWSG & ROW80

The  Insecure Writer's Support Group  (or IWSG) is a wonderful group put together by the amazing Alex J. Cavanaugh (which now has an equally cool Facebook group ). 

The first Wednesday of each month is the perfect opportunity to share my insecurities on the #IWSG therapy couch, get encouragement and support about such insecurities, and to read how other writers are faring. 

Today, it's more about my marketing insecurities.

With each book, I grow as a writer. But, I can't say I know all that much more about marketing. Or at least effective marketing. 

I watch my peers, read marketing blogs, and dissect marketing books. I follow the advice, but so far I'm not seeing much in the way of results. Or to be more blunt... dollars. How else can I measure marketing success?

I recently ran a free promotion--a concept that still confounds me--and did quite well. I reached number #1 in two categories and #36 overall in the Kindle Free Store. After, I saw a slight increase in sales and four reviews (all 4 or 5). What?


This book, Chasing Memories, is the first in a planned series (plus a novella). Did I gain some readers that will buy my upcoming release, Chasing Shadows? I hope so.
I've done giveaways, cross-promotions, and spent countless hours on Facebook, Twitter, and blogging to build an author platform. 
What am I missing?
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Wednesdays are also my A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) update days. I am almost done with the Chasing Shadows edits. I'm on the second read-through and should be done by Thursday. I was hoping to be done yesterday, but I've had a very sick dog (spent way too many hours in a Vet's office) and late input from a hubby reader (can't just call him a beta).
Hope all my ROW80 and IWSG buddies are having a great week!

How Editing is Like Sleep: ROW80

My husband received a Fitbit® for Christmas. At first, I didn't think I needed one. I'm active, I told myself (and him). I exercise at least 3-4 times a week. 

Not good enough according to Fit Bit. And a lot of days I sit for long periods stuck at a computer. Seeing how hard it was for him to meet his goal (30 active minutes and 5 miles a day of total walking), I decided to jump on the bandwagon.

Man, I didn't realize how hard it was to hit those targets on days where I needed to keep my butt in the chair. But I've made little tweaks to my daily routine to include walking my daughter to school and taking a run after. Overall, I feel less stressed and more eager to hit the computer when I get back.

Another feature of Fitbit® is measuring your sleep pattern (both total sleep and restlessness). My last report...


When I saw this, my first thought was no wonder I'm so tired when I wake up. But my second thought... that's how I feel when I'm editing.

I start off raring to go, then I hit a spot where I can't figure it out. Frustration and a need for sugar often result before I find my groove again. That was today. Off and on emotions... 

I rocked that scene.
I'm never going to get this scene right.
Why won't this character tell me what he/she is thinking?
Why won't another character shut up?
What's the word I want? ARGH!
That's pretty good. Did I write that?
Oh my God, did I write that?

Off and on. It can be exhausting. 

And that's my A Round of Words in 80 Days (ROW80) progress in a nutshell. Editing Chasing Shadows. As a side note, I filed my quarterly sales tax return and wrote a few blog posts during those "need a break" moments. Not too bad.

What's the craziest thought you ever had while editing?