Erin’s Reviews > An Unremembered Grave > Status Update
Erin
is on page 45 of 290
There's a lot of sentence fragments. Could be an attempt at character voice, but it fails. Lots of rambling exposition that I feel could have been shown in better ways.
— Jun 16, 2016 07:32AM
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Erin
is on page 100 of 290
The editing errors seem to be less frequent as the book goes on. Kind of leery about this whole prison thing, though. It's supposed to be maximum security, but it's so lax??? This reminds me of middle schoolers writing fanfic about public highschools with dorms.
— Jun 25, 2016 06:36AM
Erin
is on page 16 of 290
Needs editing. Have found a decent number of tense & verbage errors and some missing punctuation. Still, it's interesting enough to forgive, for now.
— Jun 15, 2016 06:04AM
