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August 10, 2016
Memories of What Never Was Chapter 32
Soooooooooooooo, done with Chapter 32 of Memories of What Never Was. If you feel the great urge to read it, you can find it at the bottom of this page.
Some character building here. I also wanted to reference Ghostbusters with the stairs, but without using the exact line, and Raven dropping the F bomb at the end is a bit of an inside joke for me. In previous versions of this story he was death on anyone using bad language. It just made me laugh to toss that in as a joke where I'm pretty much the only one that will get it.
Some character building here. I also wanted to reference Ghostbusters with the stairs, but without using the exact line, and Raven dropping the F bomb at the end is a bit of an inside joke for me. In previous versions of this story he was death on anyone using bad language. It just made me laugh to toss that in as a joke where I'm pretty much the only one that will get it.
July 27, 2016
Memories of What Never Was Chapter 31
I've finished up Chapter 31 of Memories of What Never Was and you can find it at the bottom of this page if you feel the great urge.
This chapter is where the characters meet and fight one of the villains of the story for the first time. So far, this chapter contains more existing text from the previous version than any other chapters before it, but the chapter itself is still significantly changed from the original. There are also several clues that I added in as to how this particular villain will be defeated, and how the time loop that the world is stuck in will ultimately be broken.
I also made a few small edits to chapter 29 and 30, which I've re uploaded. They're pretty small. And probably unnoticeable to anyone but me, but I'm kind of a little OCD about continuity mistakes and can't rest until I've fixed them.
This chapter is where the characters meet and fight one of the villains of the story for the first time. So far, this chapter contains more existing text from the previous version than any other chapters before it, but the chapter itself is still significantly changed from the original. There are also several clues that I added in as to how this particular villain will be defeated, and how the time loop that the world is stuck in will ultimately be broken.
I also made a few small edits to chapter 29 and 30, which I've re uploaded. They're pretty small. And probably unnoticeable to anyone but me, but I'm kind of a little OCD about continuity mistakes and can't rest until I've fixed them.
