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November 6, 2017
NaNo Day 6
Did 6390 words today, which brings my total up to 25,485. I'm over halfway there, and it's only day 6. Woohoo. The total manuscript is currently at 51537 words, since I did have around 26k already written before the start of November. It's looking like this book is going to end up right on target between 80k and 90k words. I've got just a couple more chapters before I start gearing up for the climax, a huge battle scene, followed by some funky time travel mischief. Which is kind of the opposite order from the original version of this story, but I figured it worked better with the new version to swap them, since I have cut out nearly half the cast. There's nothing I need those cast members to be doing while the ones I kept are off saving the universe. Anyway, it looks like I'm definitely going to finish NaNo this year. So yay for that. Tomorrow is my normal day off, so I'll try to knock out another big chunk then too.
November 5, 2017
NaNo Day 5
2276 words today. Better than yesterday, but again, didn’t have much time today between church and a family dinner at my parents’ house. I know it’s probably bad, but I spent the whole 3 hours of church completely zoned out thinking through what I was going to write when I got home. I didn’t hear a single spiritual word the whole time. Shame on me XD. Tomorrow I’m off work for a followup appointment for my surgery last month, so I should have plenty of time to crank out a bunch of writing tomorrow. I’m getting into an easier section of the story to write, so I should be able to get a least a few thousand words.
I usually find the quieter, more character driven moments the easiest to write. It’s the larger action-y parts that take a lot of time and meticulous effort, because there are a lot of extra details that you normally wouldn’t care about that have to go into them. But two characters talking with each other about what drives them, I can do that all day long. Heck, half of what I’ve already written for this book is characters taling with each other about what drives them. I usually end up just stretching those types of conversations out to ridiculous length, and then i go through later and trim it down, leaving in just the best, most relevant bits. It’s usually nice to be able to pick and choose. I like this line from him, I like that response from her, let’s put ‘em together and delete the rest and there we go. You can’t really do taht with action scenes. You have to already have a pretty good idea what is going to happen in an action scene, and exactly how all of the elements come together. I can spend a whole hour just getting a single paragraph done because I’m having trouble getting across exactly what character A is doing to character B. I usually already have it pretty well mapped out in my head before I write it, so I usually get them done really fast, but every now and then I hit a snag where something doesn’t feel right, or something doesn’t really gel with the rest of it, and I have to sit there and work through it and it takes a lot of time. You don’t really get that with character building conversations.
And I’m rambling. It’s past midnight. I think I’ll go to bed before I say something stupid.
I usually find the quieter, more character driven moments the easiest to write. It’s the larger action-y parts that take a lot of time and meticulous effort, because there are a lot of extra details that you normally wouldn’t care about that have to go into them. But two characters talking with each other about what drives them, I can do that all day long. Heck, half of what I’ve already written for this book is characters taling with each other about what drives them. I usually end up just stretching those types of conversations out to ridiculous length, and then i go through later and trim it down, leaving in just the best, most relevant bits. It’s usually nice to be able to pick and choose. I like this line from him, I like that response from her, let’s put ‘em together and delete the rest and there we go. You can’t really do taht with action scenes. You have to already have a pretty good idea what is going to happen in an action scene, and exactly how all of the elements come together. I can spend a whole hour just getting a single paragraph done because I’m having trouble getting across exactly what character A is doing to character B. I usually already have it pretty well mapped out in my head before I write it, so I usually get them done really fast, but every now and then I hit a snag where something doesn’t feel right, or something doesn’t really gel with the rest of it, and I have to sit there and work through it and it takes a lot of time. You don’t really get that with character building conversations.
And I’m rambling. It’s past midnight. I think I’ll go to bed before I say something stupid.
November 4, 2017
NaNo Day 4
1674 words today, got people over to marathon Stranger Things 2 though, so bit busy with other stuff today. Still hit the daily goal though, so all is well.
November 3, 2017
NaNo Day 3
Didn't get as much writing done today as the last two days. It was a pretty harsh day at work, and I got home pretty exhausted. 1909 words today. Still above the NaNo daily goal of 1667 words per day though, and at 15,145 total words, I'm at 300% of the day 3 suggested word total, so I'm doing fine. Still looking good to finish up before the end of the month.
November 2, 2017
NaNo Day 2
Did even better today than I did yesterday. 6792 words. Which brings my total up to 13,366. I’ve passed the 25% mark in just two days. Nice. The whole manuscript so far is just short of 40k words. I did use some more text from the other version today, because I felt that one of the action scenes I went through today was relatively well done in the original version. I did make quite a few tweaks to it, but I still didn’t cheat and count it as part of my word count for the day. I feel that the action scenes I did today are a lot more impactful in this version of the story, because the characters are a lot more developed in this version. Which is definitely a good thing. I don’t know if I’m going to be able to top today’s word count tomorrow, but we’ll see.
November 1, 2017
NaNo Day 1
So, November is National Novel Writing Month, a self-competition where you’re challenged to write 50,000 words of a novel in a single month. I usually try to participate in this every year, but the last few work has gotten in the way. This year, however, I’ve got a great story that I’m really ready to write, my work load has slacked off a bit, giving me some actual free time to write in, and things are looking good for me to get the whole 50k this year.
So, the book I’m writing this year is a complete rewrite of Spires of Infinity. Spires had a lot of problems. I mean a LOT of problems. As I said in a previous blog post, I took a look back at it, and now that I’m distanced from it by a few years, I could see all of the things that were wrong, and exactly what I needed to do to fix it. I basically kept the first one page chapter, and dumped all the rest. I’m basically rewriting the entire thing from scratch, because very little of the old text is really usuable in the new version of the story. Many characters and storylines have been cut completely, giving me a lot more room to better develop the personalities, backstories, and motivations of the characters I’m keeping. A lot of the basic plot structure is the same, but this will be a very, very different book in the end.
So, I already had 26,154 words of this rewrite written before NaNo started. Today I ended up with 32,598, for a first day total of 6444 words written. The daily goal for NaNo is 1667 words per day to reach the 50k by the end of the month, so I am off to a great start. I am focused more on writing than I am on formatting, spell-checking, and posting what I’ve written on my website at the moment, but I do expect to start posting some chapters of the first draft of this rewrite sometime this month if anyone cares to read my terrible first draft. My first drafts usually lack a lot of descriptive elements, are usually chalk full of continuity errors, and lacking a bit in character personality and distinction. Those are things I usually add in later during the editing process. I usually use my first draft to get the basic framework of the story put together so I have something to tinker and work with throughout the rest of my editing process. So, in short, if I do post chapters and you do read them, they’re probably not going to be very good or very well written, because I haven’t polished them up yet.
Anyway, I’ve got big plans for day two. A nice big cluster of action scenes. Those usually go by pretty fast and easy for me, so I should hopefully be able to at least match today’s word count.
So, the book I’m writing this year is a complete rewrite of Spires of Infinity. Spires had a lot of problems. I mean a LOT of problems. As I said in a previous blog post, I took a look back at it, and now that I’m distanced from it by a few years, I could see all of the things that were wrong, and exactly what I needed to do to fix it. I basically kept the first one page chapter, and dumped all the rest. I’m basically rewriting the entire thing from scratch, because very little of the old text is really usuable in the new version of the story. Many characters and storylines have been cut completely, giving me a lot more room to better develop the personalities, backstories, and motivations of the characters I’m keeping. A lot of the basic plot structure is the same, but this will be a very, very different book in the end.
So, I already had 26,154 words of this rewrite written before NaNo started. Today I ended up with 32,598, for a first day total of 6444 words written. The daily goal for NaNo is 1667 words per day to reach the 50k by the end of the month, so I am off to a great start. I am focused more on writing than I am on formatting, spell-checking, and posting what I’ve written on my website at the moment, but I do expect to start posting some chapters of the first draft of this rewrite sometime this month if anyone cares to read my terrible first draft. My first drafts usually lack a lot of descriptive elements, are usually chalk full of continuity errors, and lacking a bit in character personality and distinction. Those are things I usually add in later during the editing process. I usually use my first draft to get the basic framework of the story put together so I have something to tinker and work with throughout the rest of my editing process. So, in short, if I do post chapters and you do read them, they’re probably not going to be very good or very well written, because I haven’t polished them up yet.
Anyway, I’ve got big plans for day two. A nice big cluster of action scenes. Those usually go by pretty fast and easy for me, so I should hopefully be able to at least match today’s word count.
October 23, 2017
The Doctor Who Genderswap controversy
So, I was pretty excited a few months ago for Doctor Who news. Not because of the announcement of a new Doctor, but because of the announcement of the departure of Steven Moffat as show runner. In my opinion the man was an absolute poison to the series. He completely destroyed it, turning it into a silly, nonesensensical mess with very little in the way of plot or enjoyment. He doesn't seem to know how to tell a coherrent story, how to write decent characters with clear motivations, or to follow through with any of his promises. He also lacks a clear understanding of the concept of a climax. I have not seen the BBC try so hard to kill Doctor Who since the Colin Baker era. Keeping this guy around for so long was incredibly damaging to the credibility of the series, such as it is, as a hard sci-fi adventure. Moffat doesn't write stories or characters. He writes scenes that he thinks are cool, and then strings them together, typically in a way that makes as little sense as possible. He ignores previous character traits and motivations to fit characters into his loose collection of scenes. And he absolutely disrespects Doctor Who's history. I checked out at the end of Capaldi's first season. I just couldn't deal with Moffat's writing ADHD anymore. And I just could not watch a show that did not respect where it came from. He took the corpse of the Brigadier, a much beloved character from the old series, and turned it into a cyberman. That was the point where I said, "NO MORE!!!"
Anyway, enough about that. So I was very excited that we were getting a new show runner. Now that Moffat is on his way out, the future of Doctor Who is looking much brighter. And then came the announcement of who would play the new regeneration of the Doctor. A woman. I actually thought it was a pretty cool idea, and was interested to see how it would play out. I seem to be in the minority on that one. Personally, I don't really care who plays the doctor, so long as the writing is decent. Every single Doctor has great episodes that are very well written. Every single Doctor has terrible episodes that are painful to watch, though some have more than others. Yes, I will admit that even Matt Smith and Peter Capaldi had decent episodes that I enjoyed. Unfortunately, again, because of the writing and the leadership of Steven Moffat, those episodes are extraordinarily few and very far between. What makes a good Doctor Who story, for me, is not the actor playing the part, it's the story itself. Is it a good story? Does it come to a satisfying conclusion? Does it really use the concept of the series to its fullest? Does it offer great character moments? These are the questions I ask, not is the Doctor played by whichever of these dozen plus actors? I mean, who can forget the moment when Tom Baker decided not to destroy the Daleks before they were created? The time when Patrick Troughton humored Jaimie and Zoe in their escape attempt from Galifrey, knowing it was doomed to failure? The time when Peter Davidson sacrificed himself so that Peri would live? These were unforgettable moments that were less about the actor playing the part, and more about the character himself, making hard decisions based on who he was as a person. Personally, I think having the Doctor regenerate into a female body will provide for a deeper exploration of what it really means to BE the Doctor, which seems like a pretty fascinating direction that the series could go into.
Now, I understand that there are a lot of politics at play here. A lot of people see this casting choice as a very political decision by the new show runner, trying to force ideas of feminism etc etc etc into a show that, frankly, really shouldn't be about that sort of thing. A lot of people are mad and afraid about that, thinking that it will turn the show into a platform for gender politics rather than the sci-fi adventure that it's supposed to be. I've talked with a lot of fans of the series over the last few months about the change. And weirdly enough, amongst the people I've discussed it with, the people most opposed to the Doctor being a woman are women. That seems really weird to me. I mean, of all the people I thought would be excited over it, female fans were at the top of the list. Most of the men I've talked with seem pretty okay with it. Not all of them, of course. There are still a lot of men out there that are very opposed to the idea of the Doctor being a woman. But just from the people I've talked to about it, women seem more opposed to the idea of the Doctor being a woman than men do. It may be different in other circles, but in mine, that's the way things seem to be rolling.
I don't know how all of this will turn out. The new Doctor may be fantastic. She may be terribly miscast. Only time will tell. The new show runner may try to use the series to bludgeon us over teh head with gender politics. Or he might just try for some really fun and well written stories. All I can say about it is that no matter what, Steven Moffat, the cancer that was slowly destroying a series I have loved since my childhood, is gone, and that is cause for celebration. I am excited for a new show runner. I'm excited for a new incarnation of the Doctor. I don't really care about what gender the Doctor happens to be, so long as the Doctor is still the Doctor, and the writing is good. I would ask everyone who is feeling some, or maybe a lot, of apprehension over the decision to cast a woman as teh Doctor, to give it a chance before you start screaming obscenities. Wait and see if it works, before tearing it apart. It couldn't possibly be worse than what the series devolved into under Moffat. Just give it a chance before checking out. Who knows, you just might love it. Or it could be every bit as bad as you're dreading it will be. But you'll never know if you don't watch.
Anyway, enough about that. So I was very excited that we were getting a new show runner. Now that Moffat is on his way out, the future of Doctor Who is looking much brighter. And then came the announcement of who would play the new regeneration of the Doctor. A woman. I actually thought it was a pretty cool idea, and was interested to see how it would play out. I seem to be in the minority on that one. Personally, I don't really care who plays the doctor, so long as the writing is decent. Every single Doctor has great episodes that are very well written. Every single Doctor has terrible episodes that are painful to watch, though some have more than others. Yes, I will admit that even Matt Smith and Peter Capaldi had decent episodes that I enjoyed. Unfortunately, again, because of the writing and the leadership of Steven Moffat, those episodes are extraordinarily few and very far between. What makes a good Doctor Who story, for me, is not the actor playing the part, it's the story itself. Is it a good story? Does it come to a satisfying conclusion? Does it really use the concept of the series to its fullest? Does it offer great character moments? These are the questions I ask, not is the Doctor played by whichever of these dozen plus actors? I mean, who can forget the moment when Tom Baker decided not to destroy the Daleks before they were created? The time when Patrick Troughton humored Jaimie and Zoe in their escape attempt from Galifrey, knowing it was doomed to failure? The time when Peter Davidson sacrificed himself so that Peri would live? These were unforgettable moments that were less about the actor playing the part, and more about the character himself, making hard decisions based on who he was as a person. Personally, I think having the Doctor regenerate into a female body will provide for a deeper exploration of what it really means to BE the Doctor, which seems like a pretty fascinating direction that the series could go into.
Now, I understand that there are a lot of politics at play here. A lot of people see this casting choice as a very political decision by the new show runner, trying to force ideas of feminism etc etc etc into a show that, frankly, really shouldn't be about that sort of thing. A lot of people are mad and afraid about that, thinking that it will turn the show into a platform for gender politics rather than the sci-fi adventure that it's supposed to be. I've talked with a lot of fans of the series over the last few months about the change. And weirdly enough, amongst the people I've discussed it with, the people most opposed to the Doctor being a woman are women. That seems really weird to me. I mean, of all the people I thought would be excited over it, female fans were at the top of the list. Most of the men I've talked with seem pretty okay with it. Not all of them, of course. There are still a lot of men out there that are very opposed to the idea of the Doctor being a woman. But just from the people I've talked to about it, women seem more opposed to the idea of the Doctor being a woman than men do. It may be different in other circles, but in mine, that's the way things seem to be rolling.
I don't know how all of this will turn out. The new Doctor may be fantastic. She may be terribly miscast. Only time will tell. The new show runner may try to use the series to bludgeon us over teh head with gender politics. Or he might just try for some really fun and well written stories. All I can say about it is that no matter what, Steven Moffat, the cancer that was slowly destroying a series I have loved since my childhood, is gone, and that is cause for celebration. I am excited for a new show runner. I'm excited for a new incarnation of the Doctor. I don't really care about what gender the Doctor happens to be, so long as the Doctor is still the Doctor, and the writing is good. I would ask everyone who is feeling some, or maybe a lot, of apprehension over the decision to cast a woman as teh Doctor, to give it a chance before you start screaming obscenities. Wait and see if it works, before tearing it apart. It couldn't possibly be worse than what the series devolved into under Moffat. Just give it a chance before checking out. Who knows, you just might love it. Or it could be every bit as bad as you're dreading it will be. But you'll never know if you don't watch.
October 19, 2017
I think I might be alive... but I could be wrong...
So, I mean, it probably goes without saying, but, you know, having your toncils out at 38, yeah, that kinda sucks. Just a tad. Just before the surgery this nurse says to me, "I gave birth in my bathtub with no drugs or doctors, and I remember thinking after having my toncils out at 40, that I think I'd rather do that again instead. It hurt less." I was like, "gee, the rest of my week is really looking up now. Thanks for that." I have to go back to work in a week, I hope I feel better then than I do now. On the bright side, I lost like 15 lbs because I couldn't swallow anything for a week and a half. I put on pants for the first time in 2 weeks and they don't fit anymore.
October 4, 2017
Surgery, woooooo!!! Sarcasm, woooooo!!!
So I've been having really nasty sinu problems for quite a while now, and my doctor finally said, okay, nothing we've done has worked, let's do some sinus surgery and see if that will take care of it. He then called me the next day and was like, well, as long as we have you knocked out on the operating table, we might as well take out your toncils while we're at it. Hoo-freakin-ray. And then he called me the day after that and said, well, you know, you also have that deviated septum and all, and since we're going to be up your nose anyway, we might as well fix that too. So yesterday I had all three surgeries, and boy am I miserable. If an axe murderer broke into my apartment right now and offered to cut my head off for me, I'd probably thank him for it.
September 24, 2017
What I've been doing lately
So, work. That's a thing. They cut my route down to a reasonable size, and just 3 months later, it's huge again. *sigh*
Anyway, while working on a second draft of Memories of What Never Was, I took a look back on Spires of Infinity, and, well, I can see exactly what's wrong with it now. It's the same problem I've been complaining at Hollywood for the last few years about. They keep trying to make extended cinematic universes without setting anything up first. DC's cinematic Universe is probably the most famous what not to do story lately, but you've also had Sony's Spider-Man cinematic universe flop, Universal's Dark Universe also flop, Sony back again with their Ghostbusters cinematic universe flopping haaaaaaard. All of these things have one big problem in common. They're trying to build the universe, before telling a story. And that's the real problem with Spires of Infinity. I was trying to tell the bigger story that's happening outside of that book, rather than focusing on what that book was actually about. I tossed in all sorts of references to other stories I have swirling around in my head, and characters that didn't really belong in Spires just to connect it to other stories I was planning to write. And I never really put all that much effort into making solid characters and a good story for them to be participating in. It was all just sort of set up for other stories I wanted to tell.
So, while I'm editing Memories, I'm also sort of rewriting Spires on the side. There are several big problems with the original version of Spires that need to be fixed. First is that half the cast really has no business being part of the story. They, and their storylines, are gone. Second, most of the things that tie this story in with other stories I may write in the future have been removed. I left one of them in, because I can't figure a way to make the story work without it, but the rest of them are now gone. Third, I'm changing the core cast of characters to be more well rounded characters with solid pasts, personalities, and reasons for being who they are, and for doing what they're doing. Fourth, I'm getting rid of the talking cat, because, well, it's one of those things that seemed like a good idea at the time, but the more I think about it, the less it really fits into the story. I mean, there are a few pretty good jokes I made with it, but, it just doesn't really fit the story. With all the things I'm removing from the story, and all the other things I'm fleshing out, I hope to hit about 90,000 words with it, which is about the average length of a sci-fi book these days, rather than the 140,000 words that the original was, which is more in line with an epic fantasy book.
The original idea I had was to take a bunch of short stories I had previously written and mash them together into one big story, but that idea doesn't really work with the core story of Spires, either, so that aspect is gone now as well.
As NaNo is a little over a month away, I was thinking of powering through a big chunk of the new version of Spires of Infinity then, and may start posting some chapters from the first draft of the rewrite soon.
I also took some time off to write a Novella called Identity, which is about a routine time travel trip gone horribly wrong, and deals with questions of what makes us who we are? Is it the time and place we live in? Our bodies? Our minds? Our souls? Are we still the same person if we find ourselves trapped in another place, another time, and another body? I've been shopping it around to a few literary magazines, but had no offers on it yet. I may post that on my site soon as well.
Anyway, while working on a second draft of Memories of What Never Was, I took a look back on Spires of Infinity, and, well, I can see exactly what's wrong with it now. It's the same problem I've been complaining at Hollywood for the last few years about. They keep trying to make extended cinematic universes without setting anything up first. DC's cinematic Universe is probably the most famous what not to do story lately, but you've also had Sony's Spider-Man cinematic universe flop, Universal's Dark Universe also flop, Sony back again with their Ghostbusters cinematic universe flopping haaaaaaard. All of these things have one big problem in common. They're trying to build the universe, before telling a story. And that's the real problem with Spires of Infinity. I was trying to tell the bigger story that's happening outside of that book, rather than focusing on what that book was actually about. I tossed in all sorts of references to other stories I have swirling around in my head, and characters that didn't really belong in Spires just to connect it to other stories I was planning to write. And I never really put all that much effort into making solid characters and a good story for them to be participating in. It was all just sort of set up for other stories I wanted to tell.
So, while I'm editing Memories, I'm also sort of rewriting Spires on the side. There are several big problems with the original version of Spires that need to be fixed. First is that half the cast really has no business being part of the story. They, and their storylines, are gone. Second, most of the things that tie this story in with other stories I may write in the future have been removed. I left one of them in, because I can't figure a way to make the story work without it, but the rest of them are now gone. Third, I'm changing the core cast of characters to be more well rounded characters with solid pasts, personalities, and reasons for being who they are, and for doing what they're doing. Fourth, I'm getting rid of the talking cat, because, well, it's one of those things that seemed like a good idea at the time, but the more I think about it, the less it really fits into the story. I mean, there are a few pretty good jokes I made with it, but, it just doesn't really fit the story. With all the things I'm removing from the story, and all the other things I'm fleshing out, I hope to hit about 90,000 words with it, which is about the average length of a sci-fi book these days, rather than the 140,000 words that the original was, which is more in line with an epic fantasy book.
The original idea I had was to take a bunch of short stories I had previously written and mash them together into one big story, but that idea doesn't really work with the core story of Spires, either, so that aspect is gone now as well.
As NaNo is a little over a month away, I was thinking of powering through a big chunk of the new version of Spires of Infinity then, and may start posting some chapters from the first draft of the rewrite soon.
I also took some time off to write a Novella called Identity, which is about a routine time travel trip gone horribly wrong, and deals with questions of what makes us who we are? Is it the time and place we live in? Our bodies? Our minds? Our souls? Are we still the same person if we find ourselves trapped in another place, another time, and another body? I've been shopping it around to a few literary magazines, but had no offers on it yet. I may post that on my site soon as well.
